Straight Men Are Obsessed with People Again

Finished spreading flowers! Let me first talk about a few points that I personally like. The first is the comments made by fans in the forum and barrage posts. They are very interesting and interesting, and it can be seen that the author is very good at writing these speeches. They are very immersive and must be emotionally invested. The second thing is that although Xiaoyang kills both men and women, there is no plot where the female characters compete with/attack females. It is very good, and Xiaoyang is a gentleman and gentle to girls. Thirdly, I really like Xiaoyang's behavior towards Lin Yinshi, a crazy man. He is not the kind who is molested/stalked but has no way to do anything about it. He will beat people with his own strength, although it makes him happy. . . This popular straight-male book has a lot of condensation and a lot of wife-calling plots, but without weakening the story, Xiaoyang is a normal male, with the ability to protect himself against wsn, and he does not rely on offense to get ahead. I think the most outstanding thing is those fans' speeches. The author is so good at writing. I laugh every time I see the [ ] part. . . There are also some scattered settings that I like very much, such as the brother who controls the younger brother and secretly pokes at the character, the low self-esteem and civility, the male god lamb baby, the speeches of fans who are friendly to lamb, etc. He is lucky to be in the top position of pxl, although he is indeed very aggressive and obedient. . Read the column. This is the author's first novel, and there is indeed room for improvement. Because the plot is about daily life, there is a long section in the middle of about ten chapters that I found a little boring. The most exciting part is the [ ] part. I would like to praise it again, but the plot is indeed a bit too daily and dragging. Then I feel that the emotional line is not very well controlled, just so-so. I feel that there is a lack of tension between Xiaoyang and pxl, just like a few donkeys competing to win the first place together, but he is indeed qualified to rise to the top. . Finally, another point is that Xiaoyang's career line is a bit strange. When I watched him play live games, I thought he would take the path of a game anchor. Qaq suddenly switched to gaming. There was no paving the way, but it is civilized to adopt Xiaoyang. . Realize one man has one sheep. The problem of lack of foreshadowing also occurs when new characters appear, such as Lin, who pretends to sing a sad song, but he appears suddenly, which is a bit stiff. The summary is that many of the settings are very good. Although the writing skills are insufficient, it is excusable because this is the author's first article. I look forward to improving next time! I still like your setting very much! Finally, a small suggestion is that the copywriting can be changed. The entire copywriting plot in the main text is more like a background board and a tool to promote the emotional line, rather than the content of the entire book. Moreover, the copywriting does not match the title of the book, which may result in not attracting the audience who like to watch heartthrobs.

My brother still admits it [sunglasses] are delicious.

Nice! Shouwen, a real heartthrob, sees that I feel comfortable both physically and mentally

I haven't been here for a long time and I just found out that it's finished. I had a great time watching it all night long! ! ! [Cat head][cat head][cat head] Let us, the little sheep, be happy forever.

When will the new article be published? I really want to read it [pink heart]

Finish spreading flowers! Xiaoyang, Pei Gou and their brother should be happy!

The little sheep should always be happy

The lamb is so charming, take a sip of bone soup [shy]

I want to read Yan Zhi's book [Let me be healthy] [Let me be healthy] [Let me be healthy]

香喷喷[害羞][害羞][紫糖]kswl[紫糖]kswl[紫糖]kswl

二次元是永不结束的永无岛[爆哭]我不管，在我心里莉娅的故事永远未完待续[爆哭][爆哭][爆哭]

Oh, I'm so envious. The little lamb must be happy forever [poor] [poor]

I finished Chasing the Speed ​​of Light and it was so fun to watch.

The little lamb wants to be happy??

The end is full of flowers, I really love the author's writing, and the writing of a certain eggplant is also tied with [prick-eared rabbit head] [prick-eared rabbit head] Madam, keep up the good work!

Wow wow wow, it's so beautiful, it suits my taste so well

I brushed it again, wife, when are you going to write the letter? [Empty bowl] [empty bowl] [empty bowl]

Three brushes [shy] When will the goddess publish a new article [crying]

When will the boss publish a new article? [It's changed] I've finished reading the previous two books 555

? ? He said it so quickly