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Seeing now, I feel like Jane and Lauren are a couple. . .
A small suggestion. The segments are a bit too confusing, and the timeline is hard to watch. Jump back for a while and switch back again. At least add a dividing line between scenes?
It's quite interesting. I read it in one sitting. The story about the dog-raising life in the United States in the early stage is so amazing. Not only the description of life scenes, but also the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are very full~ After returning to the UK, the main plot of the original work is involved. The heroine joins in cracking the Horcrux, which speeds up the whole tempo. Compared with the original work, it is much happier. However, due to the faster pace in the later part of the book, most of the time, a few key events are mentioned from the perspective of the heroine, and they are mentioned in one sentence. The timeline spans a lot in one chapter. One second it was a warm party, and the next second the perspective cuts to the final battle. It's not bad to handle it this way. After all, the protagonists in this story are not Harry and the others~ Although it is a pity that Dumbledore is gone, I am still very happy to survive despite all the difficulties. There are also many original supporting characters that I particularly like. The author's wife is really good at shaping the characters!
"Bringing his soul back", he came back out of anger, hahahaha
He is obviously very skilled in martial arts, but he always becomes disabled due to such speechless reasons.
Lauren... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Ha
Oh, barty must know the heroine
I kind of want to see Sirius chase his wife in the crematorium? (Nonsense
Woohoo, my heart trembled when I saw Cedric gasping, help me.
Finished spreading flowers! Are there any extras? There must be one
After reading it, the story is still good, but it always feels like it is too smooth, and some details are not explained clearly. The later stories are relatively dull, but the story shown in "Grassland Animal Husbandman" has become much more mature. I hope to try more different themes and bring different stories to readers.
It's not enough for his father to force his son to death. He also forces his daughter to take away his daughter. Now his wife is gone too. He deserves it.
In general, there are so many knives and it's so cruel, I didn't save a few in the main mission, and the plot is almost the same as the original one... What a pity.
"But Kreacher didn't show up." Ah, Kreacher still betrayed Sirius, even though he knew Regulus was fighting against Voldemort.
Ohoh, are you jealous? ()
Oh my gosh, James, you must be imagining it, I'm crying to death
I love watching jealous scenes like this hahaha
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Read it in one go! So pretty! Looking forward to the follow-up
Woo hoo hoo, it's gone.
Hahaha, let's make the Shura field more intense.
Hahahahahahaha so cool
Although, more than 40 people in a class at a noble school are too many. . .
Hehehe, I was jealous when I saw Sirius secretly having a crush on him [dog head] [dog head]
The heroine's past experience is very distressing [Cat Claw]
Ginny: Do I have to take the initiative?
Didn't Brad's crush on Joe fail and Joe marry someone else? Why did you suddenly marry Qiao?
How good! Looking forward to the ending!
The dog who broke up the house hahahahaha