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"The Stars Are Disobedient" Please collect it ~
Copywriting of this article:
After his father was imprisoned, his biological mother reunited with her first boyfriend, and Phytophaga became the most annoying existence. Six years after being kept in captivity, his mother wrote a letter asking him to go to her hometown of Chenjia Village. The imagined scene of mother and son reuniting after a long separation turned into a scene of mother selling her son.
Phytolacca suddenly woke up and dared to kill someone thousands of miles away?
Frustrated, he was about to return, but on the way he was coaxed and taken back to the mountains by Ye Jialian, a young man he had met once.
Yejia, the number one bad boy in Chenjia Village. His parents are unknown and his origins are unknown. He was picked up and raised by the famous mad mother-in-law in the village.
1. What should you do if you fall in love with a man at first sight?
Yejia: Don't worry about it, just go home and raise it first.
2. Does the person you like get beaten up?
Noga: If it's a man, just destroy his hand.
3. Too poor to support a wife?
Nojia: There are no men who can't make money, there are only lazy men. Let's understand this by moving bricks on the construction site.
As we all know, the first person to be tempted is not necessarily the first to confess.
One night, Phytolacca was filled with lust and stole a kiss from a sleeping person. We've already kissed each other, why don't we express our love for each other again?
When I'm with my husband, I become squeamish.
He is only gentle to his wife, has a long mouth, and dotes on his wife
Demining:
★The author's writing is poor
★Some plot transitions are unnatural
★The characters are not three-dimensional
★There are not many campus parts and will only appear in the later stages.
★There are discrepancies between the characters and copywriting of the two protagonists
★The ending is rushed
This is the first time the author has written an article, and there are many shortcomings. I hope everyone will criticize and correct me.
Copywriting of "The Stars Are Disobedient":
Lu Jiuxing has someone he likes.
He was a little troubled——
1. The other party is a man
2. The other party is straight
3. The other person has no feelings for him as a man.
Secret love?
Lu Jiuxing: No, we don't engage in youth pain literature, we top students always force love.
Lu Jiuxing: Brother, do you want a husband or not?
Chi Xinshan: Do you think I look like my husband?
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Intention: Love life, cherish life.
