A proactive woman fell into the Sui Dynasty. . I want to get ahead and fall in love, but the result^^ (non-NP text)
The previous writing was too wordy, and I should have cut out some things drastically, but I was afraid that I would not have time to update it, which would make my friends who have been reading feel uncomfortable. . . Moreover, there are some parts that are not very consistent with the later ones. If you don't modify it, it will affect new friends to continue reading. (After all, I read it from the beginning and found that it is really difficult to read it in one go. If you read it one chapter a day, it will be acceptable). But in the end I decided to finish the story and then make major changes.
It should also be noted that I thought a lot at the beginning, hoping to make the story fuller, so I laid a lot of clues, but there is also a weakness, that is, it is too confusing, and many questions are left there. You have to look at the back to understand. . . Sweat
This is my first time writing an article, so there are a lot of mistakes. Those with picky tastes and demanding perfection should proceed with caution.
If you really want to read it, I suggest you start directly from Chapter 21. . . Front. . One word: change
PS: Chapters 18, 19 and 20 were written most quickly. They were so stiff. I locked them first. I will correct them carefully. I can't do it without locking them. I'm so sorry, readers. Please forgive me.
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Reader comments
A very beautiful name and a somewhat poignant story. . Very good
I saw a typo again, haha~
Could it be that Xiao Nannan also lives a low-carbon life?
I watched half of it elsewhere and came to read the ending first. Fortunately, I didn't have to spend time reading the middle part after watching the ending. It turned out to be such a development and such an ending. This is an author with incorrect views! It was originally a good article to read, but thanks to the author for saving time and making up for the negative points. . .
I thought Xiaoyu would remember it, haha
However, Xiaoyu just doesn't want to admit it now, and he already cares about Qiao Mo very much.
According to Qiaomo's character, even if he is hit, he will not give up easily. I think everyone can see this.
Ke Shi, a psychiatrist, is not easy!
The reason why people are cute is because of their natural humanity, and the heroine and her friends like them very much.
I'm so excited~I finally saw a fanfic of this soy sauce fan that I've been silently cute for 10 years~
When I read the original work, I felt that he was the only guy who discovered the count's inner emotions without knowing anything about the count. He was so brilliant -v- although he has really become a soy sauce since the Colosseum... I always feel that Alexandre Dumas did it on purpose ><
The author is so cute~ The Franz he wrote is so cute~ I would like to communicate more with the author if possible -v-
p. S.: My favorite scene in the extra is actually the scene where Princess Heidi is stepping on the dog [feeding] and telling stories [hiding her face]
A very beautiful name and a somewhat poignant story. . Very good
I saw a typo again, haha~ Could it be that Xiao Nannan also lives a low-carbon life?
I watched half of it elsewhere and came to read the ending first. Fortunately, I didn't have to spend time reading the middle part after watching the ending. It turned out to be such a development and such an ending. This is an author with incorrect views! It was originally a good article to read, but thanks to the author for saving time and making up for the negative points. . .
I thought Xiaoyu would remember it, haha However, Xiaoyu just doesn't want to admit it now, and he already cares about Qiao Mo very much. According to Qiaomo's character, even if he is hit, he will not give up easily. I think everyone can see this. Ke Shi, a psychiatrist, is not easy!
The reason why people are cute is because of their natural humanity, and the heroine and her friends like them very much.
I'm so excited~I finally saw a fanfic of this soy sauce fan that I've been silently cute for 10 years~ When I read the original work, I felt that he was the only guy who discovered the count's inner emotions without knowing anything about the count. He was so brilliant -v- although he has really become a soy sauce since the Colosseum... I always feel that Alexandre Dumas did it on purpose >< The author is so cute~ The Franz he wrote is so cute~ I would like to communicate more with the author if possible -v- p. S.: My favorite scene in the extra is actually the scene where Princess Heidi is stepping on the dog [feeding] and telling stories [hiding her face]
Ah, I forgot to rate it. .