*The main text is finished, the extras will be randomly dropped.
*Download this book to fill in the old pit next door, and if you don't accept it, fuck the beautiful little sun female general* The sick and weak fishing type beauty prime minister, it won't be very long, the copy is below, it is recommended to eat selectively
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Copywriting of this article:
Voda Planet, a chaotic place without any jurisdiction.
Even before he is divided, he can fight all over the Voda Star Arena without a single opponent. He can be called a walking humanoid ferocious beast. Until one day, the mecha that had always existed in fantasy appeared in front of us.
"Want to get it? If you go to school in the Federation, I'll get it for you."
She didn't want to give in, but it was really cool to fly a mecha.
Hateful!
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In the Star Network, the newly divided opponent casually pressed the beautiful and beautiful arena opponent to the ground and rubbed it.
On the opening day of the Federal Military Academy, she had perfect marks in combat but had just learned how to enter the cockpit of a mecha. She casually looked at the freshman representative on the stage, the beautiful and recognized top Alpha from the Federation family, and smiled at her.
???
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Voda is a lightless planet, with only outdated artificial light sources hanging in the sky all year round.
The first time I saw Qi Zuo, I had only one thought - so bright.
Qi Zuo has been a proud man of heaven since he was a child, until he saw a man tearing apart the star beast with his own hands and killing everyone.
Hiss - so handsome.
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Later, when she was determined to treat the mecha as her wife, she never expected that the bloody person would be by her side.
She didn't even expect that the good brother who had agreed to fight together in the stars and the sea would change his feelings for her. Even though he was drunk with pheromones, he was still passionate. Bidong failed to express his love and was grabbed by her, almost dislocating his arm.
The other party was so angry that he cried on the spot.
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Copywriting for the hole to be filled next door:
Rumor has it that General Zhaode has three heads and six arms, and is capable of carrying a cauldron. If he shouts in front of the enemy's formation, the enemy will retreat; if he shouts twice, the enemy will flow with the current; if he shouts three times, the Dangyang Bridge will be broken.
Jing. Party. Zhao:???
I'm not, I didn't, don't talk nonsense.
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Since Jing Zhao disguised herself as a woman and entered the military camp, she was prepared to live alone for the rest of her life.
Jing Zhao: I'm afraid of marriage, so thank you for the invitation.
Prime Minister Gu: As a gift in a prosperous and peaceful age, I will marry you.
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What Jingzhao loved in his life: songs of prosperous times, guns in hand, and beauties smiling.
The love of Gu Zhang's life: Zhaozhao.
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Jingzhao:
The first time I met Mr. Gu: Oh, this handsome man from some family.
→After contact: I can't afford to offend.
→Then: die under the peonies (…)
→Finally: You have to pick a day to snatch him home.
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PS: 1. As in the title, female A and male O, highlight lightning protection.
2. ABO settings are private, just to satisfy xp, have a weak sense of existence, gender equality, and freedom of orientation.
3. Seriously activate the mecha and fight monsters, and the emotional line will be slow to warm up in the early stage. The male protagonist Qi Zuo (zuo, four tones) is a beautiful woman with silver hair and golden eyes, but she has the attribute of the sun.
4. Be relaxed, the world is beautiful, and there are more good people in the series.
5. I am happy to stream, so I will only write what I want to write. All opinions are very subjective. If you don't like it, don't enter. You can discuss it. You are welcome to catch bugs. But please click the cross to exit if you would like to criticize others.
6. Intermittent decay
7. The preview of "Psychological Cultivation" is available next door: The nature of the character is ridiculous/Gentle and powerful when serious/The female protagonist who is sober in the world*can turn into a cat and loves to act coquettishly/It looks good when she smiles/The male protagonist of Sword Ancestor, if you are interested, you can join
Mission: Unquenchable passion, unity and friendship
Reader comments
I don't read many of the author's articles, so I read this one when it was recommended on the homepage. It wasn't finished at the time, and there were more emotional dramas. The attack and reception attributes and background settings were very interesting to me, so I have been looking forward to the interaction between the two of them. Later, I saved my time and waited for the end to read it in one sitting. I still feel a little disappointed... Looking at the writing and the first 1/3, I always thought that it would either be a small love story or a half-hearted plot. As a result, after watching it, I realized that it was purely a plot flow, and the sense of separation from the emotional drama became more and more obvious. The plot flow does not necessarily need to have a lot of emotional scenes, but it should be refined. There are clearly a few points of emotional development for Gong and Shou that are already written, which is the icing on the cake. For example, the scene of saving Shou and Shou in a pool of blood at the end was rushed through, so until the end, I was a little confused about how the two people developed into love. The drugging part at the end of the plot was good, and the twist in Zhao Run was also good. It's a pity that it can't take into account the plot and the emotional drama. However, with this word count, it feels like the plot is not written carefully, and it feels like an outline. Personally, I think it would be OK to conservatively expand it by another 100,000 words. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more.
I don't read many of the author's articles, so I read this one when it was recommended on the homepage. It wasn't finished at the time, and there were more emotional dramas. The attack and reception attributes and background settings were very interesting to me, so I have been looking forward to the interaction between the two of them. Later, I saved my time and waited for the end to read it in one sitting. I still feel a little disappointed... Looking at the writing and the first 1/3, I always thought that it would either be a small love story or a half-hearted plot. As a result, after watching it, I realized that it was purely a plot flow, and the sense of separation from the emotional drama became more and more obvious. The plot flow does not necessarily need to have a lot of emotional scenes, but it should be refined. There are clearly a few points of emotional development for Gong and Shou that are already written, which is the icing on the cake. For example, the scene of saving Shou and Shou in a pool of blood at the end was rushed through, so until the end, I was a little confused about how the two people developed into love. The drugging part at the end of the plot was good, and the twist in Zhao Run was also good. It's a pity that it can't take into account the plot and the emotional drama. However, with this word count, it feels like the plot is not written carefully, and it feels like an outline. Personally, I think it would be OK to conservatively expand it by another 100,000 words. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more.