[Pre-released with the same protagonist: "The Law Enforcement Recorder of Grassroots Heavenly Civil Servants", Beimang working overtime becomes the story of the grassroots city god and the grassroots Heavenly Court cadres working together to build a better and happy life. There are historical celebrities living in modern times.
[This book was finished in a hurry due to poor condition and is not recommended for reading.
Beimang was bound to a villain system and learned from it that he was actually one of the villain bosses that the protagonist of the game "Eternal Life" had to fight against.
And the so-called "destined man" protagonist who was chosen... Was actually the new nephew from the technical school who appeared in the junior sister's family.
Beimang was shocked and called this impossible.
Villain System T44: If anything is impossible, get to work quickly! Otherwise, let the plot show you what true coercion is!
Beimang: Oh, it's impossible to go to work, and it's impossible to go to work even if you die.
Then Beimang found that no matter what he did, he would be misunderstood by the people around him.
When I meet old classmates and say hello, I am mistakenly thought that I want to kill them.
Even when he realized something was wrong with his junior sister and rushed to the scene as soon as possible, his nephew Su Hang firmly believed that he was the murderer of his mother.
Beimang: ... Take away your magical powers! Isn't it okay if I roll? !
So, in order to complete the villain's mission and promote the development of the plot, Bei Mang began his career as a drama god.
But... It is absolutely impossible for him to give in like this.
Bei Mang: What kind of broken class does it have five insurances and one housing fund? Just let people in!
In order to deceive the enemy, he backhandedly suggested that the villain system create a one-to-one turn-based RPG game with main missions in reality.
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The entire Wuturous World knows that Bei Mang, one of the top ten earth immortals, is a "ghost Taoist" who does all kinds of evil. After killing his junior sister, he also hunts down his nephew Su Hang, who is a "man of destiny", which is simply outrageous!
Until one day, during a live broadcast of a court meeting, water friends discovered: Wait, the thing around Beimang is not the beast silver mask used by Taotie, the ghost expert who has saved the lives of countless people who broke through the realm through popular science in reality, to hide his true appearance? !
Moreover, all the plots of the recently popular card-drawing word game "Eternal Life" correspond to reality one-to-one!
The water friends on the forum trembled, almost going crazy:
Damn it! No! Why is Taotie, the expert who single-handedly promoted "The Complete Record of Ghosts" and improved the survival rate of countless people in the ghost realm, the lunatic from Beimang? !
Etc! Is the uncle of the protagonist in "Eternal Life" also treated in this way? ! He was also a former classmate who was beaten to a bloody head because of his different attitude... Holy shit, isn't this right? Everything is right!
As the truth in the game unfolded, water friends discovered that not only Taotie, the expert who popularized the knowledge about ghosts, was Bei Mang, but also the unknown mysterious hero Yao Zhu who single-handedly killed thousands of ghosts to protect a city in the heaven-level ghost realm. He silently helped Su Hang fight against the chaos of "Bei Mang". Bai Yueguang Qiongqi, the founder of various sects who once made a big fuss in the clan's holy land, the Palace of Eternal Life, was all him!
The leaders of various sects in the Territory Breaking Alliance couldn't help but shed tears:
[So it turns out that senior Beimang has been fighting us with the mentality of training juniors?
[I can't spray, this is really the level of the ancestor...]
[I was wondering how could the Judge Ghost Lord, one of the top ten earthly immortals, pursue and kill a high school student for so long without success? It turns out that the released sea has gathered into the Milky Way!
[Woooooo Senior Beimang really has lofty ambitions. He has been enduring humiliation and hardship in order to change his determined destiny. It is really not easy. Wuwuwu! We almost attacked and killed him...]
[Woooooooo If it weren't for the game "Eternal Life" that made me look for clues, I really wouldn't know that there are so many details that hint at the justice of the predecessors.
[I really didn't expect... The white moonlight common to the ten earth immortals is actually Beimang...]
[Looking at the battle between seniors and us now, there are really signs of leakage everywhere, hiss - why didn't we see it at the time?
Beimang: Oh, of course it's because my acting skills are so good!
