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Li Qiu is the most difficult person to pursue in the art department.
After she broke up with her boyfriend of four years in her junior year, she was pursued by Qi Zhun, a biology major.
Once I met a father and son suffering from cancer on the bus, and she gave him all the snacks she had just bought.
The students from the same school sitting next to him were Qizhun.
He was wearing a black hat with the brim so low that his face could barely be seen clearly, giving him a cold temperament.
He just had a cold expression, and after the other party passed by, he quietly stuffed the hundred-dollar bills into the father and son's bags.
After noticing Li Qiu's gaze.
Qi Huai raised his head straight and looked at her without smiling.
"Aren't you afraid that this is fake?" A friend asked.
He glanced at the other person and said casually, "Just think of it as doing something good."
He spent a month and nine days chasing her.
I have seen you hundreds of times in every unknown corner.
HE men chasing women
Secret love comes true
Concept: sun and moon
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Finished spreading flowers, make a little comment here
First of all, this article is very stream-of-consciousness, and many things require the reader to figure things out in order to understand. This is related to the author's perspective. Many times something happens suddenly without any warning, and the matter is not explained clearly, like the male protagonist being beaten by the second male protagonist. In fact, this It should be a good conflict point, but the author's writing is too fragmented. Before one person's perspective is completed, he jumps to another person's perspective, and then immediately switches to the next perspective. This makes the male protagonist's beating abrupt, the school's protection of the male counterpart abrupt, and the female protagonist's handling of these matters is very inexplicable.
Secondly, there is too little interaction. Let the characters speak more and use actions to write the characters. The conflict written will be more three-dimensional and the characters will be fuller.
Then, the whole novel is too scattered, and there are no more obvious clues to intersperse the novel. When I read it, I moved with a rake and moved with a broom! When I read it, I often feel that each chapter is like writing a novel. Most of them start with the mood of the heroine or the hero, and what happens in the middle (the things are not clearly written yet) seem to have been done and nothing has been done. As a result, each chapter of the entire novel is very independent and has no sense of connection. Personally, I think it would be better if the author could add some specific time in it, using specific time to make it clearer.
Also, the author writes about really good people, with very upright views, and the reading is very practical. The psychological activities of the characters are so exciting that it makes people dream back to their college days.
Finally, about me, this novel was recommended by dy. Com.
"I read a novel in Jinjiang this year with a very upright outlook. The male protagonist in "Let Him Fall" has an upright outlook. You should read it. The male and female protagonists of this book both work very hard and are very close to reality. This book is so ordinary that it makes you feel that campus literature should be like this." These are the original words of the tweet. I would like to thank the kind person who tweeted for allowing me to read this novel that has no flaws. It is indeed what the kind people said. This is the best version of campus literature.
I hope my wife will continue to work hard and write better and better stories. I am lucky to see such a beautiful story on New Year's Day in 2023.
It feels like there are a lot of word order problems
I think it's quite good-looking and more relevant to real life. There are very few people writing this kind of article nowadays.
The sky in the small theater was completely empty.
I'm really speechless. How much do you want to be popular? If you want to be popular, you have to work hard on your own instead of commenting on things that have nothing to do with you on Xiaohongshu, okay?
Because Qi didn't express anything, Li thought he was cold-blooded? Why can't it be that other people also have their own difficulties. I had a hard time reading the sentences in the article and couldn't understand them at all.
Why do junior high school classmates explain to you?
I feel like there is too much psychological description in the first half, like 25%
The pacing is a bit hard to comment on. The advantage is that the plot is very detailed and realistic, but the disadvantage is that it is okay as a pain literature and a bit sadistic when viewed as a web novel. The presence of the male protagonist in the first few chapters is 0. Since the ex is an ex, there is no need for all kinds of flashbacks and NPC profiles to describe this expired relationship in 360 degrees. Maybe the author is saying goodbye to a certain period of his past, but as a reader, he doesn't want to deal with such a complicated line for this passerby. Hopefully the next book will be better plot wise. Try to keep the conflict clean and explosive, and not full of wet emotions.
This is really the most unlikeable male protagonist I have ever seen. He is too simple and kind. He brings cakes to the heroine, but he actually puts them in black garbage bags! But I think he is very cool, very cool!
