Alice Garry is the most inconspicuous student at Hogwarts.
She has an ordinary appearance, average grades, and a shy personality. Even the dean of her own college would have to recall her name for three seconds when he saw her.
But such an ordinary witch fell in love with one of the most extraordinary wizards in her grade.
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She liked his high-spirited attitude on the Quidditch field; she also liked the way he scratched his head when he was troubled in class; and she liked even more the way he raised his eyebrows slightly when facing her confession.
"You said--" he asked, "-who are you?"
"Alice Garry, Alice of Hufflepuff," she said, "I just wanted to ask you, would you like to go with me to Hogsmeade Day this week?"
He looked confused, his masseter muscles tense, as if he was remembering who she was.
She started to panic and started to speak erratically.
"Please, George Weasley. I just made a bet that I had to ask you out once or I'd lose two galleons."
He paused slightly and suddenly smiled.
"No problem, Alice Garry," he said, "I, George Weasley, would love to hang out with you on Hogsmeade Day this week."
Just as her heart was pounding, he said again: "But you will get a Galleung from me."
At this moment, Alice's heart died for a moment.
Then, resurrect again with greater vitality.
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1. As you can see from the copy, it is a bloody, tacky, little story surrounded by love.
2. The male protagonist has been decided, the copywriting is visible, and he knows how to understand himself.
3. Reject personal attacks and writing guidance.
Purpose: Having a crush on Weasley
