Seeing the sharp sword piercing through her body, he felt as if he had also been penetrated... Why... Why was he the only one left in this apparently perfect destination?
He raised his chin and looked through his heart: "If you want to be a cloud, I will never let go of your wind."
He finally raised the sword in his hand and pointed it at the army below the city: "I really don't want to be your enemy... But... I'm sorry!"
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Xiaosi, you didn't explain clearly what you said. I don't know if it's because of my poor understanding. It's weird to put this "bar" here.
Chen Bei smiled softly: "Susan told you that I was the one who informed Lu Lang that day. So you should have thought that from the day you arrived at the museum, I became Lu Lang's spy. My task is to watch you all the time and report everything to him 'truthfully'." The author replied:
Chen Bei smiled softly: "Susan told you, I was the one who informed Lu Lang that day.
It's changed to this, dear Xiaowu
Didn't I mention earlier that the male protagonist had more than a dozen missed calls? ? Why did she think the male protagonist was scared away by her when she didn't call back? ? !
Very good! Very good! Come on!
By the way, Su Su has received so many long comments after writing Chapter 20, so I will try to write one for Xiao 5. However, I have never written a long comment before or in the future. This is probably the first one. =V= Well, this is my first time to follow up on articles. That day, I temporarily registered a jj account just to follow Xiao 5's articles. It's a lot of firsts~laugh.
Let's get started with the digression, let's talk about Xiao 5's writing first. The subject matter is my favorite supernatural thing ~ although every story is new. But the main line is consistent. Like the evil force, each episode is a different story, but after one season, we know a lot of things from it, and then add new doubts. In this way, we have followed season after season. But you always feel that although Xiaomu'er is the protagonist, he is a weak person. But the strange thing is that it actually appears in almost every chapter. So Xiao 5 will think that it is It's not that the character designed for Little Fungus is weak, but I don't think it is entirely like this. Xiao 5's writing starts from the third person, just like Su Su's. One advantage of intermediate writing is that it can explain events clearly. But in this third-person writing state, every time I see Little Fungus, I feel that I am reading the first person. Little Fungus is not a weak child. But I always feel that everyone should protect him, that's because when everyone knows the truth, only he is unknown. So the explanation given to Xiaomu'er here is basically 0. I think this is a very important factor in Xiaomu'er's weakness. Think about the power of evil. Sam and Dean can have a tacit understanding but hide their own little secrets in their hearts. In fact, this is not called betrayal. Two people do different things with the same mood but the same purpose. This makes the strength of the two protagonists very balanced 0u0 So Xiao 5 should hurry up and let Xiao Funu clarify his position and stand up. Otherwise, this will be a very long article (readers are anxious><) By the way, Su Su. Although it is just my rush, he really did a good job in shaping the character's psychology. He has everything he should have and there are new breakthroughs in each chapter. So Xiao 5 has to put out some things immediately. Otherwise, he may not be able to bear the tail 0.0 (Okay Actually, I'm anxious too OJZ)
If Xiao 5 wants to use various points to break through and finally form a circle, it is okay to make readers suddenly enlightened for a moment! I recommend an anime to you called: "Wine of Eternal Life". I also like this method~~ But if Xiao 5 wants to write a book, he can also be like Sanshu, elongating the mystery of energy... So much that it is not finished yet. OJZ But one of the characteristics of Sanshu's writing is that the world view is very big from the beginning. In fact, some aspects of Xiao 5 feel a bit like an evil force~=v=
Okay.. It's a long story. I don't know if it's a long comment. I don't know if it counts as a comment if it's very long. Maybe it's just chatter..
I'm really feeling a bit nervous today. OJZ was really tortured by Susu's chapter, and I can't say that I was tortured. It's just that I haven't read that type of stuff for a long time, and it's weird for me. OJZ is really confused, so I'm just typing to express it╮(╯▽╰)╭
It's very late~ Go to bed first... An'an Xiao5=333= Please forgive me for the bad writing...
So short. . .
Come on come on!
If the heroine found out that something happened in the past, she would rather die than be with such a scumbag. It's absolutely disgusting!
Oh my gosh, it seems to be conveying the truth that all men in the world are liars. Poor two sisters.
How come no one reviews such a good book? It's a shame that my writing skills are so poor that I can't express my feelings.
