Maybe it's because people are too beautiful (evil) and jealous of talented people (vomit) I died...
When I woke up this time, I had become a real ugly monster...
Hahaha...
Let you see how I behave like an ugly person...
Reader comments
Pick a little thorn weakly
"... My ministers don't need to worry about taking sides. It would be a wonder if the old emperor in his sixties could have another son..."
The old emperor was 62 years old, probably in his sixties. . .
Also, isn't the protagonist Gu Yijing? It's a bit too much to mention his father. . .
,,, Ah, resentment, resentment~~ Mi You is waiting for the update~~ I am having a good time on New Year's Day, and I don't even need to update anymore~~
It's over like this. I'm really sad.
It's over. . .
~Come back soon~~~~~
Haha, it's getting more and more fun. I am looking forward to the follow-up development. It will be a very enjoyable battle for 300 rounds!
I was hooked as soon as I saw it, 9 and a half thumbs up!
Chang Yizong was quite decisive...
Emma, what a loving encounter! ! ! The cute ones are indeed the best! ! ! !
Sir, let me step on your (heart)!
Come on Yuliang> <~
I think you should explain some things more and express some emotions. But don't be too wordy! Some parts are very unrealistic and the dialogue is a bit naive, which makes it difficult to attract people who want to continue watching.
The article has been collected. The feelings written are very sincere and the author is very serious.
I suggest you change the copywriting, the font is too small to see clearly.
In addition, there are no cute points in the copywriting. I hope that the highlights of the text can be refined and put on it.
The plot of the first chapter is simple and easy to understand, the writing is smooth, and the innocence of the little girl is captured;
I hope that the writing style will be more mature in the following chapters, and that the first person point of view should be avoided from God's perspective.
Come on!
The Sorcerer's Stone... My first reaction was Harry Potter...
Silently hit a red heart and click 32 likes. Mothers are always good for their sons, and the son's choice is indeed the best. Which one will you be after writing this? Should you concentrate on writing about vampires or start a new one?
Pick a little thorn weakly "... My ministers don't need to worry about taking sides. It would be a wonder if the old emperor in his sixties could have another son..." The old emperor was 62 years old, probably in his sixties. . . Also, isn't the protagonist Gu Yijing? It's a bit too much to mention his father. . .
,,, Ah, resentment, resentment~~ Mi You is waiting for the update~~ I am having a good time on New Year's Day, and I don't even need to update anymore~~
It's over like this. I'm really sad.
It's over. . .
~Come back soon~~~~~
Haha, it's getting more and more fun. I am looking forward to the follow-up development. It will be a very enjoyable battle for 300 rounds!
I was hooked as soon as I saw it, 9 and a half thumbs up!
Chang Yizong was quite decisive...
Emma, what a loving encounter! ! ! The cute ones are indeed the best! ! ! !
Sir, let me step on your (heart)! Come on Yuliang> <~
I think you should explain some things more and express some emotions. But don't be too wordy! Some parts are very unrealistic and the dialogue is a bit naive, which makes it difficult to attract people who want to continue watching.
The article has been collected. The feelings written are very sincere and the author is very serious. I suggest you change the copywriting, the font is too small to see clearly. In addition, there are no cute points in the copywriting. I hope that the highlights of the text can be refined and put on it. The plot of the first chapter is simple and easy to understand, the writing is smooth, and the innocence of the little girl is captured; I hope that the writing style will be more mature in the following chapters, and that the first person point of view should be avoided from God's perspective. Come on!
The Sorcerer's Stone... My first reaction was Harry Potter...
Silently hit a red heart and click 32 likes. Mothers are always good for their sons, and the son's choice is indeed the best. Which one will you be after writing this? Should you concentrate on writing about vampires or start a new one?