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Cyberpunk mediocrity city.
Technologicalism is supreme, electronic machinery and artificial intelligence are developed enough to make fakes look real, and twisted love has become prevalent.
Humans, androids, AI, cyberpsychosis, high-risk wanted criminals, Ex Machina and electronic pets....
Technology makes the impossible possible
"My soul always trembles when I talk to you. I search for answers but can't find it, and human writing... Records this failure as love."
——"Then, until death do us part"
#rivalsturnedlovers
#fatalism
Radio report:
Machinery and body are integrated, airships and steam waves, punk cowboys, retroism, trendy interstellar, human beings communicate with brain waves here, virtual reality is indistinguishable, illusions are disillusioned, cyberpsychosis will crawl to everyone's window, magic fire burns gilded pillars, androids woo the world...
The old fire will cry towards you.
Cynical Combat Power Ceiling Thug Attack vs. Blond Prosthetic Eye Flower Beauty Shou
Qiangqiang, 1v1, he, double clean
In short, it's a story about two handsome bounty hunters who didn't like each other, but then joined forces to kill high-risk criminals and start a road to revenge.
Food Guide
Slow-burning, plot-oriented, very cyberpunk
Please do not give spoilers in the comment area and support rational discussion.
There are a lot of private facilities, the shelves are very empty, and it tends to be a group portrait.
There is a lily line, a bg and a sister dog, and the main cp will not be reversed unless it is removed.
Let your imagination run wild, please do not go online.
Intention: Dare to love, dare to hate, be free and easy
Reader comments
After reading it, I didn't know what words to use to describe the bond between human beings and the world, until I saw Zuo's words, "The lightness of life lies in time, the weight of life lies in feelings, and human beings cannot live without sincere emotions." This constitutes the human world, and people with good intentions have always chosen each other.
What moved me the most was that every character, whether the so-called "protagonist" or the so-called "supporting character", has his own story and his own personality. He is encountered because of his existence rather than becoming a stepping stone for others.
Tears - Su Santang is really a person who is very good at playing with people's hearts. At first I suspected that he was crying, then halfway through the movie he firmly said that the tears must not be Su Santang, and at the end I was shocked by "The tears are by your side", which really made me spin around. After crying for so long, he finally saw himself clearly and lost the true love contained in his sneakers. He couldn't let go of his friends and family who had been with him from the slums, and he couldn't let go of the life that made him feel guilty and nostalgic. "I am a melancholy guest in the world. I know what happened to you, and I burst into tears. I recall my life with a heartbroken sound."
Fan Pingsheng is a really complicated person. After seeing the extra story, he personally planned the car accident but found out that he had a will after his parents died. He brought Su Santang back from outside the city but caused the city to be destroyed. A huge sense of absurdity rushed into his heart. He was afraid of not being chosen (personal opinion), so after Su Santang had always firmly chosen him, he was willing to ask Po Meng to help give Su Santang a "relief".
Qingniao, Liu Ba, and Xing Qianhua lived so wonderfully and hard. In the days to come, she would save countless Liu Ba and Shen Mengdi. The sentence "If God lets me point the gun at my sister, I will point the gun at God" in the novel is very shocking. After seeing Ahua cry, I also know that she will not forget, nor will she forget everyone who loves her and helps her to save her.
Narcissus - Lian Ruqing, this criminal who does not kill children, is a very tough and powerful woman and a very tough and powerful mother.
Lian Xiaoqing, this android woman finally took the position of commander. After she exchanged little red flowers for food, after she experienced the tears of separation and empathy with her mother, after she experienced the malice and kindness from humans... She will work tirelessly for the cause of peaceful coexistence between androids and humans. She inherited the mantle of Narcissus, but she still misses her mother.
Honey - Gu Shanrui, whose achievements were stolen, falsely accused and imprisoned, suppressed and humiliated, shot and killed the person he loved most for the first time... You were finally exonerated, you finally had no regrets, you finally welcomed death or new life with a smile.
Yan Yibai may be extreme, but he is by no means a villain. He will set up a screen painting guild when androids need it, and he will stand up for humans when they need it. He was "betrayed" because of his stance, and "brave" because of his true feelings.
Wang Mei - "The world slandered me until the bouquet of flowers was thrown to me". She has always been a capable, ambitious, brave and tenacious woman.
