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I have already written a long review in the review of Chapter 11. In order to achieve the purpose of urging the author to update, I will write another long review. Oh, my god! 2000 Words! As a time-travel novel, it is necessary to give the characters different personalities to contrast with the original work to achieve its own originality. In other words, by setting aside a background that readers are familiar with and then subverting that world, it can attract more readers because they have more or less inner desires to save favorite characters or a simple desire for destruction, etc. This type of article can satisfy readers' fantasies and is highly entertaining, but if it is an original work, then there is no need for the original work. Therefore, the consistency between the time-travel novel and the original work is also very important, and the butterfly effect produced is gradual. Every word must be carefully considered to slowly advance the plot of the story. It may deviate far from the original work, but don't worry, this is your original work after all. If the characters are not handled properly, they will be inconsistent with the original work, not because of the writing but because of a lack of careful consideration. For this time-traveling Sasuke, you should decide his personality, and then his influence on other people. Itachi and Naruto are the first to bear the brunt. First of all, I would like to praise the author for his very detailed character creation^^. Itachi's future will definitely change, which will require a new plot, like a tree diagram, which is a parallel world. There are endless possibilities because of your choices, but there is only one world you are in. Choose the world that is closest to the character of your character. This is your article. So although there are many ideas, you must resolutely choose the most reasonable one! The serious comments are over, now let's start the non-cj comments. Speaking of which, I resented Sasuke's first kiss to Naruto for a long time. It was really unfair. But my brother and Sasuke have been together for so many years and should have taken away his first kiss, Xie Xiaoying. This article just verified my reasoning, oh hehe~~~ I also wrote an article myself, but I didn't dare to publish it. Naruto, this idiot, finally figured it out! Really touching. . . . . . This writing is really fascinating. . . . . . (You didn't get me wrong, I used the period as an ellipsis because I was trying to make up the word count...) I hope the author can update more in the future. I clicked in with the intention of giving it a try. You can imagine how many people are like me but didn't click in. Updates cannot be interrupted. Once interrupted, many people will abandon this article. It can be less but it can never be cut off. I'll post some of my own writing to make up the word count. This is ＿＿Scene 10＿＿narration in the post bar: The prince did not find his love, and was frustrated and reciting poems in front of the window. Naruto: The bright moonlight in front of the window looks like a beautiful woman's skin. Look up at the bright moon and indulge in the gentle countryside. I want to find a beautiful woman, but I am afraid that I will choose a mate carelessly and marry a dominatrix. It will be inconvenient to climb up the wall. How can I be single? Reporter: This is Europe, how can the prince recite poetry? Naruto: This is of course the director's arrangement, and there are also poems in Europe. But why are there reporters? Reporter: This is a special interview. How did you watch this drama? Naruto: Too bad, but the ending is very good and close to reality. Reporter: So Sasuke and you... Naruto: That's right! We are already married. Reporter: This news is really exciting! The heartthrob Sasuke actually married you! ! Dear viewers, this station will exclusively broadcast this news for you, please don't go away.
Very few, but very nice. Come on↖(^ω^)↗
Big~~beautiful~~~~
Waiting for your update~~~The author's reply:
By the way, this is motivation T T! !
Yeyou~~·Thank you for your appreciation! Woo hoo....
++++++ Points, points, points
Where there is light, there is darkness.
Waiting for the arrival of light, in order to get a world that belongs only to him and himself under that light.
Ah~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~There is no reason to be conquered by the author's words
I still liked it after reading it. ． ． I like the tone of this article. ． ． I have the desire to read on. ． ． I want to know why I accepted him as my disciple. Why did this woman come out alive and then die in the mountains soon after? ． ． What I want to know even more is that no one has been his medicine person for five years. How can he try the medicine? Is he trying it himself?
I'm coming too~~Who are you? ?
It's not that I want to dive. The key is that Jinjiang didn't have this function on mobile phones before! I also feel very unhappy. Who told me that I can't touch the computer at home?
