In this love dance, are the two dancing together, or are they dancing alone in front of the mirror...
Sorry, I don't plan to write Shen Ruyi's story yet. I'm sorry-_-|||
Jolie, how could it be? It's too late to be happy. Last night I sent your message to a friend and said that I haven't seen a friend like this for a long time. I grinned for a while, ^_^
I am very happy with all the suggestions and corrections. I will read them carefully several times and then reflect on them alone in front of the screen.
In fact, I have wanted to write a cute male protagonist for a long, long time, but my writing skills are too poor. When I show my writing to my friends, I think, "Ah, why is the heroine like this?" Instead of making the heroine unlovable, I would rather make the male protagonist annoying -_-|||
Maybe, after practicing for a few more years, I hope to be able to write about a lovely man who has everything in heaven and earth, kaka
ps: I don't want to take up too much of that one-third of an acre, so I put the message here. I hope you can see it.
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It is speculated that this story takes place in a human research institute in the 21st century. The main men among them are young, handsome and promising. They are elite members of a large family that normal people will never encounter in eight lifetimes. Their main characteristic is that they fall in love with the heroine at first sight. Regardless of their age, their main life revolves around the heroine, which directly leads to the heroine's death. When you meet people, flowers bloom. The characteristics of the character group are that they wear modern clothes and speak ancient dialects. The purpose of their language characteristics is "not awkward and swear not to be human". I read nearly twenty chapters with pain and couldn't bear it anymore. I finally had to vomit blood and abandon it. What a pity: Heaven, earth, why are people praising such an article?????
Very nice, keep up the good work
It is very good, like it
It's quite the writing style of a master's wife. Because I have read all the novels in this article, why are there no new ones in the past two years? Sorry, sorry.
I like Yiying and Ruyi, this is how a woman should be, she can afford to take it and let it go! It's not that I don't like Tang Jingtian, after all, he is also a victim of love. He just feels that he should be more open-minded and give up what he needs to give up. No matter how painful his heart is, there will always be a time to heal.
Not bad.... Finished reading....
I like my eldest sister, Ruyi.
Duan Yi also likes it, although it is true that it is bad, but Haoran dislikes it the most because it is half-hearted.
The emotional description is delicate and not bad.
Unfortunately, the overall style of the article is wrong. It is obviously a modern novel, but the author insists on writing it in the style of the Republic of China period, which is too nondescript. I believe it would be more appropriate if it contained less classical Chinese and more vernacular. It's not just ancient prose that has that restrained feeling. Just imagine how funny the scene would be if a group of men and women in suits or cowboys said random things.
Looking for Ye Guichen - I hope you are safe and please go home
If you see this post, please do not close it inadvertently, because it carries a deep desire to find your loved ones; if it does not take up too much of your time, I hope you can forward it, which may give hope to an anxious and sad family!
I really don't want to find my closest relatives in such a way.
In this post, I did not use your real name. I am worried that using your real name will cause trouble in your life and cause you to be dishonored. However, your lack of news has indeed caused unavoidable trouble to our family and our elderly parents.
Dear sister, if you can see this post, please call home to say that you are safe. If there is any difficulty, our whole family can find a way to face it together.
Do you know that because your mother was too worried about you, she has relapsed and is now being treated in the hospital; your old father is also losing weight day by day, and he is looking forward to your son's return sooner or later.
As children, even if we cannot bring spiritual or material rewards to our parents, at least we should not let our parents live in such fear, not to mention that our parents are already elderly.
Ye Guichen is the pen name you used when publishing online novels in Jinjiang Literature City. "Next Year Today" and "Waltz" are your works. In your own writing, the heroine is so kind and heart-warming. I hope you can wake up soon and realize that you don't have to take the gains and losses in life too seriously. It's better to face them as a family than to avoid them.
My parents are getting old and cannot bear the mental worries. I hope you can go home soon to avoid unspeakable regrets in life! ! Cut! Cut! Cut!
