If an angel breaks his wings, can he fly to heaven again?
If an angel has broken wings, can he still be considered an angel?
If I also become an angel, can I fly to heaven with him?
If I also become an angel, can we be angels together?
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Reader comments
It seems like something happening around me, I like it
Uh-huh, it's very pornographic and violent, but it's very pretty!~~~~~~~
5555~~I feel like I recovered without anything happening after amnesia...
No h... Disappointed... Why there is no h yet...
Sweat,,
I'm so used to scoring, but I'm actually giving myself scores, uh, I'm dizzy,
Thumbs up! ! Author's reply:
^0^
I was surprised to see someone on BS saying there were no comments, so I joined in the fun and came to take a look. . I didn't expect it to be so deserted. So I attached a long comment to give encouragement. The following is my opinion on this article, for reference only.
This article revolves around a jade hairpin and describes the heroine's unlucky journey through time. But, it's seven chapters long. . Finally passed through the bird. . It's not easy. It's very heart-wrenching to write in a big way. I want to talk about it in detail. Please hold me tight. . There is nothing wrong with writing this way, but the time-travel scenes have been worn out, and there is nothing new about this kind of time-travel. . Since there is nothing new, it is recommended that the process of time travel be briefly described without using too much pen and ink to describe it. Especially that jade hairpin. . It occupies too much space, and there is no plot in the entire article. . Writing like this is very slow, and readers won't have the heart to read it. Let alone writing a review, if you want to write a review, you must write it with content. If you just want a few unnutritious comments like "Great job." I can give you one from beginning to end.
Let's talk about the shortcomings of this article. The content of each article is too short, and one chapter is finished before I even read it. I remember someone said something, every additional step in the link will lose some people. In a short chapter, I don't see much content, and even after clicking on a few chapters, I don't see the specific thing to express.
In fact, the article is too short, and it is not easy to write a long review. There is no way to start with it. Let's just talk about the heroine. She is not the type I like. Well, I should put it that way. I can't tell what type of heroine it is. (Don't hit me.) The heroine appears in the heroine. The resistance of time travel, maybe everyone will resist the appearance of a new thing, but it is more of a kind of confusion, and even a little bit of novelty. Basically, every time travel in the article seems to be a forced time travel, so why not write something new? For example, the heroine heard that she was going to travel to ancient times, and she was very curious about the ancient way of life. She was a little yearning for it, but also a little afraid. A bit looking forward to it, but also a bit reluctant to modern times, right? Then, according to everyone's psychology, since they can't resist, they just ask a little about the way to get back. It must be brought over by the gods. It's better than walking through unknowingly, right? Uh-huh. . .
In addition, in fact, time-travel novels are ancient novels. Don't explain too much about modern plots. Many readers who like ancient novels do not like modern times. Sometimes when writing a novel, in addition to writing it well, sometimes you also have to think about the readers, because your novel is written for readers, not for yourself. Think carefully about the type of reader your article is intended for. Do you like antiques and taste them with aura? I still like ancient Chinese proverbs, but I'm just a casual reader who reads them. These two categories account for a large proportion among readers, but in general, plot is a very important thing. You should write a novel plot and don't follow the trend. If the plot you write appears in most ancient texts, it will not attract readers to follow your footsteps. .
In addition, I said that the above opinions are just a reference for you, and they do not mean that your writing is not good. In fact, you have just started writing the article and the plot has not yet been released, so I cannot make a correct evaluation. This comment is purely encouraging. I hope you can write better and better and the content will become more and more attractive. Hold on tight.
Finally, I would like to say that there are no comments and no one sees it as a small complaint. How long did it take to write the article and how many words are there? There are many people who have written articles with hundreds of thousands of words. They are almost finished and the clicks on a single chapter have not reached 3 digits. Writing articles You have to be calm. You can't eat hot tofu in a hurry. Your debut novel is here to accumulate writing skills and lay a solid foundation for writing good articles in the future. Writing articles means you have to be calm and endure loneliness. It is impossible for everyone to finish it in one breath. . Just be careful about coding, and don't think too much about whether or not these things are there. Once you've written well, there will naturally be readers who will whip you behind and ask you to write more, okay. . Hold tight. . ! ! That's it. . . .
Author's reply:
Thank you Jian Jian for your comment, thank you for the reference you gave me, I will try my best to write it down.
Come on, spread the flowers. The author replies:
Xiaoyu hugs~^_^
In my impression, those who wear masks are all handsome guys, such as Huang Shangshu and Tuxedo Mask. Of course, the possibility that Zhi Zhixiong is real cannot be ruled out.
