"Copywriting ④ 2023.06.11" (The bright moon hangs high, whoever hates the bright moon I hate whoever has the literary flavor w!)
Bai Shuyue was killed by his senior brother.
After his rebirth, he met something that called itself "the system" and learned that the world he was in was actually just a storybook. He was the cannon fodder Bai Yueguang in this scumbag's storybook.
The senior brother who kept saying he loved him in his previous life was that scumbag.
Bai Shuyue: Can you spread his ashes?
System: Large, probably impossible QAQ
The system told him that Zha Gong was a son of heaven. He died due to unknown reasons in his previous life, causing the world to collapse. He must be reborn once and complete the plot honestly in order to repair the collapsed world.
Bai Shuyue: Haha.
Plot? Whoever wants to leave is none of his business whether the world collapses or not.
The system tried to persuade, gradually gave up, and finally failed. He also learned from the Lord God that if he didn't want to follow the plot and break the path to create a relationship, he could still save the world by taking the emotional route instead of the humble shou and the scumbag.
Bai Shuyue still ignored it.
He stayed at the gate of the peak every day without leaving the gate. On the way, he accidentally picked up the villain Demon Lord Mu Yuan Shu who was covered in injuries and was still working as a substitute.
The squeamish Bai Shuyue washed the person clean, treated the injuries, and then threw them out. Not long after, he encountered Mu Yuanshu who was covered in injuries.
Bai Shuyue:?
Seeing that Mu Yuan Shu was indeed somewhat similar to him, Bai Shuyue saved him again... Again.
Later, Bai Shuyue was too lazy to throw him out, and left him to stay at the peak, saying that he wanted to repay him, and was taken care of comfortably by Mu Yuan Shu, who knew his habits and preferences well.
At first, I brought him tea and water, and then took care of his food, clothing, housing and transportation.
After that, I returned the favor directly to his bed.
On a moonlit night, Mu Yuan Shu gently circled his wrist, kissed his fingertips, and whispered love to him.
"Immortal Lord, let me be your Daobreaker, okay?"
——
Mu Yuan Shu has a secret. He can hear Bai Shuyue talking to a consciousness called "System" in the sea of consciousness.
Then he learned that the world he was in was just a storybook, and the sweetheart he regarded as inviolable as a god was just the cannon fodder of this storybook, Bai Yueguang.
That "system" is still persuading his god to be humble and cowardly to please that scumbag.
Then he must tell it that their lives cannot be determined by a "script".
——
The cold-blooded and delicate beauty is attacked by × Cheng Fu's deep and scheming green tea
"Eating Guide"
①The convention of the Three Realms is 1v1, body and mind only belong to each other~
② Shou Zai is a ruthless Taoist. Before breaking through the Tao, Shou was very cold and had never been sentimental towards scumbag Gong in his previous life (I am a ruthless Taoist who only socializes in the world of mortals)
③ He was only used as a substitute because of the Demon Lord's experience. Zha Gong has raised countless substitutes. Gong only used Zha Gong to understand Shou's habits. He is the one he has least contact with.
④ Decline to write guidance and demining
——§Xiabengudan§——
(I want to write about the palace marquis, so I might open this OvO first)
Title: The prince who lost his memory, eat melon online
One sentence: As a result... The owner of the melon is actually myself? !
Copywriting:
When Lin Zicheng opened his eyes, he found that he had lost his memory.
His brother, the head of the family, told him that he accidentally fell into a lake and hit his head on a stone, and asked him to relax and recuperate and go to school seriously.
The heartless Lin Zicheng was obedient and obedient. In addition to attending classes, he just went around listening to the gossip after dinner.
Today I heard that Mr. Xuefu has a student whom he regards as a confidant, and tomorrow I heard that the prince from a foreign land who came to Beijing has a savior in the capital.
The next day, I heard that a young prince had an inviolable Bai Yueguang hidden in his heart, and that the young prince who lived next door to his house had a fiancé who fell in love, killed each other, and was in a sadistic relationship, and was eventually divorced.
Lin Zicheng: OoO
Exciting.
He transformed into a and wandered among the melon fields every day.
Until later, he gradually discovered all these confidants, benefactors, Bai Yueguang, and fiancé...
Everything is talking about him! ? ?
Lin Zicheng: OAO
The melon in his hand fell to the ground.
The owner of the melon is actually myself? ! !
—
Later, Lin Zicheng, who had eaten melon on his own head, found his side again...
One by one, there are hidden dragons and crouching tigers! !
