After He Disappears

NO.1 The first book is finished. Romance, micro flow, micro fear, multiple perspectives. Overall, this is a writing practice, and I am trying to figure out the writing style and rhythm that best suits me. This is my first novel that I seriously plan to finish. Thank you for your support. Hope for more comments (joined hands) Excerpts from the article: (1) My name is Sui Zhizhi. As you can see, I am interning in a public hospital. I follow the old doctor every day, looking at this patient and that case, doing rounds in the morning and evening, and I have to face the wails of painful patients every day, or the death of ineffective rescue... Of course, there are not many people who have died, especially in our spine department. The only one I have seen is that someone suffered a broken spine and cervical vertebra due to a car accident last month. The injury was too serious, and the best time was delayed. He was pushed away covered with a white cloth without getting off the operating table. That day was the first time I faced death—— (2) There should be no movement in the intensive care unit at this time! Who is it? What is he going to do! All kinds of sounds suddenly came from the surroundings, the sounds of walking, playing, and noises. The deserted hospital corridor in the middle of the night seemed to suddenly come to life and was filled with all kinds of strange sounds. The light flickered, flickered, flickered, on and off, on and off. She looked at the glass window again, and there was a human face pressed tightly against it! "Let's go..." The man's face was squeezed and deformed by the window, and his original appearance was completely unrecognizable. He kept repeating a mouth shape, "Let's go... Go quickly..." (3) The brand new and solemn plaque "Lai Kee Pawn Shop" is hung on the door of the store, which is incompatible with the old appearance inside and outside the store. The old poster that had not been torn off was still clinging to the door, with the words "Welcome to the garbage recycling station" remaining. I looked at the crumpled piece of paper in my hand, and it clearly said "Any Shop" on it. Could it be that this is a huge work organization in the novel and different departments sent me the wrong invitation letters? Pursing my lips, I looked into the store through the glass, and suddenly I looked at the person in front of the counter. I don't know why, I shuddered involuntarily. The man smiled at me, like a bright poppy, but also like the legendary eerie and stunningly beautiful ghost-faced flower. It should be the shop owner, I ignored the slight discomfort and thought slowly, he is really good-looking. I pushed the door open and went in. The pleasant sound of wind chimes made a jingling sound as the door collided. Only now did I see the appearance of the shop owner clearly. (4) Each small room has an iron door with a small barred window. The dark blue iron door with peeling paint is tightly closed, and the brass keyhole is placed above the handle. It's not empty here. I'm not sure if there is anyone inside the door because I can't see it. But there were some unfamiliar faces outside the door. Both men and women, and people of all ages, are either frightened, anxious, or trying to stay calm. But no one had the time to notice me. At most, they glanced over and passed me by. The only thing they have in common is that they all have a key. Key? ! I looked at my empty hands and suddenly understood the nonsensical words of the shop owner in front of me. "..." So irresponsible? Is there a higher-level department? I want to complain! The key probably has a house number on it, so everyone stands in front of the corresponding door. Fortunately, people may have almost arrived, and there was only one empty door in front of it. I stood there consciously, waiting for the next arrangement. (5) …Forget it, it's all black history. The more Sui Zhizhi thought about it, the more dark lines formed on her face, and her expression was so tangled that she wanted to twist it out of her mind. Fourteen-year-old Qu Heng suddenly spoke, driving away the three- or four-year-old "little brat" Qu Heng in her head. "... How old are you now?" It was a hoarse voice between adolescence. "26." "Are you studying in college?" "I'm studying for a Ph. D. And doing an internship in the hospital." Qu Heng was silent for a moment and said: "It's pretty good." He has never seen 26-year-old Sui Zhizhi. He looks very mature and knowledgeable. It's just that my clothes are messy now. His facial features are completely different from when he was a child. If you look closely, there are only a few shadows. If she had to say who she looked like, it would be a combination of her parents' looks. It is indeed a transformation of women. Qu Heng thought to himself that he didn't know what he looked like at the age of 26, and whether... He was worthy of her. (6) Qu Heng: "Why should we help you?" Li: "I'm not helping me, but I'm also helping you." Qu Heng: "How do you say that?" "Do you feel like you have lost part of your memory? Is what is written on your shirt strange? Come closer and smell your clothes..." Li said a lot in one breath, then took a deep breath and continued, "Is there the smell of blood in the writing?" Qu Heng's eyes flashed with surprise. "Don't be surprised, it's normal for me to know more than you." Li blew her fingernails carelessly. "And I tell you very responsibly, if you continue to follow your previous approach, you will disappear from this world." "Disappear?" Sui Zhizhi answered. She instinctively didn't like this word. "Yes, disappear. You may feel that it is no different from death, right?" Li raised her eyes to look at them, "Have you ever heard a saying, 'The real death is when no one in the world remembers you anymore'." Sui Zhizhi: "Coco?" "Bingo! That's right, it's this movie." Li looked at her excitedly. "Forgotten by everyone?" Qu Heng thought about this word carefully. Li: "In fact, not only will you be completely forgotten, but you will completely cease to exist, as if no one has ever given birth to you. But -" The other two looked at her doubtfully. Li said happily: "If you are lucky, you will become an aborigine here." At this time, a suspicious faceless man passed by not far outside the door. Sui Zhizhi and Qu Heng: I don't want to, thank you. Also, why are you so happy? ! ! Purpose: Love, salvation, and reality