Haha, Zhi Zhixiong! ! ! ! !
The adults are so funny
It seems like something happening around me, I like it
Uh-huh, it's very pornographic and violent, but it's very pretty!~~~~~~~
5555~~I feel like I recovered without anything happening after amnesia...
No h... Disappointed... Why there is no h yet...
Sweat,, I'm so used to scoring, but I'm actually giving myself scores, uh, I'm dizzy,
Thumbs up! ! Author's reply: ^0^
I was surprised to see someone on BS saying there were no comments, so I joined in the fun and came to take a look. . I didn't expect it to be so deserted. So I attached a long comment to give encouragement. The following is my opinion on this article, for reference only. This article revolves around a jade hairpin and describes the heroine's unlucky journey through time. But, it's seven chapters long. . Finally passed through the bird. . It's not easy. It's very heart-wrenching to write in a big way. I want to talk about it in detail. Please hold me tight. . There is nothing wrong with writing this way, but the time-travel scenes have been worn out, and there is nothing new about this kind of time-travel. . Since there is nothing new, it is recommended that the process of time travel be briefly described without using too much pen and ink to describe it. Especially that jade hairpin. . It occupies too much space, and there is no plot in the entire article. . Writing like this is very slow, and readers won't have the heart to read it. Let alone writing a review, if you want to write a review, you must write it with content. If you just want a few unnutritious comments like "Great job." I can give you one from beginning to end. Let's talk about the shortcomings of this article. The content of each article is too short, and one chapter is finished before I even read it. I remember someone said something, every additional step in the link will lose some people. In a short chapter, I don't see much content, and even after clicking on a few chapters, I don't see the specific thing to express. In fact, the article is too short, and it is not easy to write a long review. There is no way to start with it. Let's just talk about the heroine. She is not the type I like. Well, I should put it that way. I can't tell what type of heroine it is. (Don't hit me.) The heroine appears in the heroine. The resistance of time travel, maybe everyone will resist the appearance of a new thing, but it is more of a kind of confusion, and even a little bit of novelty. Basically, every time travel in the article seems to be a forced time travel, so why not write something new? For example, the heroine heard that she was going to travel to ancient times, and she was very curious about the ancient way of life. She was a little yearning for it, but also a little afraid. A bit looking forward to it, but also a bit reluctant to modern times, right? Then, according to everyone's psychology, since they can't resist, they just ask a little about the way to get back. It must be brought over by the gods. It's better than walking through unknowingly, right? Uh-huh. . . In addition, in fact, time-travel novels are ancient novels. Don't explain too much about modern plots. Many readers who like ancient novels do not like modern times. Sometimes when writing a novel, in addition to writing it well, sometimes you also have to think about the readers, because your novel is written for readers, not for yourself. Think carefully about the type of reader your article is intended for. Do you like antiques and taste them with aura? I still like ancient Chinese proverbs, but I'm just a casual reader who reads them. These two categories account for a large proportion among readers, but in general, plot is a very important thing. You should write a novel plot and don't follow the trend. If the plot you write appears in most ancient texts, it will not attract readers to follow your footsteps. . In addition, I said that the above opinions are just a reference for you, and they do not mean that your writing is not good. In fact, you have just started writing the article and the plot has not yet been released, so I cannot make a correct evaluation. This comment is purely encouraging. I hope you can write better and better and the content will become more and more attractive. Hold on tight. Finally, I would like to say that there are no comments and no one sees it as a small complaint. How long did it take to write the article and how many words are there? There are many people who have written articles with hundreds of thousands of words. They are almost finished and the clicks on a single chapter have not reached 3 digits. Writing articles You have to be calm. You can't eat hot tofu in a hurry. Your debut novel is here to accumulate writing skills and lay a solid foundation for writing good articles in the future. Writing articles means you have to be calm and endure loneliness. It is impossible for everyone to finish it in one breath. . Just be careful about coding, and don't think too much about whether or not these things are there. Once you've written well, there will naturally be readers who will whip you behind and ask you to write more, okay. . Hold tight. . ! ! That's it. . . . Author's reply: Thank you Jian Jian for your comment, thank you for the reference you gave me, I will try my best to write it down.
Come on, spread the flowers. The author replies: Xiaoyu hugs~^_^
In my impression, those who wear masks are all handsome guys, such as Huang Shangshu and Tuxedo Mask. Of course, the possibility that Zhi Zhixiong is real cannot be ruled out. Haha, Zhi Zhixiong! ! ! ! ! The adults are so funny