Su Hang was at a loss in the chaos: Who can tell him why the companion who sacrificed to save him is actually his biggest enemy!
The worst thing is that the other party is actually his uncle! If the other party has been acting along the way, then his uncle's acting skills are also too good? !
The founders of other sects and old classmates from Beimang: "... Nephew, you don't know something. Your uncle had a nickname when he was still in school..."
Su Hang: "What?"
The founders of other sects: "The psycho who plays a lot is called the God of Play for short."
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The male protagonist is evil-minded, has a vicious mouth, and has a yin and yang eccentricity. The old rules are indispensable for the war damage and illness. The distorted Black Moonlight with arrows on the surface is actually a sincere white moonlight with arrows inserted in the business batch. Workaholic, the true identity is related to the "Fishing General", it can be regarded as a little guest Easter egg.
The evil world of five turbidities, the absence of all the immortals, the dark wandering style of "ferocious beasts" protecting the world, the new Chinese-style overhead world view/Chinese-style horror/weird recovery/Chinese style Cthulhu/card drawing plot + meat pigeon word game/the forum has cp plots, but the proportion is very low, basically ke is cb-oriented
Intention: Today, on the road down Mangshan Mountain in Gubei, the yellow dust is old and heroes are gone, and people often hate the water Changdong in life.
Reader comments
It's so fast. I feel that this book is progressing too fast. Many things are not written in detail and are all written in one stroke. Many of the jokes in the copy are not written. Are you planning to write them as extras? Being in a hurry gives Yuga the feeling of being a colleague
Mom, after reading it now, I actually feel the same as the new plot of a certain game. It's a little weird and difficult, and it stops abruptly. I don't know what to say... [Lemon] I hope the next one will be normal.
It turns out to be Xijun! It's so unlikeable! What happened? You have become this character. Baby, there was such a big difference between you and the general back then! [Crack][crack][crack]
When I was guessing, I would rather guess the original author of that world than dare to guess that you are Xijun [Clown]
I didn't expect Xijun's personality to change so much in this novel [dog head]
After reading it, I will talk about the bugs I found. I hope the teacher can use them when revising the article.
1. Taotie's vest only appears once, and there are plot bugs. It is known that the protagonist and Xuantong wrote the complete record of ghosts and monsters, so why are many people who started describing it clearly seen the complete list of ghosts and monsters narrated by Taotie, but Xuantong seems to have no idea at all. After all, this book is very old. It was destroyed before, but I can still remember it now, and apart from the Earth Immortal, the young man probably doesn't have this kind of existence anymore, or maybe even Xuantong doesn't know about it. His partners should also know that they wrote it, but in the later and mid-term, the Taotie Vest is completely invisible, and it doesn't have much effect.
2. In the same way, Chaos disappeared completely after the mid-term. Judging from the original plot, Chaos should have died to save Su Hang, but in fact, he completely disappeared after that, and everyone seemed to be in no hurry.
3. There is something that Yi Yi Qiongqi could have said. For example, what disputes will he have with the Celestial Dynasty regarding the first "Man of Destiny"? After he stepped into the ghost gate, what happened to the Tianxian Dynasty and was recognized as a "man of destiny"? He knew how the Tianxian Dynasty would treat the Tianming people. Did he encounter it there?
4. The two most important bugs:
(1) In the early stage, the Earth Immortal's understanding of Beimang was that he had entered the ghost realm and disappeared for hundreds of years. Why did it suddenly change to entering the gate in the later period? The key is that the Earth Immortal did not watch the movie at all, and the change was very abrupt.
(2). There is no description of what happened after entering the gate. This point is completely blank.
5. In the copywriting, Taozhu's fight against heaven-level ghosts and gods to save a city and being stripped of his waistcoat are not reflected at all.
6. Suspected talent bug:
(1). The white thing was given to the underworld from the sky, and the pomegranate was given to the sea pomegranate after the red thing. So why can the scene of killing ghosts and monsters be used? This is very strange (and the performance is that he has seen Beimang use it before, but this can at least explain that there is a red thing, but what is going on now?
