If the writing is not good, just criticize it and don't improve the characters and the author's family. Thank you
This article is an article about a man. The perspective at the beginning is dominated by the subject, but it changes later. This article was written in the form of a dialogue play in the draft, and I added... But I may be unfamiliar with the writing!
Feeling is time-traveling. Gong is the emperor and should be the parents of the two of them who grew up playing together. Gong and Shou are somewhat childhood sweethearts! (Shou's time travel: About Shou, he traveled through time as a baby and grew up in this world. Originally, Shou's parents had no sons and only had two daughters, but Shou became their son.) Some may not be mentioned, but they will appear in the article... (Looking at the title, I will love Gong in the article. It will clearly show that he has no family status - he has no family status to begin with)
Main CP: Suffer (Lin He) Attack (He Ci)
Deputy CP: Shou (Yan Ling) Gong (Yan Shuang) = Shou (Yan Shuang) Gong (Yan Ling)
Regarding the deputy CPs: Yan Shuang and Yan Ling are Lin He and He Ci's personal bodyguards (?ˋ???ˊ? The ones they grew up with (?˙▽˙?))
Regarding my own evaluation of this article: I don't read much and my grades are average. Overall, this article is a bit (Mary Sue). The words I wrote are relatively low-level, not so high-level, (simple). It should be a dialogue drama. Overall (simple), but I am too lazy to re-draft (˙-˙), which is a bit reluctant - [Let's do this for the first time (=^▽^=) See in the article] [I wish you a happy reading - of course, don't criticize if you don't like it! Thank you (?˙▽˙?)]
Intention: (Don't spray if you don't like it) More love