Carved Cinnabar Moles [Quickly Wear]

Because I like your article so much, this story suddenly came to an end and I felt very lonely. But I still really enjoyed reading about the four worlds. I look forward to seeing you again in my next work [hug] Because it is written with a translator, it may be difficult to read. Sorry

The boss wants to see the fifth world [crying] [crying] [crying] The tonic is finished.

Although Xiao Zhen and Xiao Xie got together and resolved their regrets, I still haven't had enough of it [crying]. I feel like I can see a few more worlds [crying]. The writing is very attractive, and it is very different from some of the current conventional fast-traveling novels. Xiao Zhen is not a paper person. Aura, with temperament, regrets, growth, and an ever-growing core, sometimes naughty, sometimes tough, sometimes soft, sometimes free and easy, sometimes leisurely... I look forward to reading the author's articles every day. I have searched and read every article. See you next article! It's hard work writing! I hope I can always be happy to see the big text [Orange Heart]

Probably finished reading. The mood is still beautiful, but sometimes the over-indulgence in atmosphere and lack of substantive plot makes the reading experience worse, and it feels more like prose than a novel. Even so, the unique melancholy mood is still very beautiful and a shining highlight. It's just that the author really needs to train his ability to "write stories". Talent and training are like the two wheels of a car and the wings of a bird. Many people just regret that they have no talent. And if a person already has such spirituality, how can he not do training or study the Dharma? Really just rely on inspiration and squander his spirituality without caring about it, and even abandon the beginning and end of the basic story? Relatively speaking, the first story is much easier to read, and it is much better than the previous works. Although there are still flaws in the rhythm and layout, if compared with the following stories, the first story is completely an outstanding student. The reason why the first story is "easy to read" is because the author has learned to add a substantive storyline to his atmospheric protagonist, making the whole story really "move". Although the ending is not necessarily wonderful, it is indeed a "story" with ups and downs, plus the charming protagonist's character and unique personality. Emotional poetry-like prose, beautiful yet sad, bold yet innocent, the author's own characteristics completely achieve the effect of one plus one is greater than two. It just requires you to write the story as complete as other authors of the same type. The strengths are so long, and the shortcomings can be astonishing if only a little bit is supplemented. Bai Yueguang's shortcoming is that he can't write stories, but after all, it was a work made a few years ago. I was pleasantly surprised after reading the first story in this book. I didn't expect that the following stories would still suffer from the same lack of plot, which really made me feel a pity. All in all, I am very optimistic about the author and hope that the author can continue to write with great concentration [Hold fist]

Great, is our next long open-ended book or slow-moving novel good? [Crying] I can't read enough [crying]

Why is it over? No, I haven't seen enough yet! [Crying] [crying] [crying]

Madam, your writing is so flavorful

Woman, if you honestly write about Kuaiwen, we can give you money to write new articles quickly, do you understand? [Please][Please][Please]

I really love this book and Bai Yueguang. It made me dizzy and painful.

What the hell? What did I see? The finale? It's fake

Goddess, I wait silently for updates every day [crying] [crying] [crying] I like the fifth world [crying] [crying] [crying]

Why did it suddenly end? The world of vampires that I was looking forward to so much has not yet written a qwq. I obviously saw the new world update yesterday. Why did I delete it and go straight to the finale [question mark]

I don't believe it's over! ! ! No mark! Help, help, I still want to watch it

It's not enough. I suggest you write ten more chapters.

Linwu has really walked through three thousand worlds. I feel that he does not have love for Xie Qili, but just family affection. He seems to be a free and unfettered soul like the wind, only doing what he wants to do.

Wu Zhen is a gentle wind. I am very happy to accompany you on this journey. I wish you freedom [crying] [crying]

It's great to see my brother [waving hands]

Not enough to see ah ah ah ah ah ah

I feel like the story is good but the ending is too rushed. It feels like an outline but I'm too lazy to write it down in detail😂

Adjust the rhythm slowly, don't be anxious, Ai Xin, etc., Looking forward to the next work [Spreading Flowers][Spreading Flowers]

It's finished so quickly, I still have to watch Wu Zhen's life [Love Eyes][Love Eyes][Love Eyes]

Teacher, when can we talk again [crying]

Teacher, there are still a lot of readers here who are waiting for food. When will they open a new book? [Crying]

It ended all of a sudden, so sad

It ended all of a sudden, so sad

I cried so much, why did it end so suddenly? I still wanted to stock up for so long and eat it in one go.

Finished so quickly????

Woohoo, I like the extra episode.

Not enough,,,, give me some more, give me some more

The ending is so beautiful that I love watching it