Cichao went mountain climbing with friends during the summer vacation, and then accidentally fell off a cliff with a strange man. Thus began her journey of fast travel. She will be colorful during her journey. The feelings of the subjugated princess for her family and country, the mighty chivalry in the world of rivers and lakes, the love of the common people in the world of immortals and demons...
Gentle and lovely woman × rebellious man
They met in midsummer and separated in the cold winter.
"I would like to spend my whole life waiting for a reunion."
The article is a bit slow
The protagonist is bg, but the supporting characters are bl and gl~
The early stage focuses on the female perspective, and the later stage focuses on the male perspective.
Purpose: Love the country, love the world, and love yourself
Reader comments
We should pay attention to the changing of the story scenes. The previous part is like a situation of cultivating immortals, but the sudden insertion of English is a bit abrupt and a bit colloquial. Secondly, the story line needs to be clear, and the character changes are a bit fast. Finally, the names of the characters should be clear, like "She gives her" at the end of the first chapter, and the following ones can be changed to specific names. This is my personal opinion.
We should pay attention to the changing of the story scenes. The previous part is like a situation of cultivating immortals, but the sudden insertion of English is a bit abrupt and a bit colloquial. Secondly, the story line needs to be clear, and the character changes are a bit fast. Finally, the names of the characters should be clear, like "She gives her" at the end of the first chapter, and the following ones can be changed to specific names. This is my personal opinion.