Demining——
A novice at writing, a real novice. (But the characters still have brains.)
The plot is average, really average.
The author is timid, shy, and socially intimidated, but he listens to advice and accepts everything else as long as he doesn't curse.
It's half a cool article and half a sad article. This article may be a sad article.
Suggestions——
Let's wait ten years and come back to read it. After all, there are about seven words in the update.
Intention: Please see, what is a boy——