Once in time, Yan Bingwen, an 18-year-old girl majoring in literature, became the legitimate daughter of the Yan family.
The parents have a deep relationship, and the brothers work hard to make progress. As the youngest and delicate daughter of the Yan and Yang families, Yan Bingwen can be said to have been lying in a heap of brocade since she was born.
But as an outstanding young man who has contributed to socialism, how can he just wait to die?
So Yan Bingwen geared up and prepared to continue running towards the path of an artistic girl.
"Set a small goal first, and then let's start by becoming a contemporary talented woman who can speak well!" To put it simply, it is to gain fame and reputation in ancient times. After all, why don't you want to leave your name in history?
But after a while, Wang Lianhua appeared!
Internal strength of martial arts, treasure secrets, flying over the walls...
Oooh! No, why did the sweet pet story get mixed into the martial arts script?
Yan Bingwen scratched his head, raised his eyes and saw Wang Lianhua's handsome face. He patted his chest and sucked the nosebleed. It was fine, so he just treated it as a copy.
As a result, Yan Bingwen started her own journey to pursue her husband.
But later, Wang Lianhua made Yan Bingwen see what is dangerous and sinister in the world...
To put it simply, this is a story about I love you but not much. The male protagonist is Wang Lianhua, a martial arts outsider. There are some adult tsunderes and pulls in the story.
CP Jianghu Gongzi x Time Travel Edition Every Lady
The copywriting is not serious and the main text is serious.
Note: 1. The story is YY written by an older author who just ate and waited to die, so don't scold him.
2. Newbies, novices, updated from time to time.
3. Please comment and collect! ! !
Intention: Don't lose yourself when loving others
Reader comments
Has the fake beard been taken off?
The writing is very good, so don't worry about that.
But the disadvantage may be that it makes it difficult for readers to see the context and character creation issues clearly.
The previous question is that the heroine traveled through time and was assimilated and brainwashed, but she still retains some modern ideas and is still a "lady from ancient times". But the problem is that I don't understand what's going on with this family. If they want the heroine to get married to each other, why do they keep the heroine so innocent? We ladies are all well-behaved on the surface, but they are not naive. If they were naive, how could they survive in a high-ranking society? It is outrageous that they raise the heroine without training her to be a matron... If they raise the heroine to be naive because they love their children, shouldn't the heroine be more pampered and willful, and live a free and wanton life? I feel like the heroine is too Xiaojiabiyu. If you consider the background, they raise the heroine like a pet, including the brother who thinks the sister is cute, which also gives me the feeling of caring for a pet. Such a heroine is like raising a pet to be given to the nobles in the palace, just like some spoiled concubine with no means.
Regarding characterization, the heroine travels through time, but her character is almost completely invisible... So is time travel useful? Otherwise, can we not arrange time travel? This makes the heroine very weak. On the other hand, it is hard to imagine that Wang Lianhua would like the heroine... Even if the heroine is kind and has some fantastic ideas in her mind. But of course, very little has been written yet, and we don't know whether there will be any character growth arcs or other breakthroughs in the heroine's setting in the future.
However, the author's writing is indeed good. I think as long as it can show more of the charm and personality of the heroine and rationalize the plots of various characters, the article will not be ugly. It's just that martial arts is relatively unpopular, so there may be fewer people watching it.
This year is almost over, when will you come back and update?
In this chapter, there is both the text description "Yan Bingwen is Master Yan's only daughter" and the setting "she has three brothers". The two coexist and contradict each other.
Sentences that clearly write "only daughter" (occurring multiple times)
"It turns out to be Master Yan's only daughter, Yan Bingwen."
"She became the only daughter of Yan Jinzhiyan, the Prime Minister of the capital."
"She dressed up as Lord Yan's only daughter."
A sentence that clearly says "I have a brother" (it will appear immediately)
"And her three brothers also understand their sister to the greatest extent and give her unlimited love."
