The new article "Transforming into a book and becoming cannon fodder and then pampering a villain" has been published
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Everyone knows that Qingfeng Jiyue's Immortal Lord Yun Heng is close to the divine realm. He has no feelings for the common people and is the coldest snow on Yunwu Mountain.
As the only junior sister of Immortal Yunheng, Wen Qiwu has a secret that has been hidden in her heart since she was a child - she likes her senior sister, but this relationship is destined to be dark. She originally thought she could keep this secret for a lifetime, but unfortunately she overestimated herself. Just a pot of not-so-intoxicating fairy brew can make her years of patience come to nothing.
The moment she was imprisoned in Siguo Cliff, Wen Qiwu had regrets, but she was more relieved. She had a stubborn disease and was destined to not live long, so it would be better if she died without any regrets.
A few years later, the war between immortals and demons broke out. Perhaps the senior sister felt that she had let go of that relationship. Before leaving, she left a message asking her to stay in the sect well and wait for her to come back to make her favorite chestnut cake.
After all, the senior sister couldn't bear to lock her up for the rest of her life. Unfortunately, she couldn't wait for the chestnut cake, nor could she wait for the senior sister. Instead, she first encountered the demon army that surrounded the sect and attacked the sect. She died together with the enemy leader in order to defend the sect.
Perhaps because of God's mercy, she, who was supposed to be in despair, actually came back to life in a spirit beast egg in the border area.
However, even though she was far away from the sect, she deliberately avoided news related to her past. Years later, some voices still reached her ears about her senior sister's current situation.
She heard a storyteller say that Immortal Yunheng was seriously injured in that battle. She also heard someone talk about Immortal Yunheng's gossip, saying that the Immortal was not seriously injured but had inner demons because of his unrequited prayer for the bright moon in his heart.
After Wen Qiwu heard this ridiculous statement, he endured it again and again. In the end, he couldn't help but turned into a white bird and wanted to teach the other party a lesson in talking nonsense. As a result, he was accidentally caught by the disciples of Yunwu Mountain and put into a cage and given to the Immortal Lord as a pet to relieve his boredom.
Seeing his senior sister again after many years, Wen Qiwu discovered that the serious injuries those people said were true, and the inner demons seemed to be real too. The once taciturn senior sister locked herself in a room every day holding a birdcage and muttered to herself, saying messy and illogical words. There was always a plate of chestnut cakes that no one was eating next to her. Wen Qiwu could not escape and could only be the senior sister's only audience every day.
Later, Wen Qiwu discovered that everything his senior sister said was unexpressed love.
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"After the plot is over, the cannon fodder just wants to be whitewashed" Please give me an advance~
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After staying up late and working overtime for a few days, Yu Yingxia's eyes went dark and she fainted. When she opened her eyes again, she found that she was standing in a strange place, with corpses everywhere, the air was filled with a strong smell of blood, and in front of her was a seriously injured beauty.
The beauty was covered in blood, with several horrific injuries on her body, and was dying. However, she was still unconscious while leaning against the tree, and her cold eyes looked at her without emotion.
Yu Yingxia had never seen such a bloody scene before, and she was so frightened. The next second, memories that did not belong to her flooded into her mind. She found that she had entered a fairy tale, and now she had two bad news. One was that she had become the villain next to the villain, and the other worse news was that the plot was about to end. The protagonist had entered the villain's sect, and the second fifth boy who opened the sect-protecting formation was herself!
The original owner wanted to kill the villain while she was seriously injured and surrender to the protagonist to keep her safe. However, she didn't know that the villain had planted a puppet mark in her body, and she exploded at the villain's thought.
Yes, it exploded and turned into red "fireworks"!
Now, the sect-protecting formation is open, and the protagonist has one minute to arrive on the battlefield, and he is standing in front of the villain with a knife...
Yu Yingxia: Tears burst out!
System: [Dear taskmaster... Huh? The plot has ended successfully? Ha ha! It's time to get off work! Wish you a happy life! Goodbye!
Yu Yingxia:? ? ?
The short-lived system was gone, it was impossible to kill the villain, and her own life was still in her hands. Yu Yingxia could only cry while resisting the villain's desire to kill, and lived a life of hiding in Tibet.
The plot is over, and the future development is a mystery. Yu Yingxia is busy making a living while carefully surviving under the hands of the villain. Later, she finally raises the villain to a white and tender body, and the defense and murderous intention in the beauty's eyes are finally removed, and it turns into another emotion that Yu Yingxia cannot understand.
Yu Yingxia thought that the villain beauty finally regarded her as one of her own, so she pointed to her heart carefully.
Sister, for the sake of our friendship, do you think you can break the puppet seal?
The villain beauty smiled brightly, making Yu Yingxia lose her mind.
