The Reorganized Family in the Alley[60]
小巷里的重组家庭[六零]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Chapters
- 219
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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小巷里的重组家庭[六零]
The overall writing is pretty good, but the ending is a bit too hasty. It should at least end with the heroine getting married. I felt quite comfortable watching it. When writing about the heroine, I have to write about her own life and her family. The overall group portrait is well written, and each character has his or her own growth trajectory. However, after reading the ending, it felt like it was broken, rather than completed. I wonder if the author will write additional chapters in his future.
It was pretty good, but it ended too suddenly.
I feel that the heroine is the tool for the author to highlight the charm and good life of the four sisters. The presence of the male protagonist is not as strong as that described by the spouses of several brothers and sisters.
The pace is ridiculously fast, it's really driving high and driving low.
Why did it feel like the ending was so rushed, and there were a lot of issues that were not explained clearly.
There are too many plots in this book, and I skipped through many chapters. The later plots are also not smooth. I originally wanted to give up, but after thinking about it, I am halfway through it. There is a beginning and an end.
It ended suddenly again, the same was true for the previous book, it ended very hastily.
The ending was unexpected. It was quite good when it was poor at the beginning. But after the heroine entered a big factory, there were too many professional words that I couldn't understand. I skipped through them. I like to read about the short stories about family life, but the author was not careful about the number of words later. I could explain it clearly in a few words, but he had to explain something in a long paragraph.
This is no longer an anticlimax. But it's a complete mess
It was so well written before, but the ending felt a little too fast and rushed, and it felt a bit unfinished.
Confused, is it over? It sucks? [Fear]
Anticlimactic, this ending...
Another novel that I stayed up late to finish reading
The front is good, the back is a bit boring, and the ending doesn't end well.
Checking in and waiting is more heart-warming qwq