Many years later, in her message to her descendants, Dongyue wrote:
"If you walk in the dark,
Silent and nameless.
Looking up, there is no light on the road ahead, and there is no daylight.
Looking back, every step was soaked in blood...
Then please keep going.
Because the night is where you sleep and where the dawn will eventually rise. "
For her, that long dark night buried her lover and youth, but it also gave her new life.
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Highlight note:
1. Settings
This article is an if line world view, which is different from the original work.
To highlight the point, Bourbon is a Black character.
There are many conspiracy theories, Black is epic-level strengthened, individual characters within the Red team switch to Black, and Gin is a childhood nightmare.
Brothers Zhu Fu have private backgrounds.
There is no Dream of Red Mansions, Akai's parents are the background, there is no role of Hideyoshi, and Akai Shuichi and Miyano Akemi are not cousins.
There is no character named Ooka Momiji.
Mao Lilan and Haiyuan Ai are based on their early characters.
Kudo Shinichi is a perfect boy who is just, gentle, witty and intelligent.
2. In style
It's an undercover story, the heroine is on the red side, and there's a plot of reasoning and intellectual fighting, which is quite exciting.
It's not a story about strong women, it's not a cool story, and it's not realistic. The heroine is not perfect, and she's not a genius with high IQ. If you want to see a perfect and awesome heroine, please don't click in.
It's not a relief story, there are important characters dying and there are a lot of knives.
But evil cannot prevail against good, and in the end, the organization will be destroyed.
3. Emotional line
There is a mixture of sweetness and cruelty, love and hate, and the Shura scene in the later stages is tragic.
Judging from the weight, all three of the whiskey group are male protagonists, and they all have a lot of emotional scenes with the female protagonist.
Mine clearance warning:
The minefields include but are not limited to the above. In view of the fact that many readers have many minefields and do not know when they will be touched. Readers who need to clear mines please do not click in. Thank you for your cooperation.
Free articles that don't make money, purely for love. Unpopular themes, private works, outstanding personal style, not of universal value, nor in line with mainstream aesthetics. Fans from the niche community are welcome to share their thoughts.
The author does not want to improve his writing skills, nor does he need heat and attention. He declines all writing guidance and suggestions, and also declines all nitpicking. Thank you for your tolerance.
Purpose: Carry out one's own justice
Reader comments
This is the most complete background fanfic I have ever seen. There is no pulling or stepping, as if the frown and smile appear on the paper, almost completely depicting their appearance in my heart. Pain, struggle, tenderness and detachment, I saw the best Dongyue, the best scenery, bourbon, and the best Mr. Akai. This is the meaning of fan works. Thanks to the author for allowing me to glimpse the spring sun of another world in the emptiness of life.
The teacher is really great. I feel sorry for you when I see you in your state. I believe that after 25 years, you must have regained your courage for life and love for writing. Each of your articles is very delicate. The characters are not blindly black and white, but have a very layered three-dimensional image. The shaping of each relationship is also very delicate. Whether it is foreshadowing or the conception of the main line of emotions, I even feel that it is close to the 73 original work (similar to "Flower Song")
I will embrace every sister with a highly sensitive personality, because I am also highly sensitive, and because I know how sincere and fragile many highly sensitive personalities are inside. The irresponsible and casual words of others, and the love they just throw away, are bullets to high sensitivity. High sensitivity is often accompanied by excessive self-requirements and excessively strict self-blame, saturation and fatigue, and also has innate empathy and imagination talents. Don't think about it, don't think about it, don't care. Whether other people's thoughts are hell or dust on the roadside has nothing to do with you. Hug.
The writing is quite good. I have too high standards for myself, so I wrote this article.
It's a really great article. I would like to thank the teacher for writing such a beautiful and moving text. The whole article is written in one go, without any sluggishness at all. The characters are three-dimensional and charming. I can feel the teacher's in-depth thinking from it. I am deeply impressed. I am still thinking about these living characters. Thank you so much, teacher, wow, wow, wow, it's hard to describe how I feel now, everyone please come and watch——! Don't miss such an excellent work.
Finished reading it in one sitting. Thank you so much for bringing such an excellent article.
I really like the bourbon line in this article. The entanglement and pain, sobriety and sinking, love and hate, justice and sin are intertwined. It is clear that one loves deeply but chooses to hurt, and one clearly hates but chooses to protect. Such a contradictory, paranoid, and loveless criminal bourbon is really touching.