Then the beauty lowered her head and kissed her heart. The puppet seal was dissolved, but replaced by the concentric seal.
Live and die together, never to be separated.
Also known as a marriage contract.
Yu Yingxia thought that this was another way for the villain to torment her, so when the villain was planning the wedding, she was so scared that she ran away all night. As a result, she was caught by the villain and pinned to the bed before she even left the door.
The beauty of the villain had red eyes and looked pitiful, but the strength of her hands was frightening, and she said the harshest words in the softest tone.
"I only have you, so even if only the body is left, you have to stay with me."
Purpose: Communication is the bridge that connects trust and emotions between people
Reader comments
Remarks after reading
This is a very exciting novel about cultivating immortals. I didn't expect it to have such a large amount of plot at first. After reading the copy, I expected it to be a story about a reborn sweet pet. The result really shocked me.
At the beginning, I recalled the events in my previous life, and the plot of Chapter 20 completely attracted me. It was not the usual story about the betrayal and regretful tragedy of the protagonist. The relationship between Ah Qiao and her senior sister is not weak, and the key plot of her death is not frustrating to watch. Ah Que used his ultimate move to burn himself to death in order to protect his master. I just felt tragic when I saw it. Moreover, Elder Lu is also a very good character. If we just say that she is an undercover agent, it will make people feel very unhappy. But it is precisely because of his feelings for Aqiao that it can not only reasonably explain that she has not been discovered, but also make this tragedy a little more complicated. I think it was handled very well.
In the subsequent plot, my biggest feeling is that the plot is very tight and compact. It is very immersive and difficult to extricate myself from watching. Changing maps and adding new characters one by one, one journey after another, without any delay or boredom. I think the author's ability to organize the plot structure of the whole text is really strong. This is also a particularly important point in Xiuxian novels. As far as my personal experience is concerned, it is really rare to see a fairy tale with such a vast space, such rich content, and such a compact and logical plot.
In addition, I must mention that the setting of Little Phoenix is really interesting. The scene of Ten Thousand Birds Fan makes me feel cute and cute every time I see it. The author presented this setting so well. I think I will never forget it in my life. It is so cute. Forgive me for not having more adjectives.
There are also many characters in this article, and they are not stereotyped at all. There is no feeling that there are only characters and no flesh and blood. I'm not a person who likes CPs very much, but I find several pairs of CPs in this article quite interesting. Each has its own characteristics, and the background of each character is also very rich, which also plays a big role in the plot. It's worth mentioning that our Xiao Wen, I feel like I haven't seen such a character as the protagonist for a long time, especially the protagonist of a fairy tale. I feel like every time I see this kind of gentle, soft-tempered and good-tempered character, I can't get out of my way. Even though he doesn't have any dark and exciting character traits, he is still very attractive.
Finally, I would like to express my admiration for the excellent plot structure of this novel. The setting is rich and not weak. There is nothing abrupt or uneven, and the whole novel is very solid. Plot flow is inherently difficult to write. I think it is very difficult to present rich plots and settings in such a clear and smooth manner like a novel about cultivating immortals.
But in fact, this novel also has a lot of emotional scenes, but I was more impressed by the plot. Let's call it plot flow. Come on, author, I look forward to writing such exciting plots again in the future!
Wow, what a pity, I didn't get to see how the real Elder Lu cared for Ah Que😢
I finished reading it in one sitting today and I feel that the author's portrayal of the heroine is great. Although I haven't tried other articles, but judging from this article... Corn Cat's writing power is very strong. The feeling of advancing chapter by chapter is very much like watching a TV series, like the process of gradual changes of emotions on the faces of the actors, the feeling of being angry at first, then overwhelmed and confused, and finally returning to determination. When I read the article, I felt that it was good that the author did not always focus on the appearance of the hero and heroine. I felt that writing too much would make it difficult to form a feeling for the heroine in my heart, and the helplessness of falling into the swamp at the same time as her. It's so realistic to portray the gradual collapse of daily school life from the perspective of the heroine. When I watched it, I kept thinking about letting the baby go (rolling all over the floor). She still has to take the college entrance examination (all I can think about is hhh). I'm going to kill the good or bad class teacher... This is how the old student Zhong looked (falling to the ground)
In the later writing, I feel that the writing style is a little more mature and more natural. At first, I felt that it might be a little awkward for the characters to suddenly speak for a long time. Later, when describing the characters, there are more action-assisted descriptions and more communication. It's easier to immerse yourself in it, thinking about what the heroine will do. This mysterious and alluring feeling makes me can't help but click on the next chapter, but it also has shortcomings. Big shortcomings, I think some supporting characters are a little under-inscribed (like the deskmate, I think there is still a little less, and the characters are a bit stiff. Maybe, although I didn't ink when writing, he lacked his daily social circle or life, which led to the work The character is a bit heavier at the back, and after all, it's not a very important role. I think it does feel a bit like a Korean manga boy, a high school boy with a bit of a brain, who suddenly appears after work, a bit annoying and a bit embarrassing... But it does not affect the overall plot. In addition, the progressive feeling of imprisonment and the heroine's resistance are very real and comfortable. I really can't stand the JJ Stockholm-style heroine. Someone save me...