Women's Health and Welfare Home - You Panpan, Chu Xue, Wang Fuchun, Lin Wanxia, Jiang Rouyao... Everyone lives hard and tenaciously, but the heavenly Women's Health and Welfare Home has turned into a hellish Bichun Garden. Fortunately, justice is immortal and injustice is over.
Dou Zhang's encounter with Shu was never careless or unkind. They will remember, they will not forget, they will not forget Lung City, they will not forget history, they will not forget those who have left, and they will not forget the help and kindness they received along the way.
Dou Zhang, Fan Shuyu, Gu Shanrui, Xing Qianhua, Lian Ruqing, Lian Ruchen, Yan Yibai, Fang Mingzheng, Wang Mei, You Panpan, You Wuxian, Wang Shun, Mo Lan, A Yuan, Dou Lianghui, Fu Lusong, Fu Lusong's parents, Lian Xiaoqing, Victor, Jiang Zhenxian, Lao Han , Lark, Little Lark, Lin Weixun, Pete... Everyone got to know each other because of true love. True love exists in the world. Human beings cannot lose true emotions before they are called life. Androids have true emotions and are called life. Those who live as the protagonists of their own lives will have flowers along the way, and there will be hope in the future. Those who left will sleep forever and never wake up. I only hope that their heroic spirits will ascend to the sky and never forget the way they came. When you encounter injustice or prejudice, knock this hypocritical world over with one punch! Throw the bouquet to yourself!
Maybe after the story I can see ends, I have forgotten your shortcomings. I hope you will be healthy and happy, always maintain your original intention, always keep your enthusiasm, never decline, never give up, and never forget.
Thank you to the author for presenting such an excellent plot with such sincere feelings. I wish the author and all readers and friends good health and happiness, always maintain their original intention, always maintain their enthusiasm, never decline, never give up, and never forget. Hope we can meet again in other excellent works.
The teacher cried to death. This article is really good! ! ! Recently, I have been searching for books that I haven't read in the collection of authors. After reading the copy, I wanted to read it, but I didn't notice that the number of collections was only over 3,000. I thought the plot was very exciting and wanted to read everyone's comments and discussions about the plot, only to find that few people had read it.
I am not a black-and-white character. Many of the villains in Teacher's article give people the feeling that they are evil but good. They do something wrong but they still feel regretful when they die. They are complete in your writing.
Including the bionic man. In fact, the setting of the bionic man is very vague. Is there any difference between him and humans? Yes or no. Yan is an android, but he has his own thoughts and opinions, but (what is the name of the one who died and was made into an android by Su) is obviously like a robot. He doesn't feel anything about being beaten, scolded or abused. Even I don't feel anything. I think he is just like a robot and he doesn't feel pain. But looking back, if I think about it, androids will feel pain. They have feelings, so I can't tell. I'm just like people in that world. I can't make a decision or tell the result. Is there any difference between androids and humans...
The person Su is really complicated, thanks to the teacher for writing it. It is true that he fell in love with his brother innocently at the beginning, and his resistance was just a personal choice. There is no right or wrong, and the rest of the final decisions are all wrong, so it leads to an inevitable wrong ending... It is the biggest mistake to admit the wrong person, and it is even more ridiculous to express your feelings through others. It is even more ironic that you love the wrong person, and it is the brother who loves the brother who is greedy for the younger brother. In fact, my brain is not so clear that I can completely analyze Su. In short, there is evil but there is good but evil.
Teacher, keep writing! I will recommend this book to others. I can personally assert that this book is no worse than those on the list. In terms of logic and the setting of people's good and evil, it may be better than what many people have written. (I don't have much writing skills and I'm not a person who can write novels, but I think I can still say something after reading thousands of books in Jinjiang)
Su Santang. Love is right and the rest is wrong.
Hey, so Shu Yu and Fan Pingsheng can't be the same. Shu Yu is very kind in his heart, so his starting point is good, but Fan Pingsheng... I don't deny that he does have good things, but his purpose is too strong and he demands rewards for everything. How can this be?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, teacher, I really love this article. I opened Jinjiang today and suddenly found that it was updated. I immediately came to watch the extra story. Young master Dou Gong is 99999, happy wedding! Lung City will get better and better! ! For me, this article is really good. Every character is full and three-dimensional. It really makes us not underestimate any supporting role. Also, teachers must pay attention to their health when writing essays! [Crying] [crying]
The teacher is really great! If the physical book is released, I will really buy a set and donate it! Simply a work of art! I have read hundreds of novels, and this one is really the top one among all the novels I have read [][]. It's so shocking.