I like this book very much. The author understands each character very well, which is very surprising, and the plot is smooth and reasonable. This is one of the best fan stories I have read about Ke Tongli. I like the characters written by the author very much, and I like the protagonist's delicate emotions. This is a very good work. The author's hard work and efforts are clearly reflected in the work, so there is such an excellent work. I wish everyone who loves words, both the author and the reader,
It's a very, very, very nice fanfic, it fits the original characters very well, the writing is very good, and the emotions are extremely delicate. It's very enjoyable to read the plans one after another and all the detailed foreshadowing. I have always been unhappy that such a beautiful Xiaolan was forcibly deceived and kept in the dark. In this book, Lanke did not recognize each other for a long time. It was very good. Compared with the protection of being deceived and forced to separate, Xiaolan should want to know the truth and silently protect and provide help. It is equivalent to standing with Shinichi to fight together instead of being protected behind him. The three male protagonists still like the emotional line with Bourbon. The intertwining of love and hate is unforgettable. The love born in lies and falsehoods is like a crystal clear bubble destined to burst, which makes people have endless aftertaste. In the middle, the heroine feels sorry for Toru Amuro and hopes that she will do better than Jingguang when she meets Bourbon as a child. This is also a reflection of the heroine's initiative. I accept you in the darkness as long as you are willing to go with me. I can ignore your past and just want to be with you. It has nothing to do with Bourbon's betrayal of me in the end. As long as you have the same purpose, they are both willing to accept each other's "stains". Unfortunately, it is a fantasy after all. It is destined that the two sides will go astray in the end, but I also imagine that if the heroine opens her heart and tells Bourbon about her feelings for him and her future plans for the two of them, and if Bourbon can change earlier (referring to the sacrificial view of love that does not want anything but to be with the heroine in the end), they may not be a pair of beauties under the sun. Hey, the beauty who loves to be involuntarily breaks through the environment settings to embrace freedom. It is a pity. It is precisely the many unspoken regrets and regrets between the heroine and Bourbon that make it even more heart-wrenching and endearing. All in all, it is very well written. I am very happy to come across such a novel with both writing and plot online this year [hug] Thank you.
Baby my baby! Hug! Maybe you can read a lot in just a few minutes or ten, but polishing the idea takes time, passion and thought. I really, really like this! Thanks for your hard work! Thank you very much too, madam! Huge hugs to my wife! (Especially because 996 can make a social animal who has felt the same for so long shed tears)
Thank you for writing this article
The teacher's writing is really good [Sahua] I hope the teacher will take good care of himself and be happy every day
Very well written ma'am! ! ! This is the first time I have seen such a well-written drama! ! !
Superbly written! Big
Very good, very detailed writing
Thank you, thank you for creating this wonderful story
Tonic medicine hurts teeth qwqqqq, teacher, please come back, teacher
Thank you [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Thank you for your hard work! ! ! !
Super pretty! The logic also feels very smooth. Thanks again to my wife for power generation for love [spread hands]
I am not very good at narration and description, so I may not be able to give any touching praise or reply; while the works of the paper dance teacher are exactly the opposite. The deep depression, the psychological pull of being an undercover agent, the inability to extricate myself and the helplessness of being a Bourbon... Every chapter, every paragraph, every sentence hit my heart.
I really like the teacher's works, and this is just to express my strong love. Thank you teacher for bringing such a touching story.
Finished with flowers. The extra chapter is good, and forms a perfect closed loop with the main text. At least in the world of the text, they will live together forever.
What a great story! ! !
I knew it! I knew that aunt would be a disaster if she didn't deal with it!
This is the most complete background fanfic I have ever seen. There is no pulling or stepping, as if the frown and smile appear on the paper, almost completely depicting their appearance in my heart. Pain, struggle, tenderness and detachment, I saw the best Dongyue, the best scenery, bourbon, and the best Mr. Akai. This is the meaning of fan works. Thanks to the author for allowing me to glimpse the spring sun of another world in the emptiness of life.
The teacher is really great. I feel sorry for you when I see you in your state. I believe that after 25 years, you must have regained your courage for life and love for writing. Each of your articles is very delicate. The characters are not blindly black and white, but have a very layered three-dimensional image. The shaping of each relationship is also very delicate. Whether it is foreshadowing or the conception of the main line of emotions, I even feel that it is close to the 73 original work (similar to "Flower Song")
I will embrace every sister with a highly sensitive personality, because I am also highly sensitive, and because I know how sincere and fragile many highly sensitive personalities are inside. The irresponsible and casual words of others, and the love they just throw away, are bullets to high sensitivity. High sensitivity is often accompanied by excessive self-requirements and excessively strict self-blame, saturation and fatigue, and also has innate empathy and imagination talents. Don't think about it, don't think about it, don't care. Whether other people's thoughts are hell or dust on the roadside has nothing to do with you. Hug.