Although I rarely read this type of love-and-kill novel, the boss wrote it well, and I read it in one sitting. Maybe a short story is suitable for the boss to write. The heroine is very real and lively, and the depressive anguish of a high school student is also good to read. When I read the article, I felt that the incandescent light was still on in the quiet classroom, the fan was blowing, and I was writing papers. There was a girl secretly taking a nap in the corner. What I also like very much is that the daily setting is very stable at the beginning. Most of jj's articles are so explosive at the beginning that I have a headache. The writing style seems very rigorous at the beginning, maybe because I am afraid of writing. Hh is a bit like suspense. Boss, you can also try the suspense genre. I also like to read. Please... I will order them all. The subsequent explosive point in the climax part is also very good, there is no sudden appearance, and there is no muddled part, so that the before and after are relatively integrated, there is no nonsense, but after watching it, I can slightly reminisce about the emotions after life and death. The heroine's explosive he made me feel more than a little happy. It's rare to see such a heartfelt short article. By the way, I don't want to spoil it too much, so I won't mention the content and plot. Corn Cat, I love you, I love you, I love you. ^3＾ Try writing a modern short article. I think it may be more suitable for your taste than a fanfic. After reading too many fanfics, I prefer female protagonists with their own style and a stronger sense of reality. How about trying to write about girls with other styles? Maybe it will look good too.
The heroine in the honeymoon chapter at the end is also endlessly cute, and the baby girl's behavior and collapse grow crazily at the border, which is very delicious. Yamiami. What would it be like if the author wrote a sequel about a heroine in a world without psychopaths? I'm curious, would she smash the water glass she had been staring at angrily many years ago? Will she still find a way to restrain her desires until she meets a madman in the world who can make her have a seizure...
Corn Cat, write quickly (or I will hide in the manuscript box and look at you secretly)
How about writing about dumpling vinegar separately?
The carved jade carries the ice, and Happy New Year! I wish you all the best in the new year, may all your wishes come true, and achieve immediate success! You can also write stories that satisfy you, and your stories can be liked by more people😘😘
I want both big and small dogs! !
Damn, do you still remember the extra story about Daming Lake?
[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl Do you still have it? Do you have it? [Spread flowers]
[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl Do you still have it? Do you have it? [Spread flowers]
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Remarks after reading This is a very exciting novel about cultivating immortals. I didn't expect it to have such a large amount of plot at first. After reading the copy, I expected it to be a story about a reborn sweet pet. The result really shocked me. At the beginning, I recalled the events in my previous life, and the plot of Chapter 20 completely attracted me. It was not the usual story about the betrayal and regretful tragedy of the protagonist. The relationship between Ah Qiao and her senior sister is not weak, and the key plot of her death is not frustrating to watch. Ah Que used his ultimate move to burn himself to death in order to protect his master. I just felt tragic when I saw it. Moreover, Elder Lu is also a very good character. If we just say that she is an undercover agent, it will make people feel very unhappy. But it is precisely because of his feelings for Aqiao that it can not only reasonably explain that she has not been discovered, but also make this tragedy a little more complicated. I think it was handled very well. In the subsequent plot, my biggest feeling is that the plot is very tight and compact. It is very immersive and difficult to extricate myself from watching. Changing maps and adding new characters one by one, one journey after another, without any delay or boredom. I think the author's ability to organize the plot structure of the whole text is really strong. This is also a particularly important point in Xiuxian novels. As far as my personal experience is concerned, it is really rare to see a fairy tale with such a vast space, such rich content, and such a compact and logical plot. In addition, I must mention that the setting of Little Phoenix is really interesting. The scene of Ten Thousand Birds Fan makes me feel cute and cute every time I see it. The author presented this setting so well. I think I will never forget it in my life. It is so cute. Forgive me for not having more adjectives. There are also many characters in this article, and they are not stereotyped at all. There is no feeling that there are only characters and no flesh and blood. I'm not a person who likes CPs very much, but I find several pairs of CPs in this article quite interesting. Each has its own characteristics, and the background of each character is also very rich, which also plays a big role in the plot. It's worth mentioning that our Xiao Wen, I feel like I haven't seen such a character as the protagonist for a long time, especially the protagonist of a fairy tale. I feel like every time I see this kind of gentle, soft-tempered and good-tempered character, I can't get out of my way. Even though he doesn't have any dark and exciting character traits, he is still very attractive. Finally, I would like to express my admiration for the excellent plot structure of this novel. The setting is rich and not weak. There is nothing abrupt or uneven, and the whole novel is very solid. Plot flow is inherently difficult to write. I think it is very difficult to present rich plots and settings in such a clear and smooth manner like a novel about cultivating immortals. But in fact, this novel also has a lot of emotional scenes, but I was more impressed by the plot. Let's call it plot flow. Come on, author, I look forward to writing such exciting plots again in the future!