I like this kind of heroine very much
Come on O(∩_∩)O~
I like it very much. Why are there not many words in each chapter? Author's reply:
Uh... Because there are too many pitfalls... Sweat... So...
Xiaosi, you didn't explain clearly what you said. I don't know if it's because of my poor understanding. It's weird to put this "bar" here. Chen Bei smiled softly: "Susan told you that I was the one who informed Lu Lang that day. So you should have thought that from the day you arrived at the museum, I became Lu Lang's spy. My task is to watch you all the time and report everything to him 'truthfully'." The author replied: Chen Bei smiled softly: "Susan told you, I was the one who informed Lu Lang that day. It's changed to this, dear Xiaowu
Didn't I mention earlier that the male protagonist had more than a dozen missed calls? ? Why did she think the male protagonist was scared away by her when she didn't call back? ? !
Very good! Very good! Come on!
By the way, Su Su has received so many long comments after writing Chapter 20, so I will try to write one for Xiao 5. However, I have never written a long comment before or in the future. This is probably the first one. =V= Well, this is my first time to follow up on articles. That day, I temporarily registered a jj account just to follow Xiao 5's articles. It's a lot of firsts~laugh. Let's get started with the digression, let's talk about Xiao 5's writing first. The subject matter is my favorite supernatural thing ~ although every story is new. But the main line is consistent. Like the evil force, each episode is a different story, but after one season, we know a lot of things from it, and then add new doubts. In this way, we have followed season after season. But you always feel that although Xiaomu'er is the protagonist, he is a weak person. But the strange thing is that it actually appears in almost every chapter. So Xiao 5 will think that it is It's not that the character designed for Little Fungus is weak, but I don't think it is entirely like this. Xiao 5's writing starts from the third person, just like Su Su's. One advantage of intermediate writing is that it can explain events clearly. But in this third-person writing state, every time I see Little Fungus, I feel that I am reading the first person. Little Fungus is not a weak child. But I always feel that everyone should protect him, that's because when everyone knows the truth, only he is unknown. So the explanation given to Xiaomu'er here is basically 0. I think this is a very important factor in Xiaomu'er's weakness. Think about the power of evil. Sam and Dean can have a tacit understanding but hide their own little secrets in their hearts. In fact, this is not called betrayal. Two people do different things with the same mood but the same purpose. This makes the strength of the two protagonists very balanced 0u0 So Xiao 5 should hurry up and let Xiao Funu clarify his position and stand up. Otherwise, this will be a very long article (readers are anxious><) By the way, Su Su. Although it is just my rush, he really did a good job in shaping the character's psychology. He has everything he should have and there are new breakthroughs in each chapter. So Xiao 5 has to put out some things immediately. Otherwise, he may not be able to bear the tail 0.0 (Okay Actually, I'm anxious too OJZ) If Xiao 5 wants to use various points to break through and finally form a circle, it is okay to make readers suddenly enlightened for a moment! I recommend an anime to you called: "Wine of Eternal Life". I also like this method~~ But if Xiao 5 wants to write a book, he can also be like Sanshu, elongating the mystery of energy... So much that it is not finished yet. OJZ But one of the characteristics of Sanshu's writing is that the world view is very big from the beginning. In fact, some aspects of Xiao 5 feel a bit like an evil force~=v= Okay.. It's a long story. I don't know if it's a long comment. I don't know if it counts as a comment if it's very long. Maybe it's just chatter.. I'm really feeling a bit nervous today. OJZ was really tortured by Susu's chapter, and I can't say that I was tortured. It's just that I haven't read that type of stuff for a long time, and it's weird for me. OJZ is really confused, so I'm just typing to express it╮(╯▽╰)╭ It's very late~ Go to bed first... An'an Xiao5=333= Please forgive me for the bad writing...
So short. . . Come on come on!
If the heroine found out that something happened in the past, she would rather die than be with such a scumbag. It's absolutely disgusting!
Oh my gosh, it seems to be conveying the truth that all men in the world are liars. Poor two sisters.
How come no one reviews such a good book? It's a shame that my writing skills are so poor that I can't express my feelings. I like this kind of heroine very much
Come on O(∩_∩)O~
I like it very much. Why are there not many words in each chapter? Author's reply: Uh... Because there are too many pitfalls... Sweat... So...
Who is leading the way~~ I forgot about it