I have already written a long review in the review of Chapter 11. In order to achieve the purpose of urging the author to update, I will write another long review. Oh, my god! 2000 Words! As a time-travel novel, it is necessary to give the characters different personalities to contrast with the original work to achieve its own originality. In other words, by setting aside a background that readers are familiar with and then subverting that world, it can attract more readers because they have more or less inner desires to save favorite characters or a simple desire for destruction, etc. This type of article can satisfy readers' fantasies and is highly entertaining, but if it is an original work, then there is no need for the original work. Therefore, the consistency between the time-travel novel and the original work is also very important, and the butterfly effect produced is gradual. Every word must be carefully considered to slowly advance the plot of the story. It may deviate far from the original work, but don't worry, this is your original work after all. If the characters are not handled properly, they will be inconsistent with the original work, not because of the writing but because of a lack of careful consideration. For this time-traveling Sasuke, you should decide his personality, and then his influence on other people. Itachi and Naruto are the first to bear the brunt. First of all, I would like to praise the author for his very detailed character creation^^. Itachi's future will definitely change, which will require a new plot, like a tree diagram, which is a parallel world. There are endless possibilities because of your choices, but there is only one world you are in. Choose the world that is closest to the character of your character. This is your article. So although there are many ideas, you must resolutely choose the most reasonable one! The serious comments are over, now let's start the non-cj comments. Speaking of which, I resented Sasuke's first kiss to Naruto for a long time. It was really unfair. But my brother and Sasuke have been together for so many years and should have taken away his first kiss, Xie Xiaoying. This article just verified my reasoning, oh hehe~~~ I also wrote an article myself, but I didn't dare to publish it. Naruto, this idiot, finally figured it out! Really touching. . . . . . This writing is really fascinating. . . . . . (You didn't get me wrong, I used the period as an ellipsis because I was trying to make up the word count...) I hope the author can update more in the future. I clicked in with the intention of giving it a try. You can imagine how many people are like me but didn't click in. Updates cannot be interrupted. Once interrupted, many people will abandon this article. It can be less but it can never be cut off. I'll post some of my own writing to make up the word count. This is ＿＿Scene 10＿＿narration in the post bar: The prince did not find his love, and was frustrated and reciting poems in front of the window. Naruto: The bright moonlight in front of the window looks like a beautiful woman's skin. Look up at the bright moon and indulge in the gentle countryside. I want to find a beautiful woman, but I am afraid that I will choose a mate carelessly and marry a dominatrix. It will be inconvenient to climb up the wall. How can I be single? Reporter: This is Europe, how can the prince recite poetry? Naruto: This is of course the director's arrangement, and there are also poems in Europe. But why are there reporters? Reporter: This is a special interview. How did you watch this drama? Naruto: Too bad, but the ending is very good and close to reality. Reporter: So Sasuke and you... Naruto: That's right! We are already married. Reporter: This news is really exciting! The heartthrob Sasuke actually married you! ! Dear viewers, this station will exclusively broadcast this news for you, please don't go away.
Very few, but very nice. Come on↖(^ω^)↗
Big~~beautiful~~~~ Waiting for your update~~~The author's reply: By the way, this is motivation T T! ! Yeyou~~·Thank you for your appreciation! Woo hoo....
++++++ Points, points, points
Where there is light, there is darkness. Waiting for the arrival of light, in order to get a world that belongs only to him and himself under that light. Ah~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~There is no reason to be conquered by the author's words
I still liked it after reading it. ． ． I like the tone of this article. ． ． I have the desire to read on. ． ． I want to know why I accepted him as my disciple. Why did this woman come out alive and then die in the mountains soon after? ． ． What I want to know even more is that no one has been his medicine person for five years. How can he try the medicine? Is he trying it himself?
I'm coming too~~Who are you? ?
It's not that I want to dive. The key is that Jinjiang didn't have this function on mobile phones before! I also feel very unhappy. Who told me that I can't touch the computer at home?