Going up to the small building in the desert and cold, the dawn is like a poor autumn, and the light smoke and flowing water paint the screen.
The scene of the small building by the lake reminded Fang Tianze of the first film of Qin Guan's poem. However, Qin Guan's poems contained sorrow, but at the moment he was feeling relaxed and happy.
Shining like crystal in the sunlight. As soon as the falling leaves touched it, beautiful ripples appeared on it. In the center of the lake is planted the water hibiscus, the flower fairy. This water hibiscus was a little different from the ones he had seen in the park, but its shape and color were no different. It's just that it shines with the shimmer of sapphire. Hibiscus is inherently beautiful, pure and refined, and the hibiscus here seems to be a beauty from heaven...
Fang Tianze reluctantly retracted his gaze from Furong and looked at the small building. Because someone was talking in the small building.
Tianze was stunned. This woman... Is so beautiful! Bright eyes and white teeth, red lips and dark eyebrows, pink face and peach cheeks... These words used to describe her can be regarded as tarnishing her beauty.
She wore a blue dress and a white silk dress. Her hair flowed down to her waist like a waterfall, and it was tied with a white jade hairpin. The earrings dangling from her ears were lotus seeds shining with blue light. On her belt hung a bamboo pipe flute.
Wait, belt, silk coat? She wears costume? Fang Tianze was confused. He had been attracted by this beautiful beauty and had completely forgotten everything.
Where is he? Did he go back to ancient times like many fantasy stories?
Reader comments
The plot is compact, the language is concise, and the writing is a bonus~~~
V1v1, I saw your post and took a look. Do you want to write a Korean-style campus youth novel? I feel like the name is very Korean, because I never watch Korean dramas, so I don't know if your article is a fanfic. Personally, I think your description of details is very good and your vocabulary is relatively rich. Your composition should be very good. But you have divided it into too many chapters. What you write should actually be placed in two chapters, or at most three chapters. Otherwise, it will make people feel that there is not much content in each chapter, and it will not be attractive to read. Generally, there must be at least two highlights in one chapter that can attract people. Also, there are so many articles about Korean-style campuses nowadays. If you want to stand out, you must be different from others. Your heroine is set to look like durian, which gives people a refreshing feeling (I have eaten durian before, and the smell...), But I haven't started to write about her resemblance yet. I will come back and take a look when you write more. I would like to make a few suggestions: the structure should be more compact, the character description should be more prominent, and each person should write about his own characteristics. It is best to make your readers think of him when he sees a name. All in all, the beginning is very good. You have to work hard. I am waiting for you in the next plot. You are welcome to come to my place and step on each other. (Smiling sheepishly and drifting away)
我也是新手，帮你踩踩
I hope to continue writing it! And the roles are reversed. Didn't Qi Lang's mother have a good idea? Then after marriage, let Meimei be the president of Jingdi Group, and Qi Lang be the "deep boudoir and resentful husband" at home.
The plot is compact, the language is concise, and the writing is a bonus~~~
V1v1, I saw your post and took a look. Do you want to write a Korean-style campus youth novel? I feel like the name is very Korean, because I never watch Korean dramas, so I don't know if your article is a fanfic. Personally, I think your description of details is very good and your vocabulary is relatively rich. Your composition should be very good. But you have divided it into too many chapters. What you write should actually be placed in two chapters, or at most three chapters. Otherwise, it will make people feel that there is not much content in each chapter, and it will not be attractive to read. Generally, there must be at least two highlights in one chapter that can attract people. Also, there are so many articles about Korean-style campuses nowadays. If you want to stand out, you must be different from others. Your heroine is set to look like durian, which gives people a refreshing feeling (I have eaten durian before, and the smell...), But I haven't started to write about her resemblance yet. I will come back and take a look when you write more. I would like to make a few suggestions: the structure should be more compact, the character description should be more prominent, and each person should write about his own characteristics. It is best to make your readers think of him when he sees a name. All in all, the beginning is very good. You have to work hard. I am waiting for you in the next plot. You are welcome to come to my place and step on each other. (Smiling sheepishly and drifting away)
我也是新手，帮你踩踩
I hope to continue writing it! And the roles are reversed. Didn't Qi Lang's mother have a good idea? Then after marriage, let Meimei be the president of Jingdi Group, and Qi Lang be the "deep boudoir and resentful husband" at home.
It's rare to see such wonderful writing.
打分 期盼许久，某男人终于出场了 话说我也想不通为什么圣的脸上会有龙型的印记呢，紫言应该是青龙国后人吧，不然怎么会召唤青龙？
This looks good, are there any more?????????? Sir, keep posting~~~~~~~~~`
Come on I feel like I'm writing pretty well so far Looking forward to the next development^^
Flowers!
I just feel like it's a fog now!~~~~~
More than 10,000 years, it took a long time to update? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? No updates
Maybe there is a HE at the end of NP. Hey, adults, please update quickly.