[Ace of Diamonds] Asuka Always Wants the Whole Bag of French Fries
[钻石王牌]飞鸟总想整包薯条
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 41k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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136Favorites
8.4Score
14Chapters
11Nutrition
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13Comments
Wow, I suddenly realized that Aitoun saw the part of Themis, "Looking at the same posture as someone makes people very irritated" - oh, who is this? Themis in this chapter is so cold and cool, very hunter-like, with that faint sense of hunting, and golden pupils that stand up like snakes. In fact, the atmosphere of Aitong's dangerous situation has been very strong from the beginning. I feel that Themis is not hiding anything. Aitong is very arrogant here. At the same time, I also feel that Themis is fully prepared and has a chance to win, so Themis has no intention of concealing her intentions. Moreover, the metaphorical meaning of historical reincarnation in this chapter is also very rich. Hey, the whole atmosphere is not quite right. The faint see-saw atmosphere is very strong. I especially like the contrast between the portrait and reality. The portrait is as beautiful and elegant as possible, and at the end of this chapter, Inu was pinched by Aton at the beginning. After all, it is a struggle for life and death with a person, a confrontation of multiple meanings, and the corresponding consumption and embarrassment are normal - and this is very alive. Compared with the portrait, Inu has really grown a lot unknowingly. Of course, what I like the most here is the contrast in clothing. In the reality at the end, Inui is in military uniform, bloody, and paving the way for what he does, instead of being shelved in the portrait, but just looking falsely decorated. So... I really, really like this chapter (of course I already like it hehe) Moreover, the description of the method of death involved in this chapter is concise but also gorgeous. My statement is contradictory, isn't it? But this is what I feel. Aitong's tangled and confusing emotions are described just right. I can capture some of the ugly and self-righteous meanings, and at the same time, I can separate them. There is indeed sadness in his life. But none of these will take away my vision. I will only continue to focus my vision on Ini steadily. At the end of this chapter, when I watched Te call the little snake together, I was actually quite emotional, because I was somewhat lucky that at this stage, I still had a reliable living creature by my side that I could trust a little bit. Konabos snake, so cute! [Dog head] [Originally, I wanted to wait for a new chapter before posting a comment together due to obsessive-compulsive disorder, but I accidentally ended up saying too much! Then send it directly without delay! And looking at Zhao's psychological activities and what she actually said to the original protagonists, you can quite get the contrast between her thinking as an outsider and a simple earthling, and she has a subtle sense of superiority and mystery. Then I still want to mention Xiaogang. I'm convinced. He's really bold when he goes offline. It's even funnier to welcome the hidden reminder. Everyone more or less understands that Zhao is not a simple person. Hey, it's cool! [Rainbow fart]
Author, I really like your setting, but the character is a bit too naive. I don't mean to guide the writing, but I feel that the character is not very human. As a killer, I feel that my temper should not be so soft. The author describes it more like a young and stupid man with high martial arts value. Others also changed the original protagonist too quickly. The protagonist's experience feels very shallow and does not match the character. It is also a bit I'm trying to get into trouble. The previous description said that I was affected by the original owner's Wuwu disaster and treated the other person as a child. In fact, what the other person said is not a problem at all from his perspective. Instead, it is the protagonist's logic. You are Wuwu disaster but others don't know this. I still hope that the author will think about the role, personality and behavioral logic of the character when creating the character. There are many places where there are too many words to talk about. Come on and write.
Quickly ask yyy to come out and do my homework for me!
Why does it feel so Chinese but not foreign?
By the way, does anyone think that Sister Yi has been reminding Gu to be careful about his brother?
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