"His diary," Ginny cried. "I've been—constantly writing on it, and he's been writing back to me all year—"
Ginny's first year at Hogwarts, diary style.
Author: Arabella
Translator: BadPinecone
Concept: Don't worry about little girls who love to write diaries.
Reader comments
How should I put it? Until George's death, the reading was very fluent and coherent. However, after that, I could clearly feel the sluggishness of reading, and there were still a few questions that were not explained clearly (of course it may be my fault):
1. Why are the characters, backgrounds and even directions of the so-called first and second lives roughly the same in the two lives? It feels like there is no logical relationship with the previous foreshadowing.
2. What race is Gu Yunye? The so-called "third type of people"? If this is the case, it can be explained that he had a similar experience when the situation of water depletion was initially formed. He transformed into a "third type of person" in extreme resentment, and finally woke up at the beginning of the story. But in this way, the first doubt becomes more prominent: Why are they still the same people?
3. Jane's question. The author spent a lot of time describing this character, and she was even chosen to break the priest's plot later. Jane can be said to be the well-deserved heroine (to add to the argument, the heroine does not refer to the spouse of the hero, but refers to the female character with the most roles in the entire book), but her identity was not explained in the end. What happened to the "third type of people" in the end? What happened to the Western Region where everyone saved the whole game? It feels like I skipped it because I wanted to create an atmosphere, and I skipped this part by using time to jump quickly and create an epic feel.
All in all, the idea of the work is very good, and most of the content is also very good, so the few flaws later are disappointing. I praise the author, but I am also a writer myself. I think reasonable opinions and praise for the author are both very important, so I boldly wrote a little bit. Please correct me if there are any oversights [CaiGou]
How should I put it? Until George's death, the reading was very fluent and coherent. However, after that, I could clearly feel the sluggishness of reading, and there were still a few questions that were not explained clearly (of course it may be my fault): 1. Why are the characters, backgrounds and even directions of the so-called first and second lives roughly the same in the two lives? It feels like there is no logical relationship with the previous foreshadowing. 2. What race is Gu Yunye? The so-called "third type of people"? If this is the case, it can be explained that he had a similar experience when the situation of water depletion was initially formed. He transformed into a "third type of person" in extreme resentment, and finally woke up at the beginning of the story. But in this way, the first doubt becomes more prominent: Why are they still the same people? 3. Jane's question. The author spent a lot of time describing this character, and she was even chosen to break the priest's plot later. Jane can be said to be the well-deserved heroine (to add to the argument, the heroine does not refer to the spouse of the hero, but refers to the female character with the most roles in the entire book), but her identity was not explained in the end. What happened to the "third type of people" in the end? What happened to the Western Region where everyone saved the whole game? It feels like I skipped it because I wanted to create an atmosphere, and I skipped this part by using time to jump quickly and create an epic feel. All in all, the idea of the work is very good, and most of the content is also very good, so the few flaws later are disappointing. I praise the author, but I am also a writer myself. I think reasonable opinions and praise for the author are both very important, so I boldly wrote a little bit. Please correct me if there are any oversights [CaiGou]