Jinyin Villa is one of the four major sects in the world. People in the world say that gold and silver are everywhere, and they are extremely rich. The owner of the village, Lu Yunpo, has three sons. The eldest and the second are both skilled in martial arts and famous in the world, but the third...
The third young master of Jinyin Villa, named Lu Sansheng, does nothing every day. He sleeps until he wakes up naturally. If he misses lunch, he goes out to buy steamed buns to eat. He wanders around the streets every day. Sometimes he even goes to the Jinyinlou, a restaurant owned by his family, to guest waiter.
Mr. Lu: "..."
Yue Fengtang is a rising star in the world. He is the master of Caifeng Pavilion, a rising sect that is in full swing. Yushu Linfeng is a model for dominating one side. One day, Yue Fengtang said that his sect had important matters and wanted someone from Jinyin Villa to help. He named Lu Sansheng.
Mr. Lu was overjoyed and sent his third son to Pavilion Master Yue overnight, and told him to learn from Pavilion Master Yue.
Then, Lu Sansheng's life in Caifeng Pavilion was: sleeping until he woke up naturally every day, hanging out to buy steamed buns, and guest-starring as a waiter in Fengping Tower, a restaurant owned by Caifeng Pavilion.
Mr. Lu: "..."
Forget it, I don't want this son anymore, you Caifeng Pavilion can keep it!
Yue Fengtang: Okay, okay, I will support you for the rest of my life, my father-in-law, please accept your respects from my son-in-law!
Mr. Lu: "..."
Intention: People may not have great ambitions, but they must be kind and sincere.
Reader comments
It's so uncomfortable. Boss Cao has to repeat such hurtful words. PiPi didn't even realize if she was dissociating when she cried. She really wanted to give her a hug😭
Here is a suggestion for you. It can be seen that the writing is very careful, but I feel that most of the writing is used for background, which makes people's eyes unable to focus on the main character. There is no distinction between primary and secondary, which makes it a bit blurry.
It's rushed, the characters are not prominent enough, the logic is confusing, the characters are one-sided, and the scene description is weak, but the theme selection is quite novel.
By the way, did Xiaofeng's love interest come too early? Did he fall in love with Sansheng when he was only five years old? It's still the till death do us part part, this one is a little buggy, hahahaha
It's so uncomfortable. Boss Cao has to repeat such hurtful words. PiPi didn't even realize if she was dissociating when she cried. She really wanted to give her a hug😭
Here is a suggestion for you. It can be seen that the writing is very careful, but I feel that most of the writing is used for background, which makes people's eyes unable to focus on the main character. There is no distinction between primary and secondary, which makes it a bit blurry.
It's rushed, the characters are not prominent enough, the logic is confusing, the characters are one-sided, and the scene description is weak, but the theme selection is quite novel.
By the way, did Xiaofeng's love interest come too early? Did he fall in love with Sansheng when he was only five years old? It's still the till death do us part part, this one is a little buggy, hahahaha
Come on! The author writes very well! !
Finished spreading flowers! ! (=^▽^=)