Demining: practice writing and try out writing. There are many single arrows, and the copywriting is slightly inconsistent with the main text, but it's okay.
You can make suggestions and I will listen to them, but I won't necessarily change them (I would like to change them later)
Don't read the first two chapters... Well, they are written inexplicably. Just take a look.
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Moriel, who had lived in the orphanage for seven years, was adopted.
She was adopted by Mr. And Mrs. Edith, who lived at 7 Privet Drive, Little Whinging, Surrey.
Good news, they love her.
Bad news, nothing! She was so happy!
Admission notice? Magic school? Help! She was so excited!
And... Her biological parents seem to be unpopular? But she had never seen them. What does it have to do with her?
Purpose: Living happily is the most important thing