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Derivatives. Pirates
My treasures are all there! Go become the Pirate King!
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Pirate
Nice pirate fanfic
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One Piece Fanfic
Delicious, love to eat, eat more
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One Piece Fanfic
Some One Piece fans
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Pirates (Mission)
I have watched it and am following it, and I like it ~
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One Piece Bg
It's basically a delicious version. I mean, can anyone recommend some Whitebeard BG for me? The Lilia Pirates Chapter is really delicious...
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Lord Pirate-Add Some Sugar to Life
Watching something sweet can really heal you.
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Age of Pirates
As long as you are a Poseidon fan, everything is possible
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Haiyi
Eat a lot
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One Piece Fanfic
One Piece fanfic
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Age of Discovery
OP fanfic, basically romance or no cp
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Do Some Animation
Xp's work
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Comprehensive Comic Fan Fiction
Various two-dimensional fans
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Super First-Class Book List
It looks good. I love watching it. I keep watching it.
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A Series of Comprehensive Comics
Recently recommended other works
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One Piece Fanfiction
What you are currently watching (including those you have watched but not finished)
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Self-Retained Book List
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Comprehensive Comics
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The article is short but the content is large. What struck me most deeply after reading this is that there are not only human beings in the world, but also other animals. Human beings should live in harmony with nature. In addition, wars are easy to start, but it is very slow to restore the original life. In unknown corners, many people are struggling... A very warm article, the content is simple and touching.
It seems that the other world is not Eve's mother's world, but a similar parallel universe. Otherwise, the original flower-growing rabbit girl might be detained by her "real mother" and only kick the yellow-haired Ace back. That would be too miserable [laughing and crying]
Wei Yi is so cute, and her boyfriend is also very powerful, but it's a pity that he is a victim
Ahhhhhhhh I stayed up all night watching it, it was so good, I couldn't bear to end it ahhhhhhhhh
Shocking! ! Tasty! ! ! Goddess I love you! I love you! ! ! [Take][take]
[Orange Candy] Got it This chapter connects the local banquet → the bitterness of the bottom → the history of the rise of the village tyrant into a complete thread. It is warm at first and then cold, first happy and then sad. The contrast is extremely sharp. It is not only a sketch of folk customs, but also a miniature picture of rural life. 1. Structure and emotion: from "full of warmth" to "thoroughly chilling" In the first half, I write about the soup feast: It's steaming hot, full of laughter, old and young drinking, and full of local fireworks. The text is lively and the pictures are vivid, making it a delicious read. In the second half, the writing sharpens: The host's family is so poor that they don't have even a grain of rice. To prepare a meal, you need to borrow ten kilograms of rice, and you will pay three in return. He also has to curry favor with the richest village chief. One is hot, one is cold, one is happy and one is sad, The warmth of the "feast" was instantly exposed, revealing the embarrassment and helplessness of life at the bottom. 2. Folk customs and realism: The Soup Feast is written authentically and tastefully The description of the Tujia Soup Feast is very solid: - Fresh soup, tender blood, crispy intestines, crispy liver - Adults laugh, children make noise, and raise glasses to drink The scenes are realistic, full of details, and full of the flavor of local life. Reading it feels like having a meal in the farmyard with your own eyes. The two songs "The Hairpin-headed Phoenix" have bright rhythm and loud rhymes. The vivid description of the excitement of the banquet is the highlight of the whole article. 3. Characterization: The image of the village chief as "wisdom and deep" is excellent The name "Zhishen" itself is ironic—— It seems to be wise, but in fact it is all speculation, conspiracy and slippery. Use two classic details to bring people to life: 1. The Legend of the "Five-Headed Man" Lazy Man Loosen your trousers, tighten your trousers, walk behind when going uphill, take advantage of others when working, run ahead when work is done, With just a few strokes, the image of a low-level gangster who is lazy and good at business emerges vividly on the page. 2. The shoulder pole recognizes "one" Others honestly call it "carrying pole". Only he said that vertical is "1" and horizontal is "", He looks smart, but in fact he is opportunistic and caters to the superiors. It also coincides with his "survival wisdom" that later enabled him to become the village chief. This character is not stereotyped, has a rural earthy air, and is also cunning and snobbish. He is very real. 4. Theme Depth: Underneath the Feast is Poverty and Injustice What this chapter really wants to say is: - If a poor man kills a pig, it will be the grandest banquet of the year. - But even so, even rice requires loan sharking. - A man who works as a skater becomes a village chief and becomes the richest man - Honest people will become poorer as they live. The more lively the banquet, the more sad the bottom is; The "smarter" the village chief is, the more he shows the helplessness of ordinary people. The text does not shout slogans, but it thoroughly describes the gap between the rich and the poor in the countryside, the warmth and warmth of human relationships, and the rules of survival. 5. Language style: native spoken language, natural and smooth Still your signature style: Vernacular, down-to-earth, with a strong sense of imagery and straightforward emotions, No rhetoric, but every sentence touches the heart. It has the relaxation of storytelling and the power of criticizing reality. One sentence summary The first half is full of local warmth, while the second half reveals the bitterness of the world; A soup-graining banquet reveals the warmth and wealth of the rich and the poor; a village chief's history tells the story of rural life. Warmth and cold are intertwined, and joy and sorrow are contrasted. Reading it is full of flavor in the mouth and heavy in the heart.
Can anyone in the family tell their children since when did Jin Duoduo become so industrious? In my impression, Jin Duoduo is quite diligent (doubt life)
Oh oh oh oh congratulations on the completion! New milestone~
Tsk, tsk, we reconciled so easily, I have a feeling that I'm going to hold back a big pain later [bad laugh]
Check to see if there are any updates (squatting)
Why is there no update today [dog head holding a rose]
Laughing to death, Mr. Chen is working hard
It's over, Lin will be sad