Who taught you to write like this? Second creation does not mean that you will kill readers!
A fan of Severus Snape, telling the story of his life in the world of the dead after his death from Severus' perspective. Those old friends, true loves who died young...
Since you're already dead, Voldemort, why don't I beat you up again.
Mouse Banban! Very rare! Why not use it to make rat hot pot - for details, please refer to "Mysterious Oriental Food - China on the Bite of the Tongue"
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"I heard that Severus has been drifting off recently..."
"Ah? Really?"
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"Am I very flamboyant?"
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Intention: Never change the character, the logic is clear and distinct