The author most likely intended to write Yan Bingwen as "the only daughter of the Yan family" rather than "the only child of her parents"
Setting contradiction/clerical error: It should be "the only daughter of the Yan family" instead of "the only child of her parents"
"It turns out to be Master Yan's only daughter Yan Bingwen."
"She became the only daughter of Yan Jinzhiyan, the Prime Minister of the capital."
"She dressed as Master Yan's only daughter."
"Her three brothers also understand their sister to the greatest extent and give her unlimited love."
It turns out there is a time travel record. I wonder if it will have any special role in the future?
Why isn't there much talk about love in the copy? ? ?
Isn't the end of the world half a year away? Going to steal a house now?
Yes, yes, yes, yes, I'm waiting for you
The author's writing is very good. Will there be more updates?
My wife's writing is great, please update it.
Welcome back, looking forward to updates
Haha, we met, looking forward to the next confrontation
Has the fake beard been taken off?
The writing is very good, so don't worry about that. But the disadvantage may be that it makes it difficult for readers to see the context and character creation issues clearly. The previous question is that the heroine traveled through time and was assimilated and brainwashed, but she still retains some modern ideas and is still a "lady from ancient times". But the problem is that I don't understand what's going on with this family. If they want the heroine to get married to each other, why do they keep the heroine so innocent? We ladies are all well-behaved on the surface, but they are not naive. If they were naive, how could they survive in a high-ranking society? It is outrageous that they raise the heroine without training her to be a matron... If they raise the heroine to be naive because they love their children, shouldn't the heroine be more pampered and willful, and live a free and wanton life? I feel like the heroine is too Xiaojiabiyu. If you consider the background, they raise the heroine like a pet, including the brother who thinks the sister is cute, which also gives me the feeling of caring for a pet. Such a heroine is like raising a pet to be given to the nobles in the palace, just like some spoiled concubine with no means. Regarding characterization, the heroine travels through time, but her character is almost completely invisible... So is time travel useful? Otherwise, can we not arrange time travel? This makes the heroine very weak. On the other hand, it is hard to imagine that Wang Lianhua would like the heroine... Even if the heroine is kind and has some fantastic ideas in her mind. But of course, very little has been written yet, and we don't know whether there will be any character growth arcs or other breakthroughs in the heroine's setting in the future. However, the author's writing is indeed good. I think as long as it can show more of the charm and personality of the heroine and rationalize the plots of various characters, the article will not be ugly. It's just that martial arts is relatively unpopular, so there may be fewer people watching it.
This year is almost over, when will you come back and update?
In this chapter, there is both the text description "Yan Bingwen is Master Yan's only daughter" and the setting "she has three brothers". The two coexist and contradict each other. Sentences that clearly write "only daughter" (occurring multiple times) "It turns out to be Master Yan's only daughter, Yan Bingwen." "She became the only daughter of Yan Jinzhiyan, the Prime Minister of the capital." "She dressed up as Lord Yan's only daughter." A sentence that clearly says "I have a brother" (it will appear immediately) "And her three brothers also understand their sister to the greatest extent and give her unlimited love." The author most likely intended to write Yan Bingwen as "the only daughter of the Yan family" rather than "the only child of her parents"
Setting contradiction/clerical error: It should be "the only daughter of the Yan family" instead of "the only child of her parents" "It turns out to be Master Yan's only daughter Yan Bingwen." "She became the only daughter of Yan Jinzhiyan, the Prime Minister of the capital." "She dressed as Master Yan's only daughter." "Her three brothers also understand their sister to the greatest extent and give her unlimited love."
It turns out there is a time travel record. I wonder if it will have any special role in the future?
Why isn't there much talk about love in the copy? ? ?
Isn't the end of the world half a year away? Going to steal a house now?
Yes, yes, yes, yes, I'm waiting for you
The author's writing is very good. Will there be more updates?
My wife's writing is great, please update it.
Welcome back, looking forward to updates
Haha, we met, looking forward to the next confrontation