(2). In the known ending, Bai Shi returned to the underworld to be repaired, and Hong Shihai Pomegranate did not show up and was returned. So I would like to ask: How come the protagonist has talents after he is resurrected? Is it given by the World Administration after upgrading?
PS: I have no ill intentions towards the teacher, and I like the teacher's settings very much. I propose these only as a reference for future revisions. I hope it can be of some help🥹
Ahaha, I finally finished reading it after finding some free time. I really like that all the series are set in the same world view. It gives me a sense of surprise that everything is connected together, and a sense of peace of mind that I can see familiar people in strange places from time to time. But the teacher must have discovered the problem himself. The progress of these recent books has been too fast. Many details that can be written have not been written, and it feels a bit rushed. To be fair, I think the teacher should slow down. On the one hand, it can make the plot flow more smoothly, and on the other hand, it can also organize his own thoughts. Teacher, you are very good at writing about people, and the people you write about are particularly poignant to me, but the foundation of writing about people must be supported by enough specific examples and descriptions. I hope the teacher can adjust the rhythm. I want to write a lot but don't have enough time and brain. It is really annoying, but the quality must also be ensured. I hope the teacher can bring more good-looking works! [Orange heart][Orange heart][Orange heart]
Speaking of which, Linyue is also the second Lord of Taishan Prefecture in charge of the underworld [laughing and crying]
It's too rushed. Like the previous books, the plot is very good, the spiritual core is super good, and the characters are super cute, but the details are not enough and the progress is too fast. It would be better to stretch it two or three times and have more copies.
Ah? Ah? Hi Jun?
Is there such a big difference in personality? Or maybe I remembered it wrong [changed][changed]
Xijun, you are really a drama god [please]
This is our exciting combo! !
Xijun: Do you think you are having fun with me? Stop living! [Dog head]
Wait a minute, author, have you read the comments? The textual research maniac lost one person in the end! Caramel is a monster from the Earth and Sea, right? After Earthsea disappeared, was he also wiped out? He was not mentioned in the ending! Tell me whether you are dead or alive, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
As for Lin Yue's book, I didn't get to the ending [Took chin] Author, you win, I'll make up for it right now
I really want to re-read the General's book and review Lezi Renxijun [Make Me Kangkang]
I just went to the column and found out that the title of the Xiuxian University book has been changed. Not only has the copy been changed, but some new things (old people) have been mixed in. So will the publication of this book be put on the schedule? I look forward to the next one (the first one I am waiting for is in advance)
Hey, is this the end? Will there be other extra episodes in the future?
I've read more of Lin Yue's book [Dog Head]
In which book did Xijun appear? Is there anyone who can give me directions? I want to take a look. Asking for updates, asking for quick fat, come here to stimulate the author's potential!
Congratulations on the big completion! ! !
Pre-receipt of the next book with no CP for the male protagonist: "No spoilers in the sky, let go of the dark history of the monarchs and ministers?" !
Xiao Jingchuan, the founding emperor of Daqian, spent his life as a soldier. After finally conquering the country, he was ready to lay down his name and leave his name in history. When he opened his eyes, he was reborn as the foolish sixth prince in later generations.
And my cheap grandson is practicing alchemy, refining elixirs and cultivating immortality every day, and he gets sick and murders people violently.
The divine object King Qin's Bone Mirror bound him, and the [Emperor System] version of the mission chased him to complete the original historical trajectory, successfully have the last laugh in the chaotic battle for the right to inherit the throne, and then become the king of the subjugated country of Daqian, otherwise he would be punished by letting his black history go.
Xiao Jingchuan pondered for a moment. Seeing the treacherous ministers in power, the loyal and virtuous being killed, the common people living in dire straits, and the great power of Da Qian, he beat his chest and stamped his feet: "Grandson, I'm here to beat you!"
As for the script of The King of Subjugation? Never heard of it, it's just a piece of black history!
The divine bone mirror not only calls for him to be the king of subjugation every day, but also has various convenient functions, and even allows him to see everyone's character panel attributes, but...
