His name was Wenyu, and he lost his memory when he woke up.
With the title of the most beautiful woman in the world, she also has the status of a male favorite.
But how could this be possible with his character, a male favorite?
The Panlong Jade gifted by the emperor, the Qilin Stone that subverts life and death in the world, and the candlestick enshrined by the mysterious clan,
Three unrelated things slowly became related to him.
And you, don't say something incomprehensible to him!
What spaceship? What time travel? What task?
He... Can't... Understand... A single... Word...!
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The soldier commander is a proud black panther, not a little country cat who can only show his claws. Xiaosheng thinks this metaphor is more appropriate. I hope that while writing the article, the author can deepen his understanding of the character and analyze his psychology at a deeper level, instead of thinking of "cute" attributes or daily routines and actions that can make the soldier look more "cute" today. It is impossible to complete a work by relying on these elements alone. If it is barely completed, it can only be regarded as a third-rate novel. This is just Xiaosheng's understanding of writing, and I hope the author can accept it.
After reading so much, let's not talk about writing, just practice. The plot is protracted and cannot withstand scrutiny. As for the heroine's character, she has no character at all. She is whatever others say she is. When she is no longer good, she will be sad alone, just like a doll. However, a child from a family like the heroine is supposed to be sensitive and easily satisfied (of course this is my own guess), but when written in large letters, it feels like a glass of boiled water, with no taste, but holding yourself high. The male protagonist's personality is not obvious either. When the company is in such trouble, the male protagonist is almost calm. However, in the face of disaster, the true temperament must be revealed. This is definitely the best time to show the charm of personality, but you just brushed it off. The description of the male protagonist's family is also too light. The characters in the entire article have no priority at all except the probability of their appearance. After watching it, the only thing that left an impression on me was Shu Han, who had a more obvious personality. Moreover, after so many words, the plot is still in the same state... The whole story structure is also extremely loose. If you don't know the specific operations of those companies, you can find some information. For the female protagonist, you can just act as your own. Would this happen if you have a crush on someone? What would happen if you were slandered? The reaction of a normal human being of flesh and blood. Rather than the heroine feeling like her own voice. Theoretically, people's memory of their own voices is really not that strong. If you don't believe it, try recording a bunch of people's voices and see if you can distinguish your own voice.
As the same saying goes, it should be relaxed, scattered, and relaxed. If it's a slow flow, then try your best to describe it. It's really not obvious to use such a rough writing style to describe such subtle emotions. All are my personal opinions after reading the article. If you don't like it, delete it.
Bubble, mom is so cute
Is this JJ having convulsions? I repeated the article twice.
Su is so cute when she sings! ! ! ! I like him so much! ! ! Also, comfort veteran cadre Qu and don't cry. Who hired the police? Is it for the medicine?
Sprinkle flowers🌸
Turn on the lamp or something-_-|||
I really like the heroine's independent and self-reliant character. The author's portrayal of Pei Lin is so overbearing that it makes people feel distressed. I have always felt that Yin Jingwan's weak character is not suitable for the fourth young master. The entanglement between Jin Zhi and Han Zhi is also very troublesome, but it is very consistent with the original character image. It is really well written! But I still hope to torture the male protagonist again. Although I'm sorry, I'm a pro-mom╮(╯_╰)╭
Help, I'm going to die without a book to read... The author has been missing for a year. Could it be that he traveled through time?
The soldier commander is a proud black panther, not a little country cat who can only show his claws. Xiaosheng thinks this metaphor is more appropriate. I hope that while writing the article, the author can deepen his understanding of the character and analyze his psychology at a deeper level, instead of thinking of "cute" attributes or daily routines and actions that can make the soldier look more "cute" today. It is impossible to complete a work by relying on these elements alone. If it is barely completed, it can only be regarded as a third-rate novel. This is just Xiaosheng's understanding of writing, and I hope the author can accept it.
After reading so much, let's not talk about writing, just practice. The plot is protracted and cannot withstand scrutiny. As for the heroine's character, she has no character at all. She is whatever others say she is. When she is no longer good, she will be sad alone, just like a doll. However, a child from a family like the heroine is supposed to be sensitive and easily satisfied (of course this is my own guess), but when written in large letters, it feels like a glass of boiled water, with no taste, but holding yourself high. The male protagonist's personality is not obvious either. When the company is in such trouble, the male protagonist is almost calm. However, in the face of disaster, the true temperament must be revealed. This is definitely the best time to show the charm of personality, but you just brushed it off. The description of the male protagonist's family is also too light. The characters in the entire article have no priority at all except the probability of their appearance. After watching it, the only thing that left an impression on me was Shu Han, who had a more obvious personality. Moreover, after so many words, the plot is still in the same state... The whole story structure is also extremely loose. If you don't know the specific operations of those companies, you can find some information. For the female protagonist, you can just act as your own. Would this happen if you have a crush on someone? What would happen if you were slandered? The reaction of a normal human being of flesh and blood. Rather than the heroine feeling like her own voice. Theoretically, people's memory of their own voices is really not that strong. If you don't believe it, try recording a bunch of people's voices and see if you can distinguish your own voice. As the same saying goes, it should be relaxed, scattered, and relaxed. If it's a slow flow, then try your best to describe it. It's really not obvious to use such a rough writing style to describe such subtle emotions. All are my personal opinions after reading the article. If you don't like it, delete it.
Bubble, mom is so cute
Is this JJ having convulsions? I repeated the article twice.
Su is so cute when she sings! ! ! ! I like him so much! ! ! Also, comfort veteran cadre Qu and don't cry. Who hired the police? Is it for the medicine?
Sprinkle flowers🌸
Turn on the lamp or something-_-|||
I really like the heroine's independent and self-reliant character. The author's portrayal of Pei Lin is so overbearing that it makes people feel distressed. I have always felt that Yin Jingwan's weak character is not suitable for the fourth young master. The entanglement between Jin Zhi and Han Zhi is also very troublesome, but it is very consistent with the original character image. It is really well written! But I still hope to torture the male protagonist again. Although I'm sorry, I'm a pro-mom╮(╯_╰)╭
Help, I'm going to die without a book to read... The author has been missing for a year. Could it be that he traveled through time?
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