As for the description of his sweetheart in his youth, the only thing that is tacky is that he is covered with sunshine, and the gleaming light will seem a little pale in his case. Or it was one of the few moments of solitude on a midsummer night. Putting the stars in the sky with him really made people a bit confused about which one to look at.
Purpose: The ending in this book is quite good, I hope you can find the right pace in the future.