Xiao Jingchuan looked at the osteoscope to help him choose talents. The three most conspicuous SSR talents seemed a bit familiar.
Aren't those the three best friends he had when he conquered the world two hundred years ago, the first-class heroes, and the three founding fathers of the country - the prime minister, the general and the national advisor? !
Xiao Jingchuan: Wait, bone mirror, can you explain to me what the "traveler" in brackets after the Prime Minister's name means?
Osteoscope:...
Xiao Jingchuan: What does the [Reborn One] behind the general mean?
Osteoscope:...
Xiao Jingchuan: And what does the [suspected translator] behind the Imperial Master mean? What is Kou Kou?
Xiao Jingchuan: God, please say something!
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Above the canopy brought by the bone mirror, a young history student named Lord Up opened up his new perspective.
["Everyone in the world knows that Da Qian is really lucky. He has a commoner emperor like □□, and there is also Emperor Qian Wu who is the strongest firefighter in the world. He carries on the legacy of □□ and forcibly extends the life of the dynasty for another 300 years."
"But the up owner has a subversive conjecture. I mean, what if the ever-famous Qian □□ and the legendary Emperor Qian Wu are both □□ themselves?"
"In short, this is a collection of ideas that assume that Emperor Qian died and became Emperor Qianwu."
"Let's take a look at our history together."]
Xiao Jingchuan: Ahhhhh! You are not allowed to say anything!
My underwear was taken out! Didn't you say we should release the dark history? Why only release his dark history?
On the other side, Emperor Yun Qi collapsed even more: Ahhhh! What do you mean my son is actually my ancestor?
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Four protagonists.
Sky screen spoilers/Nine Songs belief system/Dynasty fantasy/Character panel system/Traverser alliance/History enthusiasts online star chasing/Philosophical schools of thought with low martial arts and internal strength settings
The story of the founding quartet of the Qian Dynasty who traveled to the end of the Qian Dynasty when the unscrupulous descendants were in power and tried to save the day. The whole group pretends to be pigs and eats tigers. The flow overlaps with the Dihua flow. The male protagonist is a Chinese-style succubus.
The system punishment that changes the trajectory of history is to publicly broadcast black historical memories or videos related to later generations on the screen, focusing on a social death x
An atypical celestial drama, the celestial screen plays the past life, present life and future + the current world to seize the throne and ascend to the throne in parallel. It has a very exciting world view. Little angels can look forward to it x
The idea that was born in order to realize Shi Tongnu's beautiful fantasies and obsessions while chatting with classmates, there are a lot of neta historical jokes
Forced to Become a Phantom Thief After Binding Option Emulator
A New Passerby Lives and Works for Relief
General Yan from the Fishing Group Works Hard to Become the Most Popular King of the Game
The Textual Research Maniac Relies on Beauty and Strength to Save His Life in the Comics
After the Villain Awakens, He Is Favored by the Natural Enemies Based on His Misunderstanding Value.
It's so fast. I feel that this book is progressing too fast. Many things are not written in detail and are all written in one stroke. Many of the jokes in the copy are not written. Are you planning to write them as extras? Being in a hurry gives Yuga the feeling of being a colleague
Mom, after reading it now, I actually feel the same as the new plot of a certain game. It's a little weird and difficult, and it stops abruptly. I don't know what to say... [Lemon] I hope the next one will be normal.