I kindly ask all my friends to share this missing person notice with your love, forward it to each other, or like it! Thank you netizens!
What follows is COPY, right? Such authors are being lazy!
When will you come back?
Not bad, but the male and female protagonists are not very active...
It's really beautiful! They are so good together!
It is indeed a good article. The person who wrote it uses emotions, and the person who reads it can feel it. Thank you author! Excellent writing style! Looking forward to your other new posts!
It is speculated that this story takes place in a human research institute in the 21st century. The main men among them are young, handsome and promising. They are elite members of a large family that normal people will never encounter in eight lifetimes. Their main characteristic is that they fall in love with the heroine at first sight. Regardless of their age, their main life revolves around the heroine, which directly leads to the heroine's death. When you meet people, flowers bloom. The characteristics of the character group are that they wear modern clothes and speak ancient dialects. The purpose of their language characteristics is "not awkward and swear not to be human". I read nearly twenty chapters with pain and couldn't bear it anymore. I finally had to vomit blood and abandon it. What a pity: Heaven, earth, why are people praising such an article?????
Very nice, keep up the good work
It is very good, like it
It's quite the writing style of a master's wife. Because I have read all the novels in this article, why are there no new ones in the past two years? Sorry, sorry.
I like Yiying and Ruyi, this is how a woman should be, she can afford to take it and let it go! It's not that I don't like Tang Jingtian, after all, he is also a victim of love. He just feels that he should be more open-minded and give up what he needs to give up. No matter how painful his heart is, there will always be a time to heal.
Not bad.... Finished reading.... I like my eldest sister, Ruyi. Duan Yi also likes it, although it is true that it is bad, but Haoran dislikes it the most because it is half-hearted.
The emotional description is delicate and not bad. Unfortunately, the overall style of the article is wrong. It is obviously a modern novel, but the author insists on writing it in the style of the Republic of China period, which is too nondescript. I believe it would be more appropriate if it contained less classical Chinese and more vernacular. It's not just ancient prose that has that restrained feeling. Just imagine how funny the scene would be if a group of men and women in suits or cowboys said random things.
Looking for Ye Guichen - I hope you are safe and please go home If you see this post, please do not close it inadvertently, because it carries a deep desire to find your loved ones; if it does not take up too much of your time, I hope you can forward it, which may give hope to an anxious and sad family! I really don't want to find my closest relatives in such a way. In this post, I did not use your real name. I am worried that using your real name will cause trouble in your life and cause you to be dishonored. However, your lack of news has indeed caused unavoidable trouble to our family and our elderly parents. Dear sister, if you can see this post, please call home to say that you are safe. If there is any difficulty, our whole family can find a way to face it together. Do you know that because your mother was too worried about you, she has relapsed and is now being treated in the hospital; your old father is also losing weight day by day, and he is looking forward to your son's return sooner or later. As children, even if we cannot bring spiritual or material rewards to our parents, at least we should not let our parents live in such fear, not to mention that our parents are already elderly. Ye Guichen is the pen name you used when publishing online novels in Jinjiang Literature City. "Next Year Today" and "Waltz" are your works. In your own writing, the heroine is so kind and heart-warming. I hope you can wake up soon and realize that you don't have to take the gains and losses in life too seriously. It's better to face them as a family than to avoid them. My parents are getting old and cannot bear the mental worries. I hope you can go home soon to avoid unspeakable regrets in life! ! Cut! Cut! Cut! I kindly ask all my friends to share this missing person notice with your love, forward it to each other, or like it! Thank you netizens!
What follows is COPY, right? Such authors are being lazy!
When will you come back?
Not bad, but the male and female protagonists are not very active...
It's really beautiful! They are so good together!
It is indeed a good article. The person who wrote it uses emotions, and the person who reads it can feel it. Thank you author! Excellent writing style! Looking forward to your other new posts!