Wow, it's the first time I've seen a welfare episode
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh not did Su Santang suddenly become three dimensional
Super touching... Looking forward to the extras and the refinement! After repairing it, I will brush [dog head] three times
Is there any update yet? I'll tell you more, I won't come here anymore.
Sprinkle flowers! ! ! The teacher wrote an excellent article, and his penmanship is as good as any other!
Tianyi accidentally clicked on the welfare episode, and then he was confused by the spoilers. How could he be like this? When I saw that sentence, I was completely stunned [split][split]
So. The gold belt for murder and arson. Bad guys and good guys are doomed
The character Su Santang is really well written.
I haven't been to Xiaolujiang for a long time, and I was really happy when I found out about the new extras. The two babies will be happy for a long time, and Lung City will get better and better. Finally, I am very grateful to the teacher for persisting in writing this book under great pressure and writing it very well. Finally, I wish the teacher good health. I hope this book and the teacher's future books will be a big hit.
It's a side story! ! 55 So touched
Goddess, I miss you. Didn't I say before that I would come back on May Day to write? [Crying]
After finishing the second brush, I am still shocked. The teacher's writing is so awesome! Will there be updates on the remaining episodes? I really want to watch them [crying]
Excellent holy product, group portrait yyds! !
I cried at the end... It was so touching...
Help, go back and re-read the revised chapters. I feel like I really can't look directly at Su Santang, ah ah ah ah, super movie king
When you see a new episode, click in. It makes my heart soft. Dou Zhang and Shuyu Baobao will be fine forever. [Poor] [Poor] [Poor]
I actually searched on Weibo and found "Empty Box" [Glasses] written by Teacher Laichun in 2021 (I was screaming in my heart to see what good thing I found!!) Comparing the writing style between that time and today, I have really improved a lot! [Red Heart][Red Heart] But the character still has a familiar flavor
It's so sweet (I pound the ground)
I heard it's good, come and have a look
Teacher, not only does it have super words, I found this friend~(?▽?~) She is also recommending your book [Lop-eared Rabbit Head] in Xiaohongshu.
It looks good, I can't write a long review, I can only say it looks good [Dog's Head Holds a Rose]
I want to slap myself twice, my hands are so mean [cracked], I thought only 50% can read the welfare stamp~~~[Cat Claw] Give yourself a pair of eyes that you haven't seen yet [Sunglasses] [Shut up]
Two pairs of sister dogs are not a perfect pair.
Well, I came back to read it after some time. It may be because there is no main CP extra chapter. I feel that the story is not finished. It seems that there is a new prologue that has not started. The ending feels a bit abrupt. I don't know how the construction of Lung City is going. I hope Shu Yu and Dou Zhang will be fine.
After reading it, I didn't know what words to use to describe the bond between human beings and the world, until I saw Zuo's words, "The lightness of life lies in time, the weight of life lies in feelings, and human beings cannot live without sincere emotions." This constitutes the human world, and people with good intentions have always chosen each other. What moved me the most was that every character, whether the so-called "protagonist" or the so-called "supporting character", has his own story and his own personality. He is encountered because of his existence rather than becoming a stepping stone for others. Tears - Su Santang is really a person who is very good at playing with people's hearts. At first I suspected that he was crying, then halfway through the movie he firmly said that the tears must not be Su Santang, and at the end I was shocked by "The tears are by your side", which really made me spin around. After crying for so long, he finally saw himself clearly and lost the true love contained in his sneakers. He couldn't let go of his friends and family who had been with him from the slums, and he couldn't let go of the life that made him feel guilty and nostalgic. "I am a melancholy guest in the world. I know what happened to you, and I burst into tears. I recall my life with a heartbroken sound." Fan Pingsheng is a really complicated person. After seeing the extra story, he personally planned the car accident but found out that he had a will after his parents died. He brought Su Santang back from outside the city but caused the city to be destroyed. A huge sense of absurdity rushed into his heart. He was afraid of not being chosen (personal opinion), so after Su Santang had always firmly chosen him, he was willing to ask Po Meng to help give Su Santang a "relief". Qingniao, Liu Ba, and Xing Qianhua lived so wonderfully and hard. In the days to come, she would save countless Liu Ba and Shen Mengdi. The sentence "If God lets me point the gun at my sister, I will point the gun at God" in the novel is very shocking. After seeing Ahua cry, I also know that she will not forget, nor will she forget everyone who loves her and helps her to save her. Narcissus - Lian Ruqing, this criminal who does not kill children, is a very tough and powerful woman and a very tough and powerful mother. Lian Xiaoqing, this android woman finally took the position of commander. After she exchanged little red flowers for