[The first completed article, novice in writing, please proceed with caution~]
Introduction to this article:
The queen of the sea, Xu Chaojiu, disguised herself as the eldest sister of a cultivator's favorite novel. The eldest sister's private life was chaotic and lustful. In the end, she was tortured to death because she coveted a certain harem of the heroine. After traveling through time, Xu Chaojiu needs to capture the four children of destiny in the book in order to escape the fate of the original owner.
The ones she wants to conquer are: the Celestial Sword Master who had to accept the original owner as his apprentice due to the kindness of his parents;
The young demon master who hides his identity and is adopted as a spiritual beast by the heroine;
The cruel ghost king of the underworld who regards human life as nothing;
The romantic prince who fell into a bloody prison during the day;
After Xu Chaojiu traveled through time, she discovered that her master was indifferent to her, that the young demon master followed the heroine and had the same hatred for her, and that the ghost king took action with his killing move...
Okay, okay, let's play like this, right?
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Facing the elder's accusation that she was treasonous to Master Xiao Xiang, Xu Chaojiu gently hooked Qing Leng Jian Zun's fingertips: "Can't you like Master?"
The young master of the demon clan was teasing her maliciously. She looked seriously and slowly came closer: "Brother, why is your face so red?"
The young ghost king approaches for his sister with ulterior motives. She saves her sister for him with a smile and tears, and gives him a kiss on his eyes. (Bushi)
The prince fell into a demon and lost his mind. She entered the demon prison alone and surrounded the blood prison demon who was killing everyone: "Husband, I finally found you!"
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Just when Xu Chaojiu completed her strategy and was about to retire, the moment her soul left her body, a force pulled her back, and she happened to look into the eyes of a young man who seemed charming but full of anger.
The young man saw her lowering her eyes slightly, and the anger on her face turned into moist and red eyes.
Xu Chaojiu: Why do I think he is seducing me?
World Consciousness: You are thinking too much, this is a SSS level dangerous person, he wants to destroy the world!
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Male protagonist's perspective:
Gong Shangju has endless life, supreme magic power, and the most compassionate and gentle nature.
He is regarded as a god by people, a being who should not be messed with.
But no one knew that the gods had inner demons and were already tired of this world. So he took out his evil soul and placed it in the four corners of the world in an attempt to destroy the world.
Later, the evil spirit fell in love with a woman and lost all his aggression.
Later, Gong Shangju followed the woman, watching her wandering among each evil spirit with a sweet smile and a burning look of pity. However, every time she came closer or took a breath, he felt the same as the evil spirit.
Realizing that she was about to leave, the obscure feelings in the darkest corner of my heart grew wildly, and those cold eyes finally couldn't hold it back.
He changed back to his original appearance, his cheeks were slightly red, and the tip of his tail was curled around her waist: "Where are you going? Huh?"
-The heroine is the most beautiful. Although the Shura field is late, she will definitely arrive.
Reading guide:
Xiong Jing + Shura Field, non-quick travel.
The male protagonist does not appear much in the early stage and focuses on strategy in the early stage. (Highlight)
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Intention: Live an active life.
Reader comments
It does feel much smoother after the modification.
It does feel much smoother after the modification.