2025 Update copy:
This is a reflection. Growth is a very powerful thing. Since 24 years ago, I have been reflecting on what the core of this book is to express. What I want to express is the tragedy of patriarchy. Even though I have created many outstanding women in my books, there is still a fatal problem: the male-oriented perspective of the protagonist.
Although I added Qi Zhinan's first-person perspective narrative in the second half, the entire article is still a narrative structure from the male subject's perspective. This reminds me of a reader who spoke fiercely before. Although his words were inappropriate, his words made sense.
When talking about the chapter about women everywhere, she said that she already had such thoughts, but she still wrote about danmei.
The article is not locked and can serve as a warning to me. I think I won't write about Danmei again in the future.
[Gloomy and trembling M, crazy criticism × perverse and frivolous bastard attack]
Shuiyuanshan knew his sexual orientation when he was in middle school and resisted the fact that he liked men.
Until I met Qi Zhichu on that hot night.
He had never seen anyone like Qi Zhichu, who couldn't fight back when hit or scolded.
Qi Zhichu said: "Because I have killed someone and I want to atone for my sin."
I don't know why Shui Yuanshan wasn't afraid of Qi Zhichu at all when he heard this. He just felt so sad.
Sad people need a kiss.
So Shui Yuanshan kissed Qi Zhichu.
No matter if he killed someone or not.
We met again in the cemetery.
Qi Zhichu thought he had seen a ghost, and the cemetery he wanted to buy belonged to Shui Yuanshan.
Qi Zhichu: "Why are you buying a cemetery before you die? Sell it to me."
Shui Yuanshan: "Let's talk in three months. Or are you not willing to wait even three months?"
Without waiting for Qi Zhichu's answer, Shui Yuanshan added, "I have been waiting for you for four years, and I never feel that we have broken up."
※The present timeline and the past timeline are interspersed, narratives are interspersed, and the attacking and receiving perspectives are halved.
※The characters in the story have no realistic prototypes, please do not substitute them or interpret them.
※The copy has been screenshot and archived on October 10, 2023
Purpose: Strictly crack down on trafficking crimes