It turns out to be Xijun! It's so unlikeable! What happened? You have become this character. Baby, there was such a big difference between you and the general back then! [Crack][crack][crack] When I was guessing, I would rather guess the original author of that world than dare to guess that you are Xijun [Clown]
I didn't expect Xijun's personality to change so much in this novel [dog head]
After reading it, I will talk about the bugs I found. I hope the teacher can use them when revising the article. 1. Taotie's vest only appears once, and there are plot bugs. It is known that the protagonist and Xuantong wrote the complete record of ghosts and monsters, so why are many people who started describing it clearly seen the complete list of ghosts and monsters narrated by Taotie, but Xuantong seems to have no idea at all. After all, this book is very old. It was destroyed before, but I can still remember it now, and apart from the Earth Immortal, the young man probably doesn't have this kind of existence anymore, or maybe even Xuantong doesn't know about it. His partners should also know that they wrote it, but in the later and mid-term, the Taotie Vest is completely invisible, and it doesn't have much effect. 2. In the same way, Chaos disappeared completely after the mid-term. Judging from the original plot, Chaos should have died to save Su Hang, but in fact, he completely disappeared after that, and everyone seemed to be in no hurry. 3. There is something that Yi Yi Qiongqi could have said. For example, what disputes will he have with the Celestial Dynasty regarding the first "Man of Destiny"? After he stepped into the ghost gate, what happened to the Tianxian Dynasty and was recognized as a "man of destiny"? He knew how the Tianxian Dynasty would treat the Tianming people. Did he encounter it there? 4. The two most important bugs: (1) In the early stage, the Earth Immortal's understanding of Beimang was that he had entered the ghost realm and disappeared for hundreds of years. Why did it suddenly change to entering the gate in the later period? The key is that the Earth Immortal did not watch the movie at all, and the change was very abrupt. (2). There is no description of what happened after entering the gate. This point is completely blank. 5. In the copywriting, Taozhu's fight against heaven-level ghosts and gods to save a city and being stripped of his waistcoat are not reflected at all. 6. Suspected talent bug: (1). The white thing was given to the underworld from the sky, and the pomegranate was given to the sea pomegranate after the red thing. So why can the scene of killing ghosts and monsters be used? This is very strange (and the performance is that he has seen Beimang use it before, but this can at least explain that there is a red thing, but what is going on now? (2). In the known ending, Bai Shi returned to the underworld to be repaired, and Hong Shihai Pomegranate did not show up and was returned. So I would like to ask: How come the protagonist has talents after he is resurrected? Is it given by the World Administration after upgrading? PS: I have no ill intentions towards the teacher, and I like the teacher's settings very much. I propose these only as a reference for future revisions. I hope it can be of some help🥹
Ahaha, I finally finished reading it after finding some free time. I really like that all the series are set in the same world view. It gives me a sense of surprise that everything is connected together, and a sense of peace of mind that I can see familiar people in strange places from time to time. But the teacher must have discovered the problem himself. The progress of these recent books has been too fast. Many details that can be written have not been written, and it feels a bit rushed. To be fair, I think the teacher should slow down. On the one hand, it can make the plot flow more smoothly, and on the other hand, it can also organize his own thoughts. Teacher, you are very good at writing about people, and the people you write about are particularly poignant to me, but the foundation of writing about people must be supported by enough specific examples and descriptions. I hope the teacher can adjust the rhythm. I want to write a lot but don't have enough time and brain. It is really annoying, but the quality must also be ensured. I hope the teacher can bring more good-looking works! [Orange heart][Orange heart][Orange heart]
Speaking of which, Linyue is also the second Lord of Taishan Prefecture in charge of the underworld [laughing and crying]
It's too rushed. Like the previous books, the plot is very good, the spiritual core is super good, and the characters are super cute, but the details are not enough and the progress is too fast. It would be better to stretch it two or three times and have more copies.
Ah? Ah? Hi Jun? Is there such a big difference in personality? Or maybe I remembered it wrong [changed][changed]
Xijun, you are really a drama god [please]
This is our exciting combo! !
Xijun: Do you think you are having fun with me? Stop living! [Dog head]
Wait a minute, author, have you read the comments? The textual research maniac lost one person in the end! Caramel is a monster from the Earth and Sea, right? After Earthsea disappeared, was he also wiped out? He was not mentioned in the ending! Tell me whether you are dead or alive, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
As for Lin Yue's book, I didn't get to the ending [Took chin] Author, you win, I'll make up for it right now
I really want to re-read the General's book and review Lezi Renxijun [Make Me Kangkang]
I just went to the column and found out that the title of the Xiuxian University book has been changed. Not only has the copy been changed, but some new things (old people) have been mixed in. So will the publication of this book be put on the schedule? I look forward to the next one (the first one I am waiting for is in advance)
Hey, is this the end? Will there be other extra episodes in the future?
