Very, extremely, especially OOC. I know how to dismantle Zhan Li. Harry Potter's own generation. Novice writing. Please be careful.
James: (deserving of a beating) "I'm sure Erin was fascinated by me the first time she saw me."
Erin: (furious) "... Before my fist falls on your handsome face, James Potter, please think twice before opening your noble mouth!"
Sirius: (rolling eyes) "Don't look at me, I'm not familiar with them."
Remus: (smiling) "Me too."
......
Snape: (suspicious) "What?"
Rael: (wary) "What?"
Ai Lin: (pounces on me) "I'll give you a happy ending, oooooooooooo."
......
Li Li: (pounces) "Irene——"
Ai Lin: (indifferently) "No - don't hug me and rub me -"
Original Character - Alex Avery
Erics may have more plot, because he is the emotional lead actor, so those who don't like original male leads should avoid it.
Erics: "Fuck the world."
Intention: friendship, love and family affection