Will Bionic White Moonlight Illuminate the Cyber City?

Ah, it's not a writing guide, it's purely based on the reader's reading experience. I feel that the author has too many attributive descriptions, such as: taking a "pleasant" bath, applying the facial mask "most sought after by celebrities and ladies at the moment", wearing "expensive but thin" pajamas, walking through the "long" aisle of his villa, pouring a full glass of sparkling water that "looks simple but is actually expensive", sitting down in front of a "wide" desk, under "gentle and warm" light, etc. I don't know much about writing, but in a text without dialogue, every short sentence is like this. It's a bit tiring whether I'm reading or listening. I used to read novels at a glance, but when I read this novel, I always feel that my eyes are scanning all the words that need to be read carefully, and I can't find the information I want to extract very quickly. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. If you feel that it is presumptuous, I apologize in advance.

Dear author, let's discuss something. Can you send me a private message and send me the deleted part?

Requesting a manuscript is voluntary, mainly because you like it. If it's mainly about throwing thunder, can I do it according to my own mood? One day when the mood strikes, I want to vote.

Kissed, kissed (crazy on the bed, ahhhhhhhhhhhh)

It's so romantic. For the first time, I can feel the flavor of cyber vaporwave just by reading the text.

Thinking of the animal world, spring is here~

[Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] My little sister really struggled to survive

It's so interesting to change the perspective.

Oh? Is it going to be interspersed with the game plot all the time?

I really like this story, such a heartwarming ending [red heart]

Teacher, I want to know after the end of the series, will there still be restraints in the world of Spell Return? If it exists, why not let the protagonist be the "ancestor" [Xingxingyan] For example, establish a UM or something like that

What a wonderful little world [Cat Claw] Two people should be happy forever! !