I'm Here to Claim My Life

It's not a completely sweet novel, but I really liked it when I followed it... The only impression left on me now is that the heroine is a good child...

Teacher, you must finish writing, okay? [Crying] I really like this if pig

Damn, your writing is really beautiful. I really want to read the follow-up. I'm really looking forward to the story of the little princess and the phantom.

To be honest, it's still the same problem. The emotional line is too bland. When I watched it, I always felt that Gong's role was very small. Although it was quite greasy in the early stage, he soon became the twenty-four filial boyfriend in the later stage. There was no refreshing feeling of character transformation, and there was not much description of Gong's regretful psychology. He could only appear in the shadow of the career line. There's nothing to abuse about this kind of character. To be honest, the author's other novel with the protagonist surnamed Jiang has the same problem. It was quite enjoyable to read at first, but since the crematorium novel basically has no emotional line, it was very boring for me to read. It's rare to meet such a scumbag with such a good character, so I couldn't bear to read it. As soon as the author wrote about the career line, he became so angry that he lost his temper. When he was thinking about how to burn the emotional line in the crematorium, he thought about how to bypass it. The author still needs to practice more on how to write emotional lines! It's rare to find an author who can write about Crematorium with a good attitude. It is definitely not possible to say that it is not a sadistic attack, but this sadistic attack does not break out of the traditional vicious circle. The method of abuse is "he doesn't love me anymore." Being so transparent that you keep doing things behind your back and then you feel like dying because of it. Abuse is definitely sadistic, but this is not good-looking. Baby, next time you write about the crematorium, try to make the career line serve the emotional line. The current way of writing the crematorium is that the beginning is right and the ending is right, but the skip button is pressed in the middle. He is a good author and an author who likes crematoriums, but he is not an author who can write about crematoriums. I hope Baozi's next crematorium article can write about the emotions in the crematorium in a more detailed and in-depth way.

"The boss only has 1.5% Of the mainland..." This is a big bug for the author ~ UBS

Heartbreaking 💔I tied it in one breath. Fortunately, it happened that the eldest sister had finished telling this plot point, otherwise I would have been heartbroken.