Wow, what a pity, I didn't get to see how the real Elder Lu cared for Ah Que😢
I finished reading it in one sitting today and I feel that the author's portrayal of the heroine is great. Although I haven't tried other articles, but judging from this article... Corn Cat's writing power is very strong. The feeling of advancing chapter by chapter is very much like watching a TV series, like the process of gradual changes of emotions on the faces of the actors, the feeling of being angry at first, then overwhelmed and confused, and finally returning to determination. When I read the article, I felt that it was good that the author did not always focus on the appearance of the hero and heroine. I felt that writing too much would make it difficult to form a feeling for the heroine in my heart, and the helplessness of falling into the swamp at the same time as her. It's so realistic to portray the gradual collapse of daily school life from the perspective of the heroine. When I watched it, I kept thinking about letting the baby go (rolling all over the floor). She still has to take the college entrance examination (all I can think about is hhh). I'm going to kill the good or bad class teacher... This is how the old student Zhong looked (falling to the ground) In the later writing, I feel that the writing style is a little more mature and more natural. At first, I felt that it might be a little awkward for the characters to suddenly speak for a long time. Later, when describing the characters, there are more action-assisted descriptions and more communication. It's easier to immerse yourself in it, thinking about what the heroine will do. This mysterious and alluring feeling makes me can't help but click on the next chapter, but it also has shortcomings. Big shortcomings, I think some supporting characters are a little under-inscribed (like the deskmate, I think there is still a little less, and the characters are a bit stiff. Maybe, although I didn't ink when writing, he lacked his daily social circle or life, which led to the work The character is a bit heavier at the back, and after all, it's not a very important role. I think it does feel a bit like a Korean manga boy, a high school boy with a bit of a brain, who suddenly appears after work, a bit annoying and a bit embarrassing... But it does not affect the overall plot. In addition, the progressive feeling of imprisonment and the heroine's resistance are very real and comfortable. I really can't stand the JJ Stockholm-style heroine. Someone save me... Although I rarely read this type of love-and-kill novel, the boss wrote it well, and I read it in one sitting. Maybe a short story is suitable for the boss to write. The heroine is very real and lively, and the depressive anguish of a high school student is also good to read. When I read the article, I felt that the incandescent light was still on in the quiet classroom, the fan was blowing, and I was writing papers. There was a girl secretly taking a nap in the corner. What I also like very much is that the daily setting is very stable at the beginning. Most of jj's articles are so explosive at the beginning that I have a headache. The writing style seems very rigorous at the beginning, maybe because I am afraid of writing. Hh is a bit like suspense. Boss, you can also try the suspense genre. I also like to read. Please... I will order them all. The subsequent explosive point in the climax part is also very good, there is no sudden appearance, and there is no muddled part, so that the before and after are relatively integrated, there is no nonsense, but after watching it, I can slightly reminisce about the emotions after life and death. The heroine's explosive he made me feel more than a little happy. It's rare to see such a heartfelt short article. By the way, I don't want to spoil it too much, so I won't mention the content and plot. Corn Cat, I love you, I love you, I love you. ^3＾ Try writing a modern short article. I think it may be more suitable for your taste than a fanfic. After reading too many fanfics, I prefer female protagonists with their own style and a stronger sense of reality. How about trying to write about girls with other styles? Maybe it will look good too. The heroine in the honeymoon chapter at the end is also endlessly cute, and the baby girl's behavior and collapse grow crazily at the border, which is very delicious. Yamiami. What would it be like if the author wrote a sequel about a heroine in a world without psychopaths? I'm curious, would she smash the water glass she had been staring at angrily many years ago? Will she still find a way to restrain her desires until she meets a madman in the world who can make her have a seizure... Corn Cat, write quickly (or I will hide in the manuscript box and look at you secretly)
How about writing about dumpling vinegar separately?
The carved jade carries the ice, and Happy New Year! I wish you all the best in the new year, may all your wishes come true, and achieve immediate success! You can also write stories that satisfy you, and your stories can be liked by more people😘😘
I want both big and small dogs! !
Damn, do you still remember the extra story about Daming Lake?
[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl Do you still have it? Do you have it? [Spread flowers]
[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl Do you still have it? Do you have it? [Spread flowers]
[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl [Purple candy] kswl
Baby, baby, is there any update?
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