The writing is quite good. I have too high standards for myself, so I wrote this article.
It's a really great article. I would like to thank the teacher for writing such a beautiful and moving text. The whole article is written in one go, without any sluggishness at all. The characters are three-dimensional and charming. I can feel the teacher's in-depth thinking from it. I am deeply impressed. I am still thinking about these living characters. Thank you so much, teacher, wow, wow, wow, it's hard to describe how I feel now, everyone please come and watch——! Don't miss such an excellent work.
Finished reading it in one sitting. Thank you so much for bringing such an excellent article. I really like the bourbon line in this article. The entanglement and pain, sobriety and sinking, love and hate, justice and sin are intertwined. It is clear that one loves deeply but chooses to hurt, and one clearly hates but chooses to protect. Such a contradictory, paranoid, and loveless criminal bourbon is really touching.
I like this book very much. The author understands each character very well, which is very surprising, and the plot is smooth and reasonable. This is one of the best fan stories I have read about Ke Tongli. I like the characters written by the author very much, and I like the protagonist's delicate emotions. This is a very good work. The author's hard work and efforts are clearly reflected in the work, so there is such an excellent work. I wish everyone who loves words, both the author and the reader,
It's a very, very, very nice fanfic, it fits the original characters very well, the writing is very good, and the emotions are extremely delicate. It's very enjoyable to read the plans one after another and all the detailed foreshadowing. I have always been unhappy that such a beautiful Xiaolan was forcibly deceived and kept in the dark. In this book, Lanke did not recognize each other for a long time. It was very good. Compared with the protection of being deceived and forced to separate, Xiaolan should want to know the truth and silently protect and provide help. It is equivalent to standing with Shinichi to fight together instead of being protected behind him. The three male protagonists still like the emotional line with Bourbon. The intertwining of love and hate is unforgettable. The love born in lies and falsehoods is like a crystal clear bubble destined to burst, which makes people have endless aftertaste. In the middle, the heroine feels sorry for Toru Amuro and hopes that she will do better than Jingguang when she meets Bourbon as a child. This is also a reflection of the heroine's initiative. I accept you in the darkness as long as you are willing to go with me. I can ignore your past and just want to be with you. It has nothing to do with Bourbon's betrayal of me in the end. As long as you have the same purpose, they are both willing to accept each other's "stains". Unfortunately, it is a fantasy after all. It is destined that the two sides will go astray in the end, but I also imagine that if the heroine opens her heart and tells Bourbon about her feelings for him and her future plans for the two of them, and if Bourbon can change earlier (referring to the sacrificial view of love that does not want anything but to be with the heroine in the end), they may not be a pair of beauties under the sun. Hey, the beauty who loves to be involuntarily breaks through the environment settings to embrace freedom. It is a pity. It is precisely the many unspoken regrets and regrets between the heroine and Bourbon that make it even more heart-wrenching and endearing. All in all, it is very well written. I am very happy to come across such a novel with both writing and plot online this year [hug] Thank you.
Baby my baby! Hug! Maybe you can read a lot in just a few minutes or ten, but polishing the idea takes time, passion and thought. I really, really like this! Thanks for your hard work! Thank you very much too, madam! Huge hugs to my wife! (Especially because 996 can make a social animal who has felt the same for so long shed tears)
Thank you for writing this article
The teacher's writing is really good [Sahua] I hope the teacher will take good care of himself and be happy every day
Very well written ma'am! ! ! This is the first time I have seen such a well-written drama! ! !
Superbly written! Big
Very good, very detailed writing
Thank you, thank you for creating this wonderful story
Tonic medicine hurts teeth qwqqqq, teacher, please come back, teacher
Thank you [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Thank you for your hard work! ! ! !
Super pretty! The logic also feels very smooth. Thanks again to my wife for power generation for love [spread hands]
I am not very good at narration and description, so I may not be able to give any touching praise or reply; while the works of the paper dance teacher are exactly the opposite. The deep depression, the psychological pull of being an undercover agent, the inability to extricate myself and the helplessness of being a Bourbon... Every chapter, every paragraph, every sentence hit my heart. I really like the teacher's works, and this is just to express my strong love. Thank you teacher for bringing such a touching story.
Finished with flowers. The extra chapter is good, and forms a perfect closed loop with the main text. At least in the world of the text, they will live together forever.
What a great story! ! !
I knew it! I knew that aunt would be a disaster if she didn't deal with it!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so sweet