When I first met him, I was deeply attracted by his aura.
——Lin Luzhi
He is a clean kid.
——Gu Yan
He is very stupid.
——Shiroki
I believe that he will not abandon me, right?
——Qishen
(I am a student, and the update time is uncertain. During the reading process, please forgive me if there is anything wrong or the description in the article is not good. Any similarities in names in the article are purely coincidental?*??(ˊ?ˋ*)??*?)
Purpose: I want to write a novel
Reader comments
The narrative is very clear, but I felt it was too fast, like watching a revolving lantern (?). This situation changed slightly after the character Lin Luzhi appeared. The author likes this character very much.
The writing style is not childish, you can tell that you are a novice, you will improve a lot with more practice, keep up the good work.
The narrative is very clear, but I felt it was too fast, like watching a revolving lantern (?). This situation changed slightly after the character Lin Luzhi appeared. The author likes this character very much. The writing style is not childish, you can tell that you are a novice, you will improve a lot with more practice, keep up the good work.