Update to see my new pen name: Taro Ni Cry Cry
Sorry for the trouble, everyone.
Purpose: It is everyone's responsibility to care for dogs
Reader comments
Well, look what a lovely article I found
I read it in two nights, covering the life of Bai Li and Fu Ling in just over fifty chapters. This is a very warm story. The image of Fu Ling in the early stage is vivid and vivid on the page, and Bai Li's silly and innocent nature is also deeply portrayed. Sometimes it even makes me angry. How can he be so naive! Many characters in Shili Village are also full of warmth. Fu Ling's family also gives people a sense of warmth.
But in the later period, for some unknown reason, Fu Ling's writing gradually decreased and was not as lively and lively as in the early period. Perhaps it was because of poor data in his works or because he was busy with his career. Nowadays, it is rare to see Gubaichongtian texts on the market that are not systematic, non-travelling, and do not carry portable space. Such a slightly textual, warm and healing Gubaichongtian is really rare.
There is absolutely nothing wrong with the author's outline and conception, but his writing skills are still a little lacking. If he continues to create similar themes in the future, my suggestion is: you can polish the characterization and details of the plot more, and you can also be more detailed in the textual research. This way you will definitely be able to write better works!
Finally, I would like to thank the author for bringing such a warm story, which allowed me to see the hope of ancient farming literature. Even if the data is not good for a while, please do not be discouraged! Good works will always be seen! ! May your writing skills improve day by day, and may you continue to work hard in writing. We will always follow the warm stories you bring! ! !
Hahahahahahaha shadow mountain pro max
If nothing else, this attentive and non-perfunctory attitude is worth the wait.
I rarely see this kind of article that makes people calm down and read slowly. I feel that no one said that your article is quite concise, and there is not too much boring text.
And after writing 200,000 words, it was not included in V [dog head]. The writing is good, keep up the good work.
Haha, although the male protagonist is a bit miserable, it's so relaxing
Looks great, thank you for the limited offer
When will Mianmian's book "Duck Boss" be released? [Poor]
Actually updated [Spreading Flowers][Purple Sugar]kswl
Damn, can you write three creations? Will indicate the source [poor]
I am the enemy of all science subjects! I've heard of "Backflip Boy" but never watched it
[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it
The more you write, the better. Looking forward to the next update.
We have fallen into such a shallow pit. Come on, author!
Let me see let me see
I really want to read it. Save it or something.
Yo yo yo, breathing is seductive [bad smile] [orange candy] I've got it
"Baby, this little phoenix's..." This is a big bug for the author~
Ahhhhhh, so sweet [biting the handkerchief] [biting the handkerchief]
All I can think about is Prince Zhang Huai [changed] [changed]
So cute we Rong Rong
Where is the promised wedding extra 55
"The knot between Yi and Mr. Shi" is a big bug for the author~
It should be Lu who said it right
Urging for updates, can the author update 20,000 words in one day? It scares me to death.
"Her material" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
Well, look what a lovely article I found
I read it in two nights, covering the life of Bai Li and Fu Ling in just over fifty chapters. This is a very warm story. The image of Fu Ling in the early stage is vivid and vivid on the page, and Bai Li's silly and innocent nature is also deeply portrayed. Sometimes it even makes me angry. How can he be so naive! Many characters in Shili Village are also full of warmth. Fu Ling's family also gives people a sense of warmth. But in the later period, for some unknown reason, Fu Ling's writing gradually decreased and was not as lively and lively as in the early period. Perhaps it was because of poor data in his works or because he was busy with his career. Nowadays, it is rare to see Gubaichongtian texts on the market that are not systematic, non-travelling, and do not carry portable space. Such a slightly textual, warm and healing Gubaichongtian is really rare. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the author's outline and conception, but his writing skills are still a little lacking. If he continues to create similar themes in the future, my suggestion is: you can polish the characterization and details of the plot more, and you can also be more detailed in the textual research. This way you will definitely be able to write better works! Finally, I would like to thank the author for bringing such a warm story, which allowed me to see the hope of ancient farming literature. Even if the data is not good for a while, please do not be discouraged! Good works will always be seen! ! May your writing skills improve day by day, and may you continue to work hard in writing. We will always follow the warm stories you bring! ! !
Hahahahahahaha shadow mountain pro max
If nothing else, this attentive and non-perfunctory attitude is worth the wait. I rarely see this kind of article that makes people calm down and read slowly. I feel that no one said that your article is quite concise, and there is not too much boring text. And after writing 200,000 words, it was not included in V [dog head]. The writing is good, keep up the good work.
Haha, although the male protagonist is a bit miserable, it's so relaxing
Looks great, thank you for the limited offer
When will Mianmian's book "Duck Boss" be released? [Poor]
Actually updated [Spreading Flowers][Purple Sugar]kswl Damn, can you write three creations? Will indicate the source [poor]
I am the enemy of all science subjects! I've heard of "Backflip Boy" but never watched it
[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it
The more you write, the better. Looking forward to the next update.
We have fallen into such a shallow pit. Come on, author!
Let me see let me see
I really want to read it. Save it or something.
Yo yo yo, breathing is seductive [bad smile] [orange candy] I've got it
"Baby, this little phoenix's..." This is a big bug for the author~ Ahhhhhh, so sweet [biting the handkerchief] [biting the handkerchief]
All I can think about is Prince Zhang Huai [changed] [changed]
So cute we Rong Rong
Where is the promised wedding extra 55
"The knot between Yi and Mr. Shi" is a big bug for the author~ It should be Lu who said it right
Urging for updates, can the author update 20,000 words in one day? It scares me to death.
"Her material" is a big thorn in the side of the author~