Ps. Actually, it made me feel a little uncomfortable watching it. The scene change was too sudden and strange. I was confused and didn't know what was going on. Then there are quite a few typos, which probably affect the reading experience a bit, but the character design is particularly great.
"Because of Guo Qi's problem." "Catch a big bug for the author~
Because of the issue of alignment.
It's great that the male protagonist is so romantic!
It's an ordinary article, but there are many sentences that impressed me deeply. I like it! It's just that sometimes it's a bit unintelligible to read. I hope the author can improve his word choice and sentence making skills.
Finished spreading flowers, make a little comment here First of all, this article is very stream-of-consciousness, and many things require the reader to figure things out in order to understand. This is related to the author's perspective. Many times something happens suddenly without any warning, and the matter is not explained clearly, like the male protagonist being beaten by the second male protagonist. In fact, this It should be a good conflict point, but the author's writing is too fragmented. Before one person's perspective is completed, he jumps to another person's perspective, and then immediately switches to the next perspective. This makes the male protagonist's beating abrupt, the school's protection of the male counterpart abrupt, and the female protagonist's handling of these matters is very inexplicable. Secondly, there is too little interaction. Let the characters speak more and use actions to write the characters. The conflict written will be more three-dimensional and the characters will be fuller. Then, the whole novel is too scattered, and there are no more obvious clues to intersperse the novel. When I read it, I moved with a rake and moved with a broom! When I read it, I often feel that each chapter is like writing a novel. Most of them start with the mood of the heroine or the hero, and what happens in the middle (the things are not clearly written yet) seem to have been done and nothing has been done. As a result, each chapter of the entire novel is very independent and has no sense of connection. Personally, I think it would be better if the author could add some specific time in it, using specific time to make it clearer. Also, the author writes about really good people, with very upright views, and the reading is very practical. The psychological activities of the characters are so exciting that it makes people dream back to their college days. Finally, about me, this novel was recommended by dy. Com. "I read a novel in Jinjiang this year with a very upright outlook. The male protagonist in "Let Him Fall" has an upright outlook. You should read it. The male and female protagonists of this book both work very hard and are very close to reality. This book is so ordinary that it makes you feel that campus literature should be like this." These are the original words of the tweet. I would like to thank the kind person who tweeted for allowing me to read this novel that has no flaws. It is indeed what the kind people said. This is the best version of campus literature. I hope my wife will continue to work hard and write better and better stories. I am lucky to see such a beautiful story on New Year's Day in 2023.
It feels like there are a lot of word order problems
I think it's quite good-looking and more relevant to real life. There are very few people writing this kind of article nowadays.
The sky in the small theater was completely empty.
I'm really speechless. How much do you want to be popular? If you want to be popular, you have to work hard on your own instead of commenting on things that have nothing to do with you on Xiaohongshu, okay?
Because Qi didn't express anything, Li thought he was cold-blooded? Why can't it be that other people also have their own difficulties. I had a hard time reading the sentences in the article and couldn't understand them at all.
Why do junior high school classmates explain to you?
I feel like there is too much psychological description in the first half, like 25%
The pacing is a bit hard to comment on. The advantage is that the plot is very detailed and realistic, but the disadvantage is that it is okay as a pain literature and a bit sadistic when viewed as a web novel. The presence of the male protagonist in the first few chapters is 0. Since the ex is an ex, there is no need for all kinds of flashbacks and NPC profiles to describe this expired relationship in 360 degrees. Maybe the author is saying goodbye to a certain period of his past, but as a reader, he doesn't want to deal with such a complicated line for this passerby. Hopefully the next book will be better plot wise. Try to keep the conflict clean and explosive, and not full of wet emotions.
This is really the most unlikeable male protagonist I have ever seen. He is too simple and kind. He brings cakes to the heroine, but he actually puts them in black garbage bags! But I think he is very cool, very cool! Ps. Actually, it made me feel a little uncomfortable watching it. The scene change was too sudden and strange. I was confused and didn't know what was going on. Then there are quite a few typos, which probably affect the reading experience a bit, but the character design is particularly great.
"Because of Guo Qi's problem." "Catch a big bug for the author~ Because of the issue of alignment.
It's great that the male protagonist is so romantic!
It's an ordinary article, but there are many sentences that impressed me deeply. I like it! It's just that sometimes it's a bit unintelligible to read. I hope the author can improve his word choice and sentence making skills.