food, after she experienced the tears of separation and empathy with her mother, after she experienced the malice and kindness from humans... She will work tirelessly for the cause of peaceful coexistence between androids and humans. She inherited the mantle of Narcissus, but she still misses her mother. Honey - Gu Shanrui, whose achievements were stolen, falsely accused and imprisoned, suppressed and humiliated, shot and killed the person he loved most for the first time... You were finally exonerated, you finally had no regrets, you finally welcomed death or new life with a smile. Yan Yibai may be extreme, but he is by no means a villain. He will set up a screen painting guild when androids need it, and he will stand up for humans when they need it. He was "betrayed" because of his stance, and "brave" because of his true feelings. Wang Mei - "The world slandered me until the bouquet of flowers was thrown to me". She has always been a capable, ambitious, brave and tenacious woman. Women's Health and Welfare Home - You Panpan, Chu Xue, Wang Fuchun, Lin Wanxia, Jiang Rouyao... Everyone lives hard and tenaciously, but the heavenly Women's Health and Welfare Home has turned into a hellish Bichun Garden. Fortunately, justice is immortal and injustice is over. Dou Zhang's encounter with Shu was never careless or unkind. They will remember, they will not forget, they will not forget Lung City, they will not forget history, they will not forget those who have left, and they will not forget the help and kindness they received along the way. Dou Zhang, Fan Shuyu, Gu Shanrui, Xing Qianhua, Lian Ruqing, Lian Ruchen, Yan Yibai, Fang Mingzheng, Wang Mei, You Panpan, You Wuxian, Wang Shun, Mo Lan, A Yuan, Dou Lianghui, Fu Lusong, Fu Lusong's parents, Lian Xiaoqing, Victor, Jiang Zhenxian, Lao Han , Lark, Little Lark, Lin Weixun, Pete... Everyone got to know each other because of true love. True love exists in the world. Human beings cannot lose true emotions before they are called life. Androids have true emotions and are called life. Those who live as the protagonists of their own lives will have flowers along the way, and there will be hope in the future. Those who left will sleep forever and never wake up. I only hope that their heroic spirits will ascend to the sky and never forget the way they came. When you encounter injustice or prejudice, knock this hypocritical world over with one punch! Throw the bouquet to yourself! Maybe after the story I can see ends, I have forgotten your shortcomings. I hope you will be healthy and happy, always maintain your original intention, always keep your enthusiasm, never decline, never give up, and never forget. Thank you to the author for presenting such an excellent plot with such sincere feelings. I wish the author and all readers and friends good health and happiness, always maintain their original intention, always maintain their enthusiasm, never decline, never give up, and never forget. Hope we can meet again in other excellent works.
The teacher cried to death. This article is really good! ! ! Recently, I have been searching for books that I haven't read in the collection of authors. After reading the copy, I wanted to read it, but I didn't notice that the number of collections was only over 3,000. I thought the plot was very exciting and wanted to read everyone's comments and discussions about the plot, only to find that few people had read it. I am not a black-and-white character. Many of the villains in Teacher's article give people the feeling that they are evil but good. They do something wrong but they still feel regretful when they die. They are complete in your writing. Including the bionic man. In fact, the setting of the bionic man is very vague. Is there any difference between him and humans? Yes or no. Yan is an android, but he has his own thoughts and opinions, but (what is the name of the one who died and was made into an android by Su) is obviously like a robot. He doesn't feel anything about being beaten, scolded or abused. Even I don't feel anything. I think he is just like a robot and he doesn't feel pain. But looking back, if I think about it, androids will feel pain. They have feelings, so I can't tell. I'm just like people in that world. I can't make a decision or tell the result. Is there any difference between androids and humans... The person Su is really complicated, thanks to the teacher for writing it. It is true that he fell in love with his brother innocently at the beginning, and his resistance was just a personal choice. There is no right or wrong, and the rest of the final decisions are all wrong, so it leads to an inevitable wrong ending... It is the biggest mistake to admit the wrong person, and it is even more ridiculous to express your feelings through others. It is even more ironic that you love the wrong person, and it is the brother who loves the brother who is greedy for the younger brother. In fact, my brain is not so clear that I can completely analyze Su. In short, there is evil but there is good but evil. Teacher, keep writing! I will recommend this book to others. I can personally assert that this book is no worse than those on the list. In terms of logic and the setting of people's good and evil, it may be better than what many people have written. (I don't have much writing skills and I'm not a person who can write novels, but I think I can still say something after reading thousands of books in Jinjiang)
Su Santang. Love is right and the rest is wrong.
