The boy I loved, he was so dazzling, but now, he is dead.
——So, the sky full of roses is our wedding that is not blessed by the world.
The dead sound of the piano, the ten-year-old dance, under the dusk, the light and shadow reflect their figures, it is their souls dancing together.
Brother An Shuang pretends to be jealous (very easy to overthink)
Lei: 1. Neither of them are perfect. Even in real life, their behavior and thoughts may make people feel disgusted (I don't know how to describe it). In short, they are whims that are biased towards reality. Therefore, the characters' experiences as students will be based on the stupid things they did during their student years and their stressful psychology.
2. This article has a strong sense of fate. Many things are about a "coincidence". This point is somewhat contradictory to the first point. The coincidence is a bit false? Let's work hard to change the plot later. In short, a sentence or a coincidence may foreshadow a plot point later in the article, but sometimes the foreshadowing is obvious (please let your writing style change as you go)
3. The words will be a bit wordy, and some descriptions will be too much (I like to use a lot of descriptions to shape a mountain, one sentence, etc...)
Because I personally think that the highlights will reveal the plot behind it, so when I come to a plot point, I will add more highlights.
Intention: More than friends, not enough lovers.