I've read more of Lin Yue's book [Dog Head]
In which book did Xijun appear? Is there anyone who can give me directions? I want to take a look. Asking for updates, asking for quick fat, come here to stimulate the author's potential!
Congratulations on the big completion! ! !
Pre-receipt of the next book with no CP for the male protagonist: "No spoilers in the sky, let go of the dark history of the monarchs and ministers?" ! Xiao Jingchuan, the founding emperor of Daqian, spent his life as a soldier. After finally conquering the country, he was ready to lay down his name and leave his name in history. When he opened his eyes, he was reborn as the foolish sixth prince in later generations. And my cheap grandson is practicing alchemy, refining elixirs and cultivating immortality every day, and he gets sick and murders people violently. The divine object King Qin's Bone Mirror bound him, and the [Emperor System] version of the mission chased him to complete the original historical trajectory, successfully have the last laugh in the chaotic battle for the right to inherit the throne, and then become the king of the subjugated country of Daqian, otherwise he would be punished by letting his black history go. Xiao Jingchuan pondered for a moment. Seeing the treacherous ministers in power, the loyal and virtuous being killed, the common people living in dire straits, and the great power of Da Qian, he beat his chest and stamped his feet: "Grandson, I'm here to beat you!" As for the script of The King of Subjugation? Never heard of it, it's just a piece of black history! The divine bone mirror not only calls for him to be the king of subjugation every day, but also has various convenient functions, and even allows him to see everyone's character panel attributes, but... Xiao Jingchuan looked at the osteoscope to help him choose talents. The three most conspicuous SSR talents seemed a bit familiar. Aren't those the three best friends he had when he conquered the world two hundred years ago, the first-class heroes, and the three founding fathers of the country - the prime minister, the general and the national advisor? ! Xiao Jingchuan: Wait, bone mirror, can you explain to me what the "traveler" in brackets after the Prime Minister's name means? Osteoscope:... Xiao Jingchuan: What does the [Reborn One] behind the general mean? Osteoscope:... Xiao Jingchuan: And what does the [suspected translator] behind the Imperial Master mean? What is Kou Kou? Xiao Jingchuan: God, please say something! ————————— Above the canopy brought by the bone mirror, a young history student named Lord Up opened up his new perspective. ["Everyone in the world knows that Da Qian is really lucky. He has a commoner emperor like □□, and there is also Emperor Qian Wu who is the strongest firefighter in the world. He carries on the legacy of □□ and forcibly extends the life of the dynasty for another 300 years." "But the up owner has a subversive conjecture. I mean, what if the ever-famous Qian □□ and the legendary Emperor Qian Wu are both □□ themselves?" "In short, this is a collection of ideas that assume that Emperor Qian died and became Emperor Qianwu." "Let's take a look at our history together."] Xiao Jingchuan: Ahhhhh! You are not allowed to say anything! My underwear was taken out! Didn't you say we should release the dark history? Why only release his dark history? On the other side, Emperor Yun Qi collapsed even more: Ahhhh! What do you mean my son is actually my ancestor? ————————— Four protagonists. Sky screen spoilers/Nine Songs belief system/Dynasty fantasy/Character panel system/Traverser alliance/History enthusiasts online star chasing/Philosophical schools of thought with low martial arts and internal strength settings The story of the founding quartet of the Qian Dynasty who traveled to the end of the Qian Dynasty when the unscrupulous descendants were in power and tried to save the day. The whole group pretends to be pigs and eats tigers. The flow overlaps with the Dihua flow. The male protagonist is a Chinese-style succubus. The system punishment that changes the trajectory of history is to publicly broadcast black historical memories or videos related to later generations on the screen, focusing on a social death x An atypical celestial drama, the celestial screen plays the past life, present life and future + the current world to seize the throne and ascend to the throne in parallel. It has a very exciting world view. Little angels can look forward to it x The idea that was born in order to realize Shi Tongnu's beautiful fantasies and obsessions while chatting with classmates, there are a lot of neta historical jokes