Hey, so Shu Yu and Fan Pingsheng can't be the same. Shu Yu is very kind in his heart, so his starting point is good, but Fan Pingsheng... I don't deny that he does have good things, but his purpose is too strong and he demands rewards for everything. How can this be?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, teacher, I really love this article. I opened Jinjiang today and suddenly found that it was updated. I immediately came to watch the extra story. Young master Dou Gong is 99999, happy wedding! Lung City will get better and better! ! For me, this article is really good. Every character is full and three-dimensional. It really makes us not underestimate any supporting role. Also, teachers must pay attention to their health when writing essays! [Crying] [crying]
The teacher is really great! If the physical book is released, I will really buy a set and donate it! Simply a work of art! I have read hundreds of novels, and this one is really the top one among all the novels I have read [][]. It's so shocking.
Wow, it's the first time I've seen a welfare episode
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh not did Su Santang suddenly become three dimensional
Super touching... Looking forward to the extras and the refinement! After repairing it, I will brush [dog head] three times
Is there any update yet? I'll tell you more, I won't come here anymore.
Sprinkle flowers! ! ! The teacher wrote an excellent article, and his penmanship is as good as any other!
Tianyi accidentally clicked on the welfare episode, and then he was confused by the spoilers. How could he be like this? When I saw that sentence, I was completely stunned [split][split]
So. The gold belt for murder and arson. Bad guys and good guys are doomed
The character Su Santang is really well written.
I haven't been to Xiaolujiang for a long time, and I was really happy when I found out about the new extras. The two babies will be happy for a long time, and Lung City will get better and better. Finally, I am very grateful to the teacher for persisting in writing this book under great pressure and writing it very well. Finally, I wish the teacher good health. I hope this book and the teacher's future books will be a big hit.
It's a side story! ! 55 So touched
Goddess, I miss you. Didn't I say before that I would come back on May Day to write? [Crying]
After finishing the second brush, I am still shocked. The teacher's writing is so awesome! Will there be updates on the remaining episodes? I really want to watch them [crying]
Excellent holy product, group portrait yyds! !
I cried at the end... It was so touching...
Help, go back and re-read the revised chapters. I feel like I really can't look directly at Su Santang, ah ah ah ah, super movie king
When you see a new episode, click in. It makes my heart soft. Dou Zhang and Shuyu Baobao will be fine forever. [Poor] [Poor] [Poor]
I actually searched on Weibo and found "Empty Box" [Glasses] written by Teacher Laichun in 2021 (I was screaming in my heart to see what good thing I found!!) Comparing the writing style between that time and today, I have really improved a lot! [Red Heart][Red Heart] But the character still has a familiar flavor
It's so sweet (I pound the ground)
I heard it's good, come and have a look
Teacher, not only does it have super words, I found this friend~(?▽?~) She is also recommending your book [Lop-eared Rabbit Head] in Xiaohongshu.
It looks good, I can't write a long review, I can only say it looks good [Dog's Head Holds a Rose]
I want to slap myself twice, my hands are so mean [cracked], I thought only 50% can read the welfare stamp~~~[Cat Claw] Give yourself a pair of eyes that you haven't seen yet [Sunglasses] [Shut up]
Two pairs of sister dogs are not a perfect pair.
Well, I came back to read it after some time. It may be because there is no main CP extra chapter. I feel that the story is not finished. It seems that there is a new prologue that has not started. The ending feels a bit abrupt. I don't know how the construction of Lung City is going. I hope Shu Yu and Dou Zhang will be fine.