Original: The year Jiang Chen committed the crime, Li Qinian followed Jiang Chen to avoid police pursuit. One time, Li Qinian said to Jiang Chen, "Jiang Chen, I'm tired, you go and surrender, there's no end to this..."
Ks (with some modifications): The midsummer breeze blew through the forest tops, and I stood under the tree, alone in a daze. When my parents divorced when I was a child, everyone laughed at me. You, and only you, stayed with me. So I gradually grew up in my grandma's house. (The original sentence is, In this way, I gradually grew up in my grandma's house.) And you were the only one who stayed with me.
You are no longer the Jiang Chen who would fight with the kids from the neighboring village who bullied me because of me. I am no longer the Li Qinian who liked to follow you and call me brother. You should have understood a few years ago. (Original text: You are no longer the high-spirited young man, and I am no longer the Li Qinian who has been following you. You should have understood it a few years ago)
ks: I grew up in darkness. I can't find light and I don't deserve to have light. But when I saw a young man standing under the sun, he saw me smiling at me, and the sun shone on him, as if his body was glowing. If you look carefully, there is a pair of clear and bright eyes under the thin eyebrows. There is a mole under the corner of the right eye, and the nose is high. He is very good-looking. At that moment, I seemed to see light, and he illuminated me like a beam of light. "Hello, my name is Jiang Chen." His voice was as soft as water, which immediately touched my heartstrings.
OK, this article is be. The villain survives to the end, which is a tragedy. Emmm, please support me. I just opened the article.
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