Advance collection of the new article: "He Who Lost His Husband and Still Carried a Child", please help me, sweetie, to receive advance notice for the next book.
One day, due to a God-given accident, He Mingyue, a popular man in the world of immortality, suddenly became more and more beautiful and charming. Everyone's eyes changed when they looked at him, so they started to touch him intentionally or unintentionally, and even became more and more excessive. . . .
Of course, except for one other person, Jiang Weixi, the straight man in the world of immortality and the great swordsman, remained unmoved.
As a result, He Mingyue seemed to have grasped a life-saving straw and clung to Jiang Weixi's side, just to protect her own integrity.
It's just that there's something wrong with the look in your eyes, this great swordsman! Hey!
Intention: Only kind people will be loved.
Reader comments
Can we arrange for Luo Shen to be reborn to pursue her husband? I'm a bit confused, 5555
No wonder the second senior brother doesn't have a wife.
Everyone did what suits them, and it resulted in bad consequences. Sow evil and reap evil. This is a backlash. If it were an ancient setting, there might not be a chance to resist.
Woo woo woo, it's late, but it still feels good!
Locked, woo woo woo, locked woo woo woo
"But this nutrition Alexandre..." This is a big bug for the author~
Nice, but too short
Baby, let me give you some advice. There are many important scenes that could be written in more detail (with less detail), but I feel that the pace of the scenes this time is a bit too fast and a bit sloppy. I could have written two or three chapters in detail to express the changes in character, thoughts, and conflicts. As a result, it was too streamlined and some of the characters were a bit stiffly drawn. Come on.
I have a hunch that the knife is coming, uh, maybe she wants to cut her flesh, ah ah, fear and curiosity are the most addictive
Press your paw, the weather is really cold this time
Can we arrange for Luo Shen to be reborn to pursue her husband? I'm a bit confused, 5555
No wonder the second senior brother doesn't have a wife.
Everyone did what suits them, and it resulted in bad consequences. Sow evil and reap evil. This is a backlash. If it were an ancient setting, there might not be a chance to resist.
Woo woo woo, it's late, but it still feels good!
Locked, woo woo woo, locked woo woo woo
"But this nutrition Alexandre..." This is a big bug for the author~
Nice, but too short
Baby, let me give you some advice. There are many important scenes that could be written in more detail (with less detail), but I feel that the pace of the scenes this time is a bit too fast and a bit sloppy. I could have written two or three chapters in detail to express the changes in character, thoughts, and conflicts. As a result, it was too streamlined and some of the characters were a bit stiffly drawn. Come on.
I have a hunch that the knife is coming, uh, maybe she wants to cut her flesh, ah ah, fear and curiosity are the most addictive
Press your paw, the weather is really cold this time
Super pretty! ! ! So cute[red heart][red heart]