After Rebirth, I Conquered the Stone Shadow Guard.

Am I really going to treat Wu Gu like this😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Chu Zhi is the protagonist, but I think he is the weakest character in the whole book. There are obviously many plots in it that can flesh out this character, but the author seems to be unwilling to waste time on him and keeps skipping the plot. For example, when Gong's father talks to him, this conversation can be written carefully. Chu Zhi's thoughts about Chu Zehe are the biggest opportunity to break through the constraints of his identity as a shadow guard and rise from the innermost level to the fact that he is Chu Zehe's lover and the person beside him. This was a big change in Chu Zhi's heart. But the author didn't. He weakened the plot of the conversation and instead focused the perspective on Gong, and the plot focused on the emotional issues between Gong and his father. From the beginning to the end of the whole book, Chu Zhi gave me the feeling that he was just a tool. He was lonely inside and had no one to accompany him, so he suffered from it. Even at the finale, I felt that Chu Zhi had a knot in my heart. He was not like a lover. He positioned himself more as a subordinate. The episode of attacking fire and becoming possessed can obviously solve this problem very well. They can have a heart-to-heart talk, let Chu Zhi know how much he feels in Chu Zehe's heart, and let Chu Zehe know Chu Zhi's feelings for him. The inner demons can also be easily solved, but the author still has only a few strokes. I even think that this inner demon is a special reason to let go to the inner force. He has been weakening his strength, his identity, and his transparency. Even if you delete some of Chu Zhi's scenes, it won't affect the progression of the plot. He is just an accessory to Gong in the plot. If the thin portrayal of Shou is to maximize the plot, then I think it is still a failure. It is undeniable that the early plot was really good, but it became very messy in the later period, especially after entering V. The first impression I had was that it was scrawled, and the part about attacking fire and becoming possessed was even more scrawled. He was harmed by Mo Qiong, why he was harmed, the specific impact of his inner demons on him, and what effect this incident had on him. None of these authors wrote it. The plot did not even have a supporting framework, so he could only be flat, and the characters in it were also thin. The character Wu Gu is even more of a tool man. He is slightly more flesh and blood than Chu Zhi, but he has been sacrificing throughout the book. His death can be said to be worthless, and he died for the truth of the year. It turns out that the two people who should know the truth the most, one knew it a long time ago, and the other didn't react as much when he found out. So was his death to pave the way for that red-haired boy? ? ? Speaking of Hongmao, as a person who had been harmed to death in his previous life, Gong did not kill him until the end. I would like to ask the author and Gong's psychology. Are you dealing with the Shou in the previous life or the reader? The Shou in the previous life was sacrificing for Gong from beginning to end. I understand that he had psychological problems at the time, but things got better later. You didn't write any scenes of them relying on each other, only mung bean porridge and roast chicken, so their status was not equal from the beginning. The whole text has been describing Gong, Gong's appearance, Gong's identity, Gong's psychology, all aspects are covered, and there are no less than five descriptions of appearance alone. On the contrary, Shou has always been a stone, a stone, a stone. With too many descriptions, do you really think he is a stone? He has flesh and blood, he will feel pain and cry, but the author did not write it out at all. I only saw a loyal subordinate, not a lover. In the end, the two of them still didn't have a good heart-to-heart talk. Both of them were worried about gains and losses, and both had no sense of security. This was the biggest failure in terms of emotional shaping.

Hahahahaha Me too, my mother has already asked me to work today