The plot rhythm of this book is definitely the worst I have ever written. It is simply unprecedentedly bad.
I can only say that when you are not sure, you should never jump out of your comfort zone casually... Although I really like this subject.
Which teacher can come down from heaven and write an article similar to a joke? I really want to read it.
Isn't it a very common plot for a mage to have a melee dream? Why can't I see this being used to develop the plot?
There are some who are both mages and swordsmen, but what I like most is that the swordsmen who are criticized as having no talent are actually top-notch mages.
In short, when I come back to write this book, at least it will be after I have the ability to finish writing the next novel.
The premise is that I still can't see the type of writing I like by then.
I really want to read it... Who can write it... I can't write it myself, I'm really desperate...
If you want to borrow this book, feel free to borrow it. Anyway, if I don't sign the contract, I really can't write it.
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Mefilise, the legendary Temple Master who has been stationed on the Clore-Lumir front all year round, is one of the only five strong men in the entire continent who can touch the edge of the law. It is almost impossible to associate him with the human race as a genius.
In the stories that spread in every street and alley, her birth had its own strange phenomena. It rained for two days and two nights in Raoud, the human capital that had been dry for a long time. After the first clearing, a triple rainbow suddenly appeared in the sky. A white dove, symbolizing light and beauty, hovered on the roof for a whole morning and refused to leave... All of the above are lies made up by others.
Mephiles never denied his talent, but he also didn't have much real sense of this talent. Her life was an endless cycle of practicing, praying, practicing, and praying. After an unknown amount of time, she was suddenly called by the bishop to go to earthly training. And this experience did not last long. He was ordered by the king to summon the Elf city that was almost falling at that time without even finding the location of the parchment. After that, he became famous in one battle.
She was not an orphan, but when her talent was revealed, she was taken to the temple to undergo cruel training in isolation from the world. With the enemy behind her, she really couldn't spare the time to return to the small town she once was. Besides, that memory was so blurred in her mind that it was like a dream.
That war lasted for a long, long time, a long, long time...
Well, she couldn't remember exactly how long it was, but it must have been a hundred or two hundred years, and it didn't end until the year 765 of the Creation Calendar. Then, on the battlefield filled with gunpowder smoke, the rebellious phase of His Excellency the Archmage finally arrived after more than a hundred years. He just released a magic messenger bird and then waved his hands and hid in an adventure group fishing in a remote place, determined to do nothing in that place from now on!
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Now she is not the genius archmage of the temple who lives in the legend, but an ordinary little aristocrat named Lucy who escaped from marriage... Maybe she needs to add a small prefix?
——Lucy, a rookie adventure member with poor swordsmanship and physical skills, makes her grand appearance!
"As a great magician, I actually love heavy swords. Is there something wrong with that?"
"How should I persuade my teammate to turn back when she has lost her way?"
"After the mage disappeared, her followers all went crazy"
PS: The heroine's personality seems to be more lively and casual, and her revenge does not last overnight. In short, she does not look like an antique that has lived for a hundred or two hundred years, but there is a reason for this. There is also a reason why she will find a place to dump her after the war. She will not be tortured. The male protagonist is a dragon. I haven't figured out the specific plot yet.
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