A girl from a single-parent family. He has lived in poverty and indifference from people around him since he was a child. He has a violent and stubborn personality, but he loves a boy who is as kind and noble as an angel. The disparity in personality and background did not stop the two people from falling in love. While the girl loved the angel, she felt inferior in his halo. Later, the biological mother who abandoned the girl came back and tried to make up for her past guilt with piles of money. The girl bid farewell to poverty forever overnight and lived a luxurious but equally lonely life. The inner resentment towards her mother made her personality more perverse and fragile. The love with the boy was the only warmth in her life. She had long been accustomed to this seven-year relationship. When everything changed suddenly, she realized that she was far from being as strong as she had imagined, nor as cynical as she had imagined. She was still the lonely child who longed for love in her childhood.
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Reader comments
Alas, after all is said and done, points must still be made.
I think I have made progress in writing these chapters.
The inner activities of the protagonist are not as straightforward as the previous narratives.
Rather guess the action to understand!
Author's reply:
A straightforward description? Very straight and white?
Gone? No 555....
..... I was attracted by the name.
I have been commissioned to read this masterpiece of yours. I like the writing style very much, it feels like it has a light fragrance. The story is also beautifully written, making readers look forward to what follows. Since I was commissioned to watch it, I would like to share my own opinions. Many novels I have read, especially those before the rankings, have one characteristic, that is, there is a particularly outstanding point, or the language is particularly gorgeous, or the story is very touching. You should think carefully about what you are going to use to impress the readers. True feelings are very important. The language of this work is quite beautiful, like a breeze blowing towards your face. It feels refreshing. However, I personally hope not to add modern nonsensical and funny factors. I think it may affect the atmosphere. Humor is necessary, but the feeling of humor is mixed with emotion. And I feel that the story should be detailed and brief, but sometimes the book has too much jumping feeling, which makes me feel that the story is not particularly coherent. There is a process for things to happen, and writing a novel is about writing about this process, rather than writing about feelings like prose. You can be very creative, so I hope you can pay a little attention to the rhythm of the narrative. Furthermore, I think you want to write a classical novel, so just write it classically. With your beautiful language and extremely attractive story, I think this novel should be successful. I hope to see your novel appear on the rankings one day soon, and I also hope that the author can communicate more to make this very creative and classically beautiful novel a classic. Come on Come on! ! !
OK~ I don't think there is any problem
I also believe that they will have a happy ending~
Maybe it's because I'm used to reading classic long time-travel articles, but when I saw this brother's unfinished story, I suddenly lost the feeling of "pursuing". I felt that many things were written in a bit haste, and many plots were not foreshadowed. Maybe it's because the author doesn't like to go around the bush, but keeping such a straightforward narrative will not attract others' attention, and the author's writing has a touch of sadness. From now on, many people don't like this kind of writing, because real life itself Our lives break our hearts. We just want to find our balance in the infinite world of novels, but this kind of faint sadness coincides with our lives. Therefore, while reading novels, we can't help but think of our own lives. In this way, readers will not find happiness in novels. On the contrary, they will give up readers' articles because of this sadness. I sincerely hope that the author can change the style of the text slightly, so that more readers will be attracted to read it! The author's reply:
Well, thank you for your opinion. In fact, in terms of plot, the more I wrote, the more it became more and more biased. Then I found that there were a lot of problems and I was not in the mood to pave the way for it. The sadness is probably because I wrote the unsatisfactory life into the story. I will try my best to change the style, but no matter what, thank you again! ~~~~
This one looks cruel...
What fun!!!!!!!!!!
To be honest, it's depressing to see the thief!!!!!!!!
Ah? The author replied:
I'll follow too......
Take one sofa and leave three for others. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
The plot moves too quickly. It should be more detailed. It seems that the number of words is too short.
~~I will definitely go to Antarctica~~
Big, very good-looking, update soon, I'm really looking forward to it. By the way, where is the little guy who disappeared? Where did he go? There are several male protagonists. I still like the first one.
Alas, after all is said and done, points must still be made.
I think I have made progress in writing these chapters. The inner activities of the protagonist are not as straightforward as the previous narratives. Rather guess the action to understand! Author's reply: A straightforward description? Very straight and white?
Gone? No 555....
..... I was attracted by the name.
I have been commissioned to read this masterpiece of yours. I like the writing style very much, it feels like it has a light fragrance. The story is also beautifully written, making readers look forward to what follows. Since I was commissioned to watch it, I would like to share my own opinions. Many novels I have read, especially those before the rankings, have one characteristic, that is, there is a particularly outstanding point, or the language is particularly gorgeous, or the story is very touching. You should think carefully about what you are going to use to impress the readers. True feelings are very important. The language of this work is quite beautiful, like a breeze blowing towards your face. It feels refreshing. However, I personally hope not to add modern nonsensical and funny factors. I think it may affect the atmosphere. Humor is necessary, but the feeling of humor is mixed with emotion. And I feel that the story should be detailed and brief, but sometimes the book has too much jumping feeling, which makes me feel that the story is not particularly coherent. There is a process for things to happen, and writing a novel is about writing about this process, rather than writing about feelings like prose. You can be very creative, so I hope you can pay a little attention to the rhythm of the narrative. Furthermore, I think you want to write a classical novel, so just write it classically. With your beautiful language and extremely attractive story, I think this novel should be successful. I hope to see your novel appear on the rankings one day soon, and I also hope that the author can communicate more to make this very creative and classically beautiful novel a classic. Come on Come on! ! !
OK~ I don't think there is any problem
I also believe that they will have a happy ending~
Maybe it's because I'm used to reading classic long time-travel articles, but when I saw this brother's unfinished story, I suddenly lost the feeling of "pursuing". I felt that many things were written in a bit haste, and many plots were not foreshadowed. Maybe it's because the author doesn't like to go around the bush, but keeping such a straightforward narrative will not attract others' attention, and the author's writing has a touch of sadness. From now on, many people don't like this kind of writing, because real life itself Our lives break our hearts. We just want to find our balance in the infinite world of novels, but this kind of faint sadness coincides with our lives. Therefore, while reading novels, we can't help but think of our own lives. In this way, readers will not find happiness in novels. On the contrary, they will give up readers' articles because of this sadness. I sincerely hope that the author can change the style of the text slightly, so that more readers will be attracted to read it! The author's reply: Well, thank you for your opinion. In fact, in terms of plot, the more I wrote, the more it became more and more biased. Then I found that there were a lot of problems and I was not in the mood to pave the way for it. The sadness is probably because I wrote the unsatisfactory life into the story. I will try my best to change the style, but no matter what, thank you again! ~~~~
This one looks cruel... What fun!!!!!!!!!! To be honest, it's depressing to see the thief!!!!!!!!
Ah? The author replied: I'll follow too......
Take one sofa and leave three for others. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
The plot moves too quickly. It should be more detailed. It seems that the number of words is too short.
~~I will definitely go to Antarctica~~
Big, very good-looking, update soon, I'm really looking forward to it. By the way, where is the little guy who disappeared? Where did he go? There are several male protagonists. I still like the first one.
Very interesting, very funny~