When I was fifteen years old, I first met him and left my heart in his body;
Today, fifteen years later, I met him again. This time, what will I leave him?
The meeting fifteen years ago, the lovesickness during the fifteen years, the reunion fifteen years later, fate comes and goes, flowers fade and bloom, what will be the ending between us?
Reader comments
It looks good, it looks good, but don't open up a few holes. Let's finish this first. ~~~~~~~~~Although I also like the others, it's really hard to choose~~~~~~~~~~~~~``````````````````````````````````````````
When I watched it, I felt like I was back in middle school again. I had a hazy but unforgettable first love, and I was deeply affected by it. Keep writing and give strong support to ING~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I like the beginning very much. It seems that few romance writers are so bold. The female pig's feet are already 30 years old, but I like it.
The third grade of junior high school... Is a hazy period. Recalling many, many stories, I also chuckle at my naivety back then. But people are always growing. Without the naivety at the beginning, there would be no maturity today.
However, what I want to know is, has Tong Xiren really fallen in love with the female pig's feet at this time? ? It's understandable if it's a joke, but if it's true, it feels a bit sudden. There was no foreshadowing before.
I still marvel at the author's skillful use of pen and how his writing comes to life on the page.
Very good. But Mei, let me ask a small question. When you narrate the story of fifteen years ago, can you tone it a little greener and less mature? In this way, when you write the later part, when you come into contact with the current male protagonist, you can form a certain contrast, both in language and psychology. I think children in junior high school should not think so far and feel so deeply. Since first love is hazy. Leave the unforgettable memories behind!
Come on, cheer you up! !
Agree with the point below. She is a normal fifteen-year-old girl, so her thoughts seem a bit too mature.
A 15-year-old girl is still very vague about love, but her heartbeat can be written more deeply. Their happy time should be written in a brighter light. Haha, the female pig's feet feels even more sad when she recalls it.
In addition, the male pig's foot gave people the impression of being very assertive at the beginning, but under the pressure of the so-called classmates, he actually gave in. This seems inconsistent with what was written before. Mei Mei thinks about it again.
Littlepoint talks very well. A 15-year-old girl can be mature, so I have no objection, but I agree that Tong does not seem to be a person who can be manipulated. How can the class leaders convince him that Tong does seem to change a bit quickly.
There are three other people going out to play at night, why is there no king? I don't quite understand
In my humble opinion, I would like to think about it!
Very good~~~This article seems to be very promising~
Ye Zi really likes the atmosphere created by the 30-year-old part at the beginning.
Children are always the catalyst to create a warm atmosphere, with a touch of sadness, it feels great
I feel that the 15-year-old part is a little unnatural. The first acquaintance, heartbeat, and separation are all a bit stiff.
Especially Tong's first confession, it felt very abrupt...
In addition, I have the same point of view as those downstairs, happy days are too underweighted.
In fact, people's memory always specifically chooses beautiful things to remember. As time goes by, the pain will always fade away, but the good things will be deeply imprinted in the mind.
From this point of view, the adult's handling is a bit unbalanced~~
Get up, get up, I'm here to wake you up! What time is it over there?
It's time to return the favor, Mei, come on! Do you know how hard it is every time I find your article? I have to enter my name.
Come on! ! !
In anger, didn't you update?
Why didn't we see it? Update quickly, otherwise we will have to march in protest! ! ! :(
It looks good, it looks good, but don't open up a few holes. Let's finish this first. ~~~~~~~~~Although I also like the others, it's really hard to choose~~~~~~~~~~~~~``````````````````````````````````````````
When I watched it, I felt like I was back in middle school again. I had a hazy but unforgettable first love, and I was deeply affected by it. Keep writing and give strong support to ING~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I like the beginning very much. It seems that few romance writers are so bold. The female pig's feet are already 30 years old, but I like it. The third grade of junior high school... Is a hazy period. Recalling many, many stories, I also chuckle at my naivety back then. But people are always growing. Without the naivety at the beginning, there would be no maturity today. However, what I want to know is, has Tong Xiren really fallen in love with the female pig's feet at this time? ? It's understandable if it's a joke, but if it's true, it feels a bit sudden. There was no foreshadowing before.
I still marvel at the author's skillful use of pen and how his writing comes to life on the page.
Very good. But Mei, let me ask a small question. When you narrate the story of fifteen years ago, can you tone it a little greener and less mature? In this way, when you write the later part, when you come into contact with the current male protagonist, you can form a certain contrast, both in language and psychology. I think children in junior high school should not think so far and feel so deeply. Since first love is hazy. Leave the unforgettable memories behind! Come on, cheer you up! !
Agree with the point below. She is a normal fifteen-year-old girl, so her thoughts seem a bit too mature. A 15-year-old girl is still very vague about love, but her heartbeat can be written more deeply. Their happy time should be written in a brighter light. Haha, the female pig's feet feels even more sad when she recalls it. In addition, the male pig's foot gave people the impression of being very assertive at the beginning, but under the pressure of the so-called classmates, he actually gave in. This seems inconsistent with what was written before. Mei Mei thinks about it again.
Littlepoint talks very well. A 15-year-old girl can be mature, so I have no objection, but I agree that Tong does not seem to be a person who can be manipulated. How can the class leaders convince him that Tong does seem to change a bit quickly. There are three other people going out to play at night, why is there no king? I don't quite understand In my humble opinion, I would like to think about it!
Very good~~~This article seems to be very promising~ Ye Zi really likes the atmosphere created by the 30-year-old part at the beginning. Children are always the catalyst to create a warm atmosphere, with a touch of sadness, it feels great I feel that the 15-year-old part is a little unnatural. The first acquaintance, heartbeat, and separation are all a bit stiff. Especially Tong's first confession, it felt very abrupt... In addition, I have the same point of view as those downstairs, happy days are too underweighted. In fact, people's memory always specifically chooses beautiful things to remember. As time goes by, the pain will always fade away, but the good things will be deeply imprinted in the mind. From this point of view, the adult's handling is a bit unbalanced~~
Get up, get up, I'm here to wake you up! What time is it over there?
It's time to return the favor, Mei, come on! Do you know how hard it is every time I find your article? I have to enter my name. Come on! ! !
In anger, didn't you update? Why didn't we see it? Update quickly, otherwise we will have to march in protest! ! ! :(