[Entertainment Circle] After Chicken Baby Failed, My Mother Gave Birth to Thirteen More Sons

As I looked at it, I couldn't tell which part of it was fantasyland and which part was real life (face covering) Too many intersperses

The change is too fast, suddenly from relaxed to abused [fearful]

The teacher has updated, I am very touched, welcome the teacher back???

"Only Xia is allowed," which is a big bug for the author~

It's a very heart-warming article. The writing is good. I really like the three perspectives in this article. The proportion of female characters is relatively large. The extra chapter at the end is very interesting and super cute. There are also some small flaws. For example, the character Chong Cang is not very likable. I understand that the author wants to express the complexity of the character. However, as a reader, Chong Cang is the least likable among the protagonists, and the main text does not describe his shining points enough. On the contrary, although Chong Cang in the extra chapter has very few scenes, it makes people feel very warm. The difference between the main text and the extra chapter Chong Cang is a bit big. Moreover, there are a lot of typos in the article. I hope the author can correct them a little when he has time. There are also some very small bugs. For example, it is mentioned in the previous article that the senior brother had the "best sleep in eight hundred years." It is also a pity that this article is too short. In fact, I was looking forward to the author writing a fairy tale with a slightly more complete world view. 300,000 Words is too few and is not enough to read. Moreover, due to the length limit, the entire world view setting is a bit rough. I hope that one day I will be able to publish a long fairy tale that scares me to death [shy][shy][shy] Overall, the whole article is very well written. The process of reading is a very relaxing, enjoyable and comfortable reading experience. It is highly recommended. I hope this book can have better data.

Silly Miyuki Kazuya! ! ! (Lift up the collar and shake it wildly

It's so well written [poor] [poor] Please give me more

Damn, give it a new update!

I had insomnia all night last night. I just finished eating and I'm going to bed. I may have to sleep until 20-21 o'clock. You should eat and sleep. If I don't go after 20 o'clock, I won't go.