The ordinary classmate at the same table is the princess of the current dynasty, the mischievous bamboo horse is the legitimate son of a general who has served in the army, and the classmate who writes the word "dog crawling" every day is the most talented person in the capital.
Even the companion who lives and eats with him... Is the young prince's fiancé who is rumored to be in love with him? ? ?
Lin Zicheng:......
Lin Zicheng: Is it too late for me to lose my memory again?
—
Heartless and stupid, suffer in vain × gentle and forbearing, cutting in vain and attacking in black
Intention: Break the shackles and control your own life
Reader comments
I came up with a bad idea, called Feng Sheng, haha, the best way to survive (this is how it looks like after playing too many games [dog head]
[Cat Claw] Claw! I haven't had a claw for a long time, so I said it felt like it was about to end, but as soon as I turned the page, I saw that the main text of the next chapter was finished, which was a bit sudden but not very unexpected. I still felt a bit complicated, and I couldn't bear to leave Xianzun and Mu Xiaoyuan, but everything was indeed solved, and the world would no longer be disturbed. The system was not destroyed, and it happened to save Xiaoxuehu's life. By the way, I can translate Xiaoxuehu's words, Xianzun The sequelae of Zun Po Dao's love affair have also been perfectly solved, and only one official Taoist couple is left. I can only hope that the extra chapter can show more daily life, and Xian Zun and Mu Xiaoyuan go out to travel. I also want to read the storybook based on Xian Zun and Mu Xiaoyuan that is circulated in the world of immortality (preferably 18R, let alone, someone must have written this and many people have read it), and will the identity of Demon Lord Mu Xiaoyuan be made public? After all, Mu Xiaoyuan's current identity requires him to suppress his cultivation, and he is afraid of exposing his identity. He wants Mu Xiaoyuan to travel around openly with the Immortal Lord, and occasionally punish villains.
Is this the first FW article? Why are there only more than 50 collections? If so, it would be more convenient for me to read them here.
"Looking at Bai Shuyue Shi Haizhong's system" gave the author a big bug ~
"Sea of knowledge", Lin Zixin responded to the system
"This time Bai Shuyue won't have to see his joyful appearance in the sea of consciousness anymore" This is a big bug for the author~
What we are talking about here is the system. Is it more appropriate to use "it"? When Xiaoxuehu wakes up, the system will talk to you.
"Lu Jingyang stood behind Bai Shuyue and tied his hair and crowned him" which really caught the author's eye~
Is this "tied hair and wearing a crown"? The Immortal Lord was waiting in the main hall for Mu Xiaoyuan to find him.
"Every year, new disciples are recruited into the inner sect by virtue of their qualifications and abilities", which is a big bug for the author~
"Recruit", where the Immortal Master and the head brother were talking before the mission began.
"He used vines to clear away most of the weeds" which really caught the author's eye~
"Most of the weeds", Mu Xiaoyuan found the location of the small wooden shed in the outer suburbs
"Shortly afterwards, Mu Yuan clearly felt that Bai Shuyue's body was very hot." This is a big bug for the author~
"Getting hot", Mu Xiaoyuan found out that the immortal nightmare was trying to wake him up there
"But he didn't put it in a too emphatic way," which really gave the author a big bug~
"He didn't stress it too much," Mu Xiaoyuan told Master Xianzun's situation.
"It will probably be snowing in a few days." This is a big bug for the author~
"It's time to snow," Xiao Baiqing heard the sisters-in-law talking outside the house.
"The grudges of the previous life should not affect the innocent Xiao Baiqing." This is a big bug for the author~
It should be "the grudges of the previous generation". Xiao Baiqing lied and told her mother that they all liked the cakes made by her mother.
What a coincidence, the Mid-Autumn Festival is just around the corner, so let me wish the young couple a happy holiday in advance. After all, it is the first time to reunite for the festival after more than 500 years [Rainbow Fart]
Hehe, this is a family. I don't know how these four simple and heartless people, from Master to Senior Brothers, could have been masters and disciples, brothers and sisters with beasts for hundreds of years. They really just gave the Master eight hundred tricks. [Dog Head] Tomorrow is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Xian Zun and Mu Xiaoyuan happened to be here to make moon cakes and go to the lantern festival tomorrow, right? It's really in sync with real time [Rainbow Fart][Rainbow Fart]
"He let Qin Shou go just so that one day Qin Shou could justifiably kill him." This is a big bug for the author~
"In order to one day (can) justifiably kill Qin Shou", a few paragraphs from the end
[Cat's Claw]hhhh I'm laughing so hard. Fortunately, Yun Chensu has let it go now. Otherwise, he would have given betrothal gifts to his crush and his would-be Taoist companion. Even though he has just changed from a "crush" to a "former crush", it's not much better [covering his face and peeking] [milk tea]
"There's no way they can fight for the Immortal Lord with me" This is a big bug for the author~
"That's it." In the last few paragraphs, Mu Xiaoyuan said that he didn't mind if the immortal raised the little snow fox
"Otherwise, I might have accidentally caused some unwarranted disaster that day." This is a big thorn in the side of the author~
"Which day", Mu Xiaoyuan had a lot of inner drama back then, haha
"Lu Jingyang focused on looking for animals," which really caught the author's eye~
hhhh Have you read too many of my comments? In the article, "Qin Shou" is labeled as a "beast"
Did you have a great time? [Let me be healthy] Isn't this chapter just another voice input with so many typos? (Staring with resentment→_→ ) I seem to have accidentally turned a comment into a 2-point review (facepalm) If you feel that I have posted a lot of bugs, you can delete them all or delete some of them after editing. I won't mind [holding my chin]. I always read other recommended finished articles before, and some of them have a lot of typos, which makes me uncomfortable. After I finished the article, I liked DaDa's novels and rarely followed the series of DaDa. I didn't want to hoard articles like before, so I tried to help DaDa to find typos and correct them after publishing new chapters. In this way, after the article became popular and more people read it, there wouldn't be too many people saying that DaDa's articles had a lot of typos [shy] (Anyway, I think DaDa's articles are very good and will definitely be read by many people. The writing is no problem, and the plot and emotional lines are no problem. She is my favorite Shuangjie. , Love is sweet and sour, even if there are parts that make me cry, it will not be as cruel as the sadistic articles. There is no point that I can't accept, and I read Dada very much, no matter the completed series or the pre-received copy, the characters in each article are also very charming. Even if I read the article of Dada several years ago, I still find it very interesting. Dada is still such a fan. He replies to the comments seriously, and the comment section is also very friendly and not smoky. I don't think I can say anything. Yes, at least most people won't be persuaded to leave as long as they click in and read one or two chapters) (It seems a bit exaggerated [shy], anyway, you know that I don't mind if you delete the revised bug-catching comments. If there are too many of the same chapter, you can delete them all or just leave a few to increase the number of comments. If my comment is not very good, you can delete it, anyway, it will not affect anything if it is a 0-point comment [milk tea])
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I came up with a bad idea, called Feng Sheng, haha, the best way to survive (this is how it looks like after playing too many games [dog head]
[Cat Claw] Claw! I haven't had a claw for a long time, so I said it felt like it was about to end, but as soon as I turned the page, I saw that the main text of the next chapter was finished, which was a bit sudden but not very unexpected. I still felt a bit complicated, and I couldn't bear to leave Xianzun and Mu Xiaoyuan, but everything was indeed solved, and the world would no longer be disturbed. The system was not destroyed, and it happened to save Xiaoxuehu's life. By the way, I can translate Xiaoxuehu's words, Xianzun The sequelae of Zun Po Dao's love affair have also been perfectly solved, and only one official Taoist couple is left. I can only hope that the extra chapter can show more daily life, and Xian Zun and Mu Xiaoyuan go out to travel. I also want to read the storybook based on Xian Zun and Mu Xiaoyuan that is circulated in the world of immortality (preferably 18R, let alone, someone must have written this and many people have read it), and will the identity of Demon Lord Mu Xiaoyuan be made public? After all, Mu Xiaoyuan's current identity requires him to suppress his cultivation, and he is afraid of exposing his identity. He wants Mu Xiaoyuan to travel around openly with the Immortal Lord, and occasionally punish villains.
Is this the first FW article? Why are there only more than 50 collections? If so, it would be more convenient for me to read them here.
"Looking at Bai Shuyue Shi Haizhong's system" gave the author a big bug ~ "Sea of knowledge", Lin Zixin responded to the system
"This time Bai Shuyue won't have to see his joyful appearance in the sea of consciousness anymore" This is a big bug for the author~ What we are talking about here is the system. Is it more appropriate to use "it"? When Xiaoxuehu wakes up, the system will talk to you.
"Lu Jingyang stood behind Bai Shuyue and tied his hair and crowned him" which really caught the author's eye~ Is this "tied hair and wearing a crown"? The Immortal Lord was waiting in the main hall for Mu Xiaoyuan to find him.
"Every year, new disciples are recruited into the inner sect by virtue of their qualifications and abilities", which is a big bug for the author~ "Recruit", where the Immortal Master and the head brother were talking before the mission began.
"He used vines to clear away most of the weeds" which really caught the author's eye~ "Most of the weeds", Mu Xiaoyuan found the location of the small wooden shed in the outer suburbs
"Shortly afterwards, Mu Yuan clearly felt that Bai Shuyue's body was very hot." This is a big bug for the author~ "Getting hot", Mu Xiaoyuan found out that the immortal nightmare was trying to wake him up there
"But he didn't put it in a too emphatic way," which really gave the author a big bug~ "He didn't stress it too much," Mu Xiaoyuan told Master Xianzun's situation.
"It will probably be snowing in a few days." This is a big bug for the author~ "It's time to snow," Xiao Baiqing heard the sisters-in-law talking outside the house.
"The grudges of the previous life should not affect the innocent Xiao Baiqing." This is a big bug for the author~ It should be "the grudges of the previous generation". Xiao Baiqing lied and told her mother that they all liked the cakes made by her mother.
What a coincidence, the Mid-Autumn Festival is just around the corner, so let me wish the young couple a happy holiday in advance. After all, it is the first time to reunite for the festival after more than 500 years [Rainbow Fart]
Hehe, this is a family. I don't know how these four simple and heartless people, from Master to Senior Brothers, could have been masters and disciples, brothers and sisters with beasts for hundreds of years. They really just gave the Master eight hundred tricks. [Dog Head] Tomorrow is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Xian Zun and Mu Xiaoyuan happened to be here to make moon cakes and go to the lantern festival tomorrow, right? It's really in sync with real time [Rainbow Fart][Rainbow Fart]
"He let Qin Shou go just so that one day Qin Shou could justifiably kill him." This is a big bug for the author~ "In order to one day (can) justifiably kill Qin Shou", a few paragraphs from the end
[Cat's Claw]hhhh I'm laughing so hard. Fortunately, Yun Chensu has let it go now. Otherwise, he would have given betrothal gifts to his crush and his would-be Taoist companion. Even though he has just changed from a "crush" to a "former crush", it's not much better [covering his face and peeking] [milk tea]
"There's no way they can fight for the Immortal Lord with me" This is a big bug for the author~ "That's it." In the last few paragraphs, Mu Xiaoyuan said that he didn't mind if the immortal raised the little snow fox
"Otherwise, I might have accidentally caused some unwarranted disaster that day." This is a big thorn in the side of the author~ "Which day", Mu Xiaoyuan had a lot of inner drama back then, haha
"Lu Jingyang focused on looking for animals," which really caught the author's eye~ hhhh Have you read too many of my comments? In the article, "Qin Shou" is labeled as a "beast"
Did you have a great time? [Let me be healthy] Isn't this chapter just another voice input with so many typos? (Staring with resentment→_→ ) I seem to have accidentally turned a comment into a 2-point review (facepalm) If you feel that I have posted a lot of bugs, you can delete them all or delete some of them after editing. I won't mind [holding my chin]. I always read other recommended finished articles before, and some of them have a lot of typos, which makes me uncomfortable. After I finished the article, I liked DaDa's novels and rarely followed the series of DaDa. I didn't want to hoard articles like before, so I tried to help DaDa to find typos and correct them after publishing new chapters. In this way, after the article became popular and more people read it, there wouldn't be too many people saying that DaDa's articles had a lot of typos [shy] (Anyway, I think DaDa's articles are very good and will definitely be read by many people. The writing is no problem, and the plot and emotional lines are no problem. She is my favorite Shuangjie. , Love is sweet and sour, even if there are parts that make me cry, it will not be as cruel as the sadistic articles. There is no point that I can't accept, and I read Dada very much, no matter the completed series or the pre-received copy, the characters in each article are also very charming. Even if I read the article of Dada several years ago, I still find it very interesting. Dada is still such a fan. He replies to the comments seriously, and the comment section is also very friendly and not smoky. I don't think I can say anything. Yes, at least most people won't be persuaded to leave as long as they click in and read one or two chapters) (It seems a bit exaggerated [shy], anyway, you know that I don't mind if you delete the revised bug-catching comments. If there are too many of the same chapter, you can delete them all or just leave a few to increase the number of comments. If my comment is not very good, you can delete it, anyway, it will not affect anything if it is a 0-point comment [milk tea])