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Purpose: To generate electricity for love
Reader comments
It's been tied for two days, let me share some personal feelings. The author's idea of the interaction between people and pets is very cute, and the plots and group characters are very rich, even a little too rich to the point of taking over the main role. Sometimes I don't even see Mumu for most of the chapter, and I feel like I can't control the plot line. Furthermore, the readership groups of cute pet e-sports and cute pet variety shows do not completely overlap. I read the previous comment by the author that everyone wants to get involved in cute pet e-sports movies and variety shows, but neither e-sports nor variety shows are particularly outstanding.
The single part can be improved. Your time travel writing at the beginning is too stiff (I was almost persuaded to quit), and it doesn't reflect your writing style at all. The sense of identity is not strong, and you repeatedly emphasize that you are a social animal who is used to being bullied. However, the appearance of staring at the phone and being addicted to cute pets and silly outer hats is more like a stupid college student who has just graduated and entered the workplace. After dressing up as a dog, his character is completely that of a child. Even if he emphasizes that changing into a dog affects his thinking, it feels a bit inconsistent. There are also "just got off work", "exiting the convenience store... Zebra crossing" and "remote road" whose logic is not fluent. Then the response after the collision was deleted, right? The driver called the insurance company to deal with it, but they didn't explain the reactions of all parties when the protagonist disappeared from the world? In short, your beginning looks like an industrial flow written by AI without allocated computing power.
It's been tied for two days, let me share some personal feelings. The author's idea of the interaction between people and pets is very cute, and the plots and group characters are very rich, even a little too rich to the point of taking over the main role. Sometimes I don't even see Mumu for most of the chapter, and I feel like I can't control the plot line. Furthermore, the readership groups of cute pet e-sports and cute pet variety shows do not completely overlap. I read the previous comment by the author that everyone wants to get involved in cute pet e-sports movies and variety shows, but neither e-sports nor variety shows are particularly outstanding. The single part can be improved. Your time travel writing at the beginning is too stiff (I was almost persuaded to quit), and it doesn't reflect your writing style at all. The sense of identity is not strong, and you repeatedly emphasize that you are a social animal who is used to being bullied. However, the appearance of staring at the phone and being addicted to cute pets and silly outer hats is more like a stupid college student who has just graduated and entered the workplace. After dressing up as a dog, his character is completely that of a child. Even if he emphasizes that changing into a dog affects his thinking, it feels a bit inconsistent. There are also "just got off work", "exiting the convenience store... Zebra crossing" and "remote road" whose logic is not fluent. Then the response after the collision was deleted, right? The driver called the insurance company to deal with it, but they didn't explain the reactions of all parties when the protagonist disappeared from the world? In short, your beginning looks like an industrial flow written by AI without allocated computing power.