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It's getting colder year by year, more and more people are dying, and the weather is getting worse and worse.
How to spend the winter has become an eternal problem for people.
When people finally got through the long winter and were about to welcome the dawn, they discovered that the heat was not that desirable...
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In order to survive the winter smoothly, Fang Yanshu followed his father back to his clan. Unexpectedly, he fell seriously ill on the way and found a foster husband as soon as he returned.
1. I have opened a new article. I hope you will support me.
2. Farming articles and parents tend to be short-tempered and slow to develop.
3. Reserve.
Intention: Although it is becoming increasingly difficult to survive in the environment, people are alive, they can hold together for warmth, they can brainstorm, and they can show all their good qualities, just to live.
Reader comments
The writing is so good, but the structure is so poor that I can't keep up. I say it's because I'm short on family, but after more than 20 chapters, I can't find any plot advancement, and I can't even see the farming. How about rethinking the rhythm? The literature is not very literary, and there is no plot. This can't be done without writing.
A whole 31 chapters have passed, and the story only reaches the next day...
The character dialogue is a bit uncomfortable to watch one sentence at a time. It can only be one paragraph but it is not???
The plot seems quite attractive so far, but why is there no one there? Come and discuss with me, haha, the second mother is not bad, that's what peasant women are like, at least they didn't deduct or secretly take advantage of Xiaoshu's money bag. No food was hidden
The second mother is really stingy. Living together like this is not an option. She should build a house later. What did they come back for? It seems that the third child is not old enough to retire and return to his hometown, so why did he return to his hometown?
Should the younger brother get married first if his younger brother studies? My parents were great back then. Or is he going to become an official? Shang Fengbao's matchmaker can't refuse...[Question mark]
There is a feeling of being anxious but I don't know what I am anxious about [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Just thinking about it, it is normal for them to be so busy with these things after being officials for so many years.
Boss, are you right to divide it into sections like this? [Laughing and crying]
Grandma, I can't stand it anymore, [laughing and crying] It's so stupid
Xiaoshu's age should be changed to 8 years old. The six-year-old body now says that these plans are too mature and will cause drama.
Boss, it's so uncomfortable to segment it like this. I hope it will be fixed in a later update [Hold your fists]
Is this a trap? ? I really like this kind of subject matter, ancient times, farming, the end of the world......... Can you continue writing? ! !
Okay, okay, I almost stood in the wrong position when I opened my mouth. Is the little tree receiving or attacking? [Crying]
Er Niang is really short-sighted.
Although it is rebirth? But Xiaoshu speaks too maturely, but Xiaoqin is in line with his age.
Move quickly. These two ladies can't get along
Why are the female characters so unlikable?
You are laughing at me, Gray Grass, why are you so tender?
Hey, didn't you ask the boss to wear it? The boss doesn't have any old clothes, right? [Dog head]
Auntie didn't say anything, she just kept sewing and working [laughing and crying]
[Laughing and crying] I just realized that from the beginning to now, I have never said that Xiaoshu is my brother.
"I also resisted." This is a big bug for the author~
kang
Auntie didn't say anything, she just kept minding her own work [laughing and crying]
Can it be simplified a lot? It feels like this chapter doesn't talk about much. [Question mark]
The writing is so good, but the structure is so poor that I can't keep up. I say it's because I'm short on family, but after more than 20 chapters, I can't find any plot advancement, and I can't even see the farming. How about rethinking the rhythm? The literature is not very literary, and there is no plot. This can't be done without writing.
A whole 31 chapters have passed, and the story only reaches the next day...
The character dialogue is a bit uncomfortable to watch one sentence at a time. It can only be one paragraph but it is not???
The plot seems quite attractive so far, but why is there no one there? Come and discuss with me, haha, the second mother is not bad, that's what peasant women are like, at least they didn't deduct or secretly take advantage of Xiaoshu's money bag. No food was hidden
The second mother is really stingy. Living together like this is not an option. She should build a house later. What did they come back for? It seems that the third child is not old enough to retire and return to his hometown, so why did he return to his hometown?
Should the younger brother get married first if his younger brother studies? My parents were great back then. Or is he going to become an official? Shang Fengbao's matchmaker can't refuse...[Question mark]
There is a feeling of being anxious but I don't know what I am anxious about [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Just thinking about it, it is normal for them to be so busy with these things after being officials for so many years.
Boss, are you right to divide it into sections like this? [Laughing and crying]
Grandma, I can't stand it anymore, [laughing and crying] It's so stupid
Xiaoshu's age should be changed to 8 years old. The six-year-old body now says that these plans are too mature and will cause drama.
Boss, it's so uncomfortable to segment it like this. I hope it will be fixed in a later update [Hold your fists]
Is this a trap? ? I really like this kind of subject matter, ancient times, farming, the end of the world......... Can you continue writing? ! !
Okay, okay, I almost stood in the wrong position when I opened my mouth. Is the little tree receiving or attacking? [Crying]
Er Niang is really short-sighted.
Although it is rebirth? But Xiaoshu speaks too maturely, but Xiaoqin is in line with his age.
Move quickly. These two ladies can't get along
Why are the female characters so unlikable?
You are laughing at me, Gray Grass, why are you so tender?
Hey, didn't you ask the boss to wear it? The boss doesn't have any old clothes, right? [Dog head]
Auntie didn't say anything, she just kept sewing and working [laughing and crying]
[Laughing and crying] I just realized that from the beginning to now, I have never said that Xiaoshu is my brother.
"I also resisted." This is a big bug for the author~ kang
Auntie didn't say anything, she just kept minding her own work [laughing and crying]
Can it be simplified a lot? It feels like this chapter doesn't talk about much. [Question mark]
Can you hurry up? I can't bear it anymore.
Stop segmenting like this